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Re: Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not [#permalink]
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Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not only reached the Wimbledon singles finals an impressive 12 times, holding a record for the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9.
 holding a record for the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9
 holding a record of 9, the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon
 but she also holds a record of 9, the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon
 but she also, having won 9 women’s singles titles, holds a record at Wimbledon
 but she also holds a record for the most singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9


E is correct.

The record for is correct idiom here. A record of means a note of - take a record of class attendance.
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Re: Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not [#permalink]
Option E is missing the the word "women's" before singles titles. All other options have it. Wouldn't that change the original meaning of the sentence.
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Re: Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not [#permalink]
option E is the correct choice. But, what about the missing "women's". Crack700 correctly pointed it out. Even i have the same query.
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Re: Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not [#permalink]
I think that ALL 5 ans-choises are incorrect, because (E) does not look good because of SHE.
SHE is not needed here.

but she also holds a record for the most singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9.
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I think that ALL 5 ans-choises are incorrect, because (E) does not look good because of SHE.
SHE is not needed here.

but she also holds a record for the most singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9.


I agree with Financier.
This SC is weird, please provide the sourse of the question. I don't think this is from OG.

I have never ever seen that construction not only ..... but [] also to have some words between but and also and to be correct.
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Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not only reached the Wimbledon singles finals an impressive 12 times, holding a record for the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9.
 holding a record for the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9
 holding a record of 9, the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon
 but she also holds a record of 9, the most women’s singles titles won at Wimbledon
 but she also, having won 9 women’s singles titles, holds a record at Wimbledon
 but she also holds a record for the most singles titles won at Wimbledon: 9



I am no expert, but I believe "Not only... but she also..." is not wrong.
I think the answer is D because it is the only answer where I did not see anything "wrong" (please correct me if I am wrong)
I think E uses ":" incorrectly, as someone stated above, and C looks poorly constructed. Its questions like these that ruin a perfectly flowing GMAT verbal test :P. What is the OA and explanation?
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Re: Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not [#permalink]
I pick E. Please post the OA. Tks
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Re: Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not [#permalink]
Why is : wrong, its an equivalent of = in math
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I think the part of the sentence before the ":" has to be complete.
For example, srjaidev is going to get dinged from all the schools he applied to: HBS, LBS, Stanford. :-D
Another example is - she holds a record at Wimbledon: most women's singles titles won.
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Czech-born American tennis player Martina Navratilova not only reached the Wimbledon singles finals an impressive 12 times, but she also holds a record for the most singles titles won at Wimbledon

the sentence is complee I suppose, the number is equivalent to 9, its ust an additional info? Am i missing something :-/



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