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# The American Heart Association has documented that the fatty

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The American Heart Association has documented that the fatty and highly processed foods of the basic American diet, along with the upsurge in smoking among women, were key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warn that recent increases in smoking among teenage girls show that the fashion for healthier living has not entirely reversed the deleterious trends of a half-century ago.

A) were key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warn that

B) that are the key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warn that

C) were key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warns that

D) that is the key factor in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warns that

E) was a key factor in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warns that
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02 Apr 2006, 10:06
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I think C too.

--The plural subject is "foods".. requres "were", a Plural verb.
-- X, along with Y, was/were --> takes the verb of X because "along with" doesn't form compound subject. Egs:

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-- Also ...American Heart Association .... needs warns.....
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01 Apr 2006, 19:46
C

It shud be WARNS

and multiple factors so were.

Whats the OA?
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01 Apr 2006, 21:51
I think here "the fatty and highly processed foods" is singular subject so

ans is "E"
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02 Apr 2006, 01:10
gmat_crack wrote:
I think here "the fatty and highly processed foods" is singular subject so

ans is "E"

True, but taken in consideration with an upsurge in smoking, the factors must be represented in the plural verb "were."

(C) stands.
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02 Apr 2006, 02:26
^ E ^

"The American Heart Association has documented that the fatty and highly processed foods of the basic American diet, along with the upsurge in smoking among women, was.."

>>Foods should be considered singular here.

When we say "along with ..", it does not make the subject plural:

Jane, along with Mary, is drinking coke.

>> Also we need "warns"
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02 Apr 2006, 02:44
selene wrote:
^ E ^

"The American Heart Association has documented that the fatty and highly processed foods of the basic American diet, along with the upsurge in smoking among women, was.."

>>Foods should be considered singular here.

When we say "along with ..", it does not make the subject plural:

Jane, along with Mary, is drinking coke.

>> Also we need "warns"

Nice call Selene. I overlooked the usage of "along."

Should be (E)
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02 Apr 2006, 02:51
sm176811 wrote:
Why is
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Foods
Singular?

Diet is singular. Foods are just a constituent of the diet.
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02 Apr 2006, 05:41
the subject is Foods so that it should be followed by plural.
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02 Apr 2006, 09:34
Very good question.

thourgh "and" comes between fatty and highly processed foods it is stil;la singular.

"Along with" also suggests that we need to look for a singular verb.

I will go for E
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02 Apr 2006, 10:25
It should be "C"

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02 Apr 2006, 20:17
giddi77 wrote:
I think C too.

--The plural subject is "foods".. requres "were", a Plural verb.
-- X, along with Y, was/were --> takes the verb of X because "along with" doesn't form compound subject. Egs:

giddi77, along with others, was confused by Prof's question
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Very good question!

Agree with C too. What is the OA?
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02 Apr 2006, 20:28
'C' it is. S/V agreement .

The American Heart Association has documented that the fatty and highly processed foods of the basic American diet, along with the upsurge in smoking among women, were key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warns that recent increases in smoking among teenage girls show that the fashion for healthier living has not entirely reversed the deleterious trends of a half-century ago.
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02 Apr 2006, 21:07
OA is C. well explained, so no need of OE.
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The American Heart Association has documented that the fatty and highly processed foods of the basic American diet, along with the upsurge in smoking among women, were key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warn that recent increases in smoking among teenage girls show that the fashion for healthier living has not entirely reversed the deleterious trends of a half-century ago.

A) were key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warn that
Incorrect. [singular subject] [singular verb], [modifier], and [plural verb]
B) that are the key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warn that
Incorrect. that X and Y that (missing verb)
C) were key factors in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warns that
Correct.
D) that is the key factor in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warns that
Incorrect. Same as B.
E) was a key factor in the increasing proportion of women who died from heart disease beginning in the 1950â€™s, and warns that
Incorrect. that X and Y [singular verb].
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