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The ancient Inca city of Macchu Picchu, perched on a ridge in the Andes Mountains of Peru, had been built at a high enough altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick with oxygen deprivation.

A. had been built at a high enough altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick with oxygen deprivation

B. had been built at so high of an altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick from oxygen deprivation
C. was built at a high enough altitude that modern day tourists from lower elevations often become sick with oxygen deprivation when visiting the city
D. was built at such a high altitude that modern-day tourists from lower elevations often become sick from oxygen deprivation when visiting the city
E. was built at so high of an altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick from oxygen deprivation
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D. The so high doesnt make sense at all. the such high gives the reason for the sickness described later.
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New post 22 Jun 2013, 03:07
can someone explain why past prefect tense is incorrect here

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New post 04 Jun 2015, 20:07
For me the sentence construction seems a bit confusing. When I replace the underline statement with the OA, i.e. D, then I understand something like below
The Inca city was built at high altitude in old time, keeping in mind that mordern-day touritst from lower altitude will face problem (hence they will not visit Inca).

Can someone please explain why A is wrong?

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amrishsoni86 wrote:
For me the sentence construction seems a bit confusing. When I replace the underline statement with the OA, i.e. D, then I understand something like below
The Inca city was built at high altitude in old time, keeping in mind that mordern-day touritst from lower altitude will face problem (hence they will not visit Inca).

Notice that D does not say "so that"; it just says "that". So, we cannot interpret that the the Inca city was "intentionally" built at high altitude so that mordern-day tourists from lower altitude will face problem.

A uses "had been built" while D uses "was". So, this looks like a tense issue largely, though I am not very familiar with tenses as yet.

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The ancient Inca city of Macchu Picchu, perched on a ridge in the Andes Mountains of Peru, had been built at a high enough altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick with oxygen deprivation.

A. had been built at a high enough altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick with oxygen deprivation

B. had been built at so high of an altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick from oxygen deprivation
C. was built at a high enough altitude that modern day tourists from lower elevations often become sick with oxygen deprivation when visiting the city
D. was built at such a high altitude that modern-day tourists from lower elevations often become sick from oxygen deprivation when visiting the city
E. was built at so high of an altitude that it often makes modern-day tourists from lower elevations sick from oxygen deprivation


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3. The original sentence contains several flaws. First, the past perfect "had been" is unnecessary here because there is only one past event. Second, "high enough" implies that the oxygen deprivation was a goal of the Incas. Third, "it" in this context is ambiguous: is it the altitude or the city that makes tourists sick? Finally, "sick with" is incorrect. It should be "sick from."
(A) This choice is incorrect as it repeats the original sentence.
(B) This choice incorrectly uses the past perfect "had been." Additionally, the pronoun "it" is ambiguous in this context and the phrase "so high of an altitude" is awkward.
(C) This choice incorrectly uses the phrases "high enough altitude" and "sick with."
(D) CORRECT. The simple past verb "was" correctly replaces the past perfect verb "had been." The phrase "such a high altitude" replaces "high enough altitude." The sentence is rewritten to avoid ambiguity by removing the pronoun "it." Finally, this choice uses the phrase "sick from" in place of the unidiomatic "sick with."
(E) This choice incorrectly uses the awkward phrase "so high of an altitude." Additionally, the pronoun "it" in this context is ambiguous.
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New post 09 Aug 2016, 11:29
Peru it's a beautiful place. I was in Peru last year and was quite pleased.

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New post 26 Sep 2017, 02:30
In option D could some one explain me here that why we are using "when visiting the city" here. Because here we are not talking in context of time.

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