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Re: Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security fo [#permalink]
The sentence has modifier issue:

* Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested [ “Since taking control of the capital” is incorrectly modifying the BBC reporter – Eliminate it]

* The BBC reporter says that, since taking control of the capital, security forces have arrested [Hold it]

* The BBC reporter, since taking control of the capital, says security forces [Changes the meaning of the sentence – eliminate it]

* Security forces, since taking control of the capital, have, the BBC reporter says, arrested [Split Present Prefect – Eliminate it]

* Security forces have arrested the BBC reporter since taking control of the capital [Changes the meaning - eliminate it]

Answer: B
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Re: Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security fo [#permalink]
B is the only one that doesnt change the meaning and has not modifier issues.
kyatin wrote:
Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested about 40 insurgents of the majority political group, killing one of them.

* Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested
* The BBC reporter says that, since taking control of the capital, security forces have arrested
* The BBC reporter, since taking control of the capital, says security forces
* Security forces, since taking control of the capital, have, the BBC reporter says, arrested
* Security forces have arrested the BBC reporter since taking control of the capital
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Re: Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security fo [#permalink]
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• Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested ---- misplaced modifier


* The BBC reporter says that, since taking control of the capital, security forces have arrested --- correct choice without modification error or split verb; The prepositional modifier phrase introduced by the preposition since duly modifies its noun the security forces. The modified can not be the reporteer since we don’t logically expect a reporter to take control of a capital; his job is to report.

* The BBC reporter, since taking control of the capital, says security forces --- The reporter did not take control----- misplaced modification
* Security forces, since taking control of the capital, have, the BBC reporter says, arrested --- the intrusion and insertion of the phrase --the BBC reporter says—
between have and arrested is ugly in the least, if not distorting the meaning

* Security forces have arrested the BBC reporter since taking control of the capital --- total muddle of the meaning
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Re: Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security fo [#permalink]
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kyatin wrote:
Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested about 40 insurgents of the majority political group, killing one of them.

A. Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested
B. The BBC reporter says that, since taking control of the capital, security forces have arrested
C. The BBC reporter, since taking control of the capital, says security forces
D. Security forces, since taking control of the capital, have, the BBC reporter says, arrested
E. Security forces have arrested the BBC reporter since taking control of the capital


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Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested about 40 insurgents of the majority political group, killing one of them.

A. Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security forces have arrested
B. The BBC reporter says that, since taking control of the capital, security forces have arrested
C. The BBC reporter, since taking control of the capital, says security forces
D. Security forces, since taking control of the capital, have, the BBC reporter says, arrested
E. Security forces have arrested the BBC reporter since taking control of the capital

This question requires clarification as to who took control of the capital. In the original sentence, it seems as if the BBC reporter took control; to fix the sentence, the acting party –security forces – must be clarified.
  1. This option splits the acting party, security forces, from the action, taking control of the capital.
  2. This option places the BBC reporter at the beginning of the sentence as the observing party and makes it clear that security forces have taken the capital.
  3. This option resolves the ambiguity of the original sentence, but incorrectly credits the BBC reporter with taking control of the capital.
  4. This option is unnecessarily wordy and even more confusing than the original.
  5. Insurgents, not the BBC reporter, were arrested by security forces.

Answer: B
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Re: Since taking control of the capital, the BBC reporter says security fo [#permalink]
E --- Poor reporter LOL.

In fairness it could happen


All jokes aside the answer is B
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