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# parallel modifiers - relative pronouns

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parallel modifiers - relative pronouns [#permalink]

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11 Sep 2012, 03:54
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Do we need to repeat the relative pronoun for the parallel modifiers modifying a single noun?

<noun> that <mod1> and that <mod2> blah

Is the highlighted essential in the above construction?
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http://gmatclub.com/forum/massive-collection-of-verbal-questions-sc-rc-and-cr-106195.html#p832142
http://gmatclub.com/forum/1001-ds-questions-file-106193.html#p832133
http://gmatclub.com/forum/gmat-prep-critical-reasoning-collection-106783.html
http://gmatclub.com/forum/how-to-get-6-0-awa-my-guide-64327.html
http://gmatclub.com/forum/how-to-get-6-0-awa-my-guide-64327.html?hilit=chineseburned

Kudos [?]: 42 [1], given: 38

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Re: parallel modifiers - relative pronouns [#permalink]

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11 Sep 2012, 10:49
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catfreak wrote:
Do we need to repeat the relative pronoun for the parallel modifiers modifying a single noun?

<noun> that <mod1> and that <mod2> blah

Is the highlighted essential in the above construction?
Hi catfreak,

Grammatically, the answer is "no." However, if the subordinate clause is <mod 1> is especially complex, you may need the second that for stylistic reasons to ensure the sentence reads naturally and clearly.
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Kudos [?]: 306 [3], given: 2

Manager
Joined: 05 Jul 2012
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Kudos [?]: 52 [0], given: 8

Location: India
Concentration: Finance, Strategy
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Re: parallel modifiers - relative pronouns [#permalink]

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11 Sep 2012, 10:52
catfreak wrote:
Do we need to repeat the relative pronoun for the parallel modifiers modifying a single noun?

<noun> that <mod1> and that <mod2> blah

Is the highlighted essential in the above construction?

Can you tell me, why all your kudos come from the same person?

Kudos [?]: 52 [0], given: 8

Manager
Joined: 20 Nov 2010
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Kudos [?]: 42 [0], given: 38

Re: parallel modifiers - relative pronouns [#permalink]

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11 Sep 2012, 20:14
mandyrhtdm wrote:
catfreak wrote:
Do we need to repeat the relative pronoun for the parallel modifiers modifying a single noun?

<noun> that <mod1> and that <mod2> blah

Is the highlighted essential in the above construction?

Can you tell me, why all your kudos come from the same person?

I have PM'd you as I request you, for the last time, to refrain from making any offensive and unsupported comments in public forum and, thus, spoiling the ongoing discussion.
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MGMAT 6 650 (51,31) on 31/8/11
MGMAT 1 670 (48,33) on 04/9/11
MGMAT 2 670 (47,34) on 07/9/11
MGMAT 3 680 (47,35) on 18/9/11
GMAT Prep1 680 ( 50, 31) on 10/11/11

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CR notes
http://gmatclub.com/forum/massive-collection-of-verbal-questions-sc-rc-and-cr-106195.html#p832142
http://gmatclub.com/forum/1001-ds-questions-file-106193.html#p832133
http://gmatclub.com/forum/gmat-prep-critical-reasoning-collection-106783.html
http://gmatclub.com/forum/how-to-get-6-0-awa-my-guide-64327.html
http://gmatclub.com/forum/how-to-get-6-0-awa-my-guide-64327.html?hilit=chineseburned

Kudos [?]: 42 [0], given: 38

Re: parallel modifiers - relative pronouns   [#permalink] 11 Sep 2012, 20:14
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