manikmehta95 wrote:
Hey,
Please review my profile.
I am a 26yr old Indian Male candidate.
Academics:
10th: 85.5%
12th: 86%
U.G: Mechatronics engineering, Thapar university. 7.1/10 CGPA.
Work Experience: (Total: 4years to Present)
1. Tetra Pak (4 yrs to present): Joined Tetra Pak under a Future Talent programme as a Field service engineer.
Till now worked with companies like Amul, Coca-Cola, Dabur, Parle and various regional dairies by providing them critical support and making sure their operations are lean and able to deliver the promised quality.
Worked and promoted the use of future technologies like Hololens for augmented reality solutions to engineers +customers and predictive maintenance using industry 4.0 solutions.
2. Part of Cases over coffee global fellowship program November cohort: work along with MBB consultants on their real problem and support them in the solutions they are providing to their clients.
Awards and achievements:
1. Recognition for first 90ml packaging in the world commissioned in India for a new dairy alternative segment. With a business capability upwards of 400cr yearly.
2. Recognised in South Asian market as a proponent of worker safety awareness by clusters Leaders.
Extra curriculars:
1. State level basketball (U-19)
2. Pre-national level 10m Air Rifle shooter.
3. Participated in various formula student competition in college.
Purpose for ISB:
1. Want to shift into strategy consulting and technology consulting.
Thank you!
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Hey
manikmehta95!
To begin with, I must acknowledge the fact that you have remarkable achievements and accolades earned during your professional career, which can be the major highlight of your profile. Having said that, coming to your academics, your undergraduate GPA of 7.1 is certainly on the average front. However, I would like to clarify that for the MBA program more emphasis is laid on the GMAT score to assess your academic abilities. Thus you can easily overshadow your undergrad GPA with a strong GMAT score of 700+.
As for the work experience, 4 years of experience sets you comfortable for the MBA program. Furthermore, having notable recognition and achievements along with a decent brand name all work in your favour. However, here you should be cognizant of the fact that you will be competing with applicants hailing from much bigger brands like KPMG, Deloitte and EY. Thus, it becomes imperative that you talk about the major projects worked on, the values you have added and the learnings from these experiences. Moreover, to further strengthen your profile, you should mention how you went above and beyond your role and bring to light any quantifiable impacts created during these experiences.
As for the extracurricular activities, they are also an important aspect of your profile since they demonstrate varied skills and talents under your belt. However, the majority of your extracurricular accomplishments date back to college and high school, and it has been more than four years since you graduated. Here, you must note that Business Schools are more interested in your recent accomplishments and thus, it is critical to shedding light on your latest endeavours. Here you can talk about any CSR activities carried out by your organization or your association with any non-profit organization. You can expand on this by including any certification courses to demonstrate that you are constantly upgrading yourself.
Coming to the school that you are targeting, based on the information you've provided, ISB will fall under the Dream Category with a 40-50% chance of acceptance.
All things considered, in order to increase your chances of getting admitted to this school, you would need to ensure that you have a very strong application that highlights your strengths and overshadows your weaknesses. You need to showcase your journey, what makes you different from your peers, and how you are a great value addition to the school.
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