Please evaluate my profile, details as per your guidelines:
1) 2 years in consulting and analytics at BASES Nielsen in FMCG, Finance, CPG industry; 60+ projects for clients across the globe; fastest promotion, awards on global level.
2) 2 years at Nomura, in credit structuring.Due Deligence on syndicate loan deals, loan portfolio monitoring, credit derivatives pricing, structuring, risk ananlysis.
Again Fastest promotion (10 months), PnL generation of USD 61 million etc.. worked in singapore, hongkong for short time
3) 2008 IIT Bombay graduate, GPA : 7.5/10, PPO from Arcelor Mittal, Spain. Nielsen Job starts in March 2009 because of offer cancellation. 8 months gap.
4) GMAT: 700 - 4 attempts v-33,q-51 in previous attempts score was 680,690,650
4) Heavy stock market trader, index futures, stocks with portfolio of INR 2.2 Million;Strong network of international professionals, top 5% most viewed profile in Linkedin
5) Led NGO team in College, Led Internship team, Carrom Championship winner, Swimming winner, Intern in Australia. Currently working with a village council to set up a girl school, Worked to set up a family office in India in scrap trading & currently setting up a office in Dubai.
Few other highlights but as you said brevity is needed here,
Post MBA goal: portfolio manager/investment consulting
Target: INSEAD, LBS, Booth, Wharton, Columbia, Kelloggs (one year)
Infact INSEAD and LBS are dream schools (any chances at these)
You have a unique profile and you have a lot of points to talk about in your essays. you can differentiate yourself well in your essays provided you take the opportunity to exhibit all your unique strengths
INSEAD and LBS both the schools are well within you reach, you would be a good pick for INSEAD, but please exhibit your global exposure while submitting your essays at INSEAD
Booth and Columbia are also within reach, but you must be able to differentiate yourself. Wharton is a stretch, but if i were you, i would take my chances
All these top b-schools receive application from the best of the best candidates, you must be able to clearly demonstrate how better you are from the peers and the best way to do this is by exhibiting the same in your essays and reference
Hope this helps
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