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Hi,

I am not able to come up with an essay for this topic.

The UC Davis MBA prepares innovative leaders for global impact. Give an example of a professional situation when your motivation made a difference in the outcome

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1. I am with my current company for 1.5 years . Does it have to be with this company ? Or could it be with my earlier companies. I am already giving answer to another essay based on my experience with current company

2. Could you guys give any example of situations that would go with this essay. It will help me more to figure out from my own experience.

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26 Jun 2012, 10:16
Your example can be either from your current job or previous job, but your story should illustrate how your role in a certain project contributed to a positive outcome.

Make sure your story should have the following 4 components :

1. Situation/ challenge
2 .Action( how you handled it?)
3. Outcome/result
4. Effect/ Significance ( what it means to you)

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