shubham2312 wrote:
hi guys, I have a silly question regarding this sentence
that emotions, including those deemed personal or private is a social phenomenon
emotions is a noun as per my understanding
and including is a verb-ing modifier but whenever V-ing modifier is modifying a noun it should not be separated by the comma
kindly correct me where i am wrong.
shubham2312 , your question is not at all silly!
In fact, it's a very good question.
"including" is an exception to the rules that govern what you call V-ing modifiersV-ing modifiers are also called
present participles, participial modifiers, verbING, and __ING modifiers•
"including" always modifies a noun or noun-type word or phrase (I cannot think of a single exception)
•
including in this context belongs to the
"additive phrase" group.
Including is similar to the phrases
as well as,
in addition to, and
along with(1) Additive phrases modify nouns in that they add nouns to another noun.
-- In this sentence,
including adds
personal or private emotions to the general category
emotions-- Similar: Foods rich in the antioxidant lycopene,
including tomatoes and apricots, have been studied extensively.
(2) Additive phrases are not part of the subject itself.
-- Because additive phrases are not part of the subject itself, they often make verbs sound odd.
-- Correct:
Espen, along with Kristoffer,
travels frequently from Norway to France.
[singular subject, singular verb, despite the presence of two people in the sentence]
(3) Additive phrases often are defined as prepositions
-- Do not worry about the part of speech. Just remember that
"including" is an odd and exceptional ____ING modifier.
The pattern in this sentence is typical.". . . that
emotions,
including those deemed
personal or
private, are . . ."
plural noun + comma + INCLUDING + nouns/pronouns that belong to the same group as the plural noun
THIS post discusses additive phrases and uses "including" in one of the author's SC mock questions.
Hope that helps.