OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Since its invention in the 1940s, radiocarbon dating, which helps scientists in calculating the age of organic material, revolutionized archaeology and geology.
• Issues?
The word
since.
When
since is used as a preposition to introduce a specific time or date in the past, it is typically used with present perfect and past perfect tenses—and not simple past tense.
Since refers to a period of time that started at a specific point in the past and continues up until now (present perfect) or that continues up until another point in the past (past perfect).
Correct, past perfect: I had not seen my ailing great-aunt since 2015; she had grown thin and frail.Correct, present perfect: Since the military coup in February of 2021, brave people have fought for democracy. Wrong, past tense: Since he left the Republican party, Steve Schmidt loudly refused to tolerate anti-democratic proponents and supporters of the Big Lie. [correction: HAS loudly refused to tolerate . . .]
Wrong, present tense: Since yesterday, his health improves. [correction: . . . his health HAS improved]
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Since its invention in the 1940s, radiocarbon dating, which helps scientists in calculating the age of organic material, revolutionized archaeology and geology.
• verb tense error
The use of the simple past tense
revolutionized with
since is incorrect.
The sentence requires the present perfect tense
has revolutionized.ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) Radiocarbon dating, since its invention in the 1940s, helps scientists in calculating the age of organic material, revolutionizing archaeology and geology.
• Verb tense error
The use of the simple present tense
helps with
since is incorrect, because the action has been taking place over a period of time in the past as well its taking place now.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) Revolutionizing archaeology and geology since its invention in the 1940s, radiocarbon dating, which helps scientists in calculating the age of organic material.
• Fragment: the Case of the Missing Verb
→ No main verb exists for the subject
radiocarbon dating. We are left with a fragment
→ Any sentence with a relative clause (who-, which-, that-clause) will always have two verbs.
The relative pronoun (in this case,
which), "eats up" the verb "helps."
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) Since its invention in the 1940s, radiocarbon dating has revolutionized archaeology and geology, helping scientists in calculating the age of organic material.
• I do not see any errors.
→ The sentence uses the present perfect tense
has revolutionized with
since to describe the effect of radiocarbon dating from its invention in the 1940s to now.
→ The phrase that begins with
helping modifies the entire previous clause.
KEEP
Quote:
E) Radiocarbon dating, from its invention in the 1940s, has helped scientists in calculating the age of organic material, and in revolutionizing archaeology and geology.
• Diction: The word
from creates an awkward and unidiomatic sentence.
• Concision and meaning
→ The use of in revolutionizing either lengthens the sentence unnecessarily (compare to option D) or somewhat nonsensically suggests that scientists are doing two things: calculating and revolutionizing.
Scientists themselves have not been revolutionizing archaeology and geology "out of nowhere."
Radiocarbon dating, or the scientists' use of radiocarbon dating, has done so.
ELIMINATE E
The best answer is D.COMMENTSananya3 , it's been a little while—I am glad to "see" you.
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You work consistently and diligently.
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Almost all of these answers are superb.
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