manhattan187 wrote:
In order to make skiing smoother, safer and
more enjoyable, a number of resorts have hired
consultants to design and sculpt the trails.
a) In order to make skiing smoother, safer and
more enjoyable, a number of resorts have hired
consultants
b) In order to make skiing smoother, safer, and more
enjoyable a number of consultants have been
hired by resorts
c) In the interest of making skiing smoother, safer,
and able to be enjoyed, a number of resorts have
hired consultants
d) To make skiing smoother, safer, so that you
can enjoy it, a number of resorts have hired
consultants
e) To make skiing smoother, also safer and
enjoyable, a number of resorts will have hired
consultants
Why not B or C?
My answer:
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AA] In order to make skiing smoother, safer and more enjoyable, a number of resorts have hired consultants.
B] In order to make skiing smoother, safer, and more enjoyable
a number of consultants have been hired by resorts.
Misplaced Modifier.
C] In the interest of making skiing smoother, safer,
and able to be enjoyed, a number of resorts have hired consultants.
Poor Grammatical construction.
D] To make skiing smoother, safer
, so that you can enjoy it, a number of resorts have hired consultants.
Poor Grammatical construction.
E] To make skiing smoother, also safer and enjoyable, a number of resorts
will have hired consultants.
Poor Grammatical construction and Tense Issue.
Feel free to correct me, if I am wrong anywhere.