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The author seems well qualified to write the book: she is fluent in Chinese and English, has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

1 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

2 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

3 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just like the main character in the story does.

4 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story does, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

5 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

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The author seems well qualified to write the book: she is fluent in Chinese and English, has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

Focus on the parallelism:
she is fluent, has reported from Beijing ...

1 and she emigrated
2 and, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.
3 and she emigrated
4 and, she, like the main character in the story does, emigrated
5 and, she, like the main character in the story, emigrated

There are three actions that the subject does. All those have to be parallel.
In a parallel structure of this kind there is no need to repet the subject: since all actions are parallel the subject is the same.

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The author seems well qualified to write the book: she is fluent in Chinese and English, has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.
1 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does. - This option changes the intended meaning of the sentence. This option conveys that the both the author & character migrated when they were teenager rather than both just migrated.

2 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager. - CORRECT

3 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just like the main character in the story does - LIKE must be followed by a Phrase & not by a clause.

4 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story does, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager. - LIKE must be followed by a Phrase & not by a clause. Moreover this option introduces modifier error

5 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager. - Changes the intended meaning of the sentence. This option means that the Author is similar to the main character of the story

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The author seems well qualified to write the book: she is fluent in Chinese and English, has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

1 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.
there should be a "comma" after the and, as the list contains more than two items
2 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.
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3 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just like the main character in the story does.
there should be a "comma" after the and, as the list contains more than two items
4 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story does, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.
like compares nouns, hence like the main character in the story does is wrong as it is comparing action, as should be used instead
5 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.
and, she, like the main character in the story - the subject is not required again as it breaks the parallelism

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Hi Experts,

In Option B, is the usage of "Like" Correct ?

As per my understanding, "Like" Should not be followed by a verb.

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The author seems well qualified to write the book: she is fluent in Chinese and English, has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

1 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

2 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

3 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just like the main character in the story does.

4 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story does, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

5 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

Please explain! Thanks


Answer should be D
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The author seems well qualified to write the book: she is fluent in Chinese and English, has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

1 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just as the main character in the story does.

2 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

3 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and she emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager, just like the main character in the story does.

4 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story does, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

5 has reported from Beijing – where most of the story takes place – and, she, like the main character in the story, emigrated to the New York area when she was a teenager.

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Answer should be D


D have two main issue :

1---like should not be followed clause
2--parallelism issue

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Hi gmatexam439

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In Option B, is the usage of "Like" Correct ?

As per my understanding, "Like" Should not be followed by a verb.


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Answer should be D


Incorrect Parallelism:
She is fluent.... has reported.... ,and she emigrated -- incorrect - structure of choice (A, C, D & E)

Correct Parallelism:
She is fluent........has reported.... ,and emigrated ------ correct
She is fluent....she has reported.... ,and she emigrated -- correct

Correct Idioms/Pairs:
Same______As____
As________As____
Just As___So____
So Much___As____

Incorrect Idioms/Pairs:
Just Like (Choice A)
Such Like (Choice C)
Just As

Like Vs As:

Like A, B
1. Here A should be a NOUN perhaps with modifiers but NOT clause. That is A should not be Subject + verb construction
2. Here B should be a comparable NOUN (compare with NOUN in A). B should be an independent clause.

As A, B
1. Here A could be a CLAUSE or Prepositional Phrase
2. Here B should be an independent clause.

Choice D incorrectly uses Like + Clause construction (Like + character + Does).

Now the correct Choice B and a little doubt:

It maintains the paralleism.
She is fluent........has reported.... ,and ,like ......, emigrated

Hi, GMATNinja, GMATNinjaTwo

She is fluent........has reported.... ,and ,like ......, emigrated
Is this correct construction because "and" & "emigrated" are set off by TWO commas and so the parallelism is maintained. I am thinking of an official correct choice like this one.

She is fluent........has reported.... ,and like ......, emigrated (Notice only ONE comma) --- this construction will be wrong for sure. Right?
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Sorry, that was a typo .. I meant B only !!
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Hi gmatexam439

Quote:
In Option B, is the usage of "Like" Correct ?

As per my understanding, "Like" Should not be followed by a verb.


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Answer should be D


Incorrect Parallelism:
She is fluent.... has reported.... ,and she emigrated -- incorrect - structure of choice (A, C, D & E)

Correct Parallelism:
She is fluent........has reported.... ,and emigrated ------ correct
She is fluent....she has reported.... ,and she emigrated -- correct

Correct Idioms/Pairs:
Same______As____
As________As____
Just As___So____
So Much___As____

Incorrect Idioms/Pairs:
Just Like (Choice A)
Such Like (Choice C)
Just As

Like Vs As:

Like A, B
1. Here A should be a NOUN perhaps with modifiers but NOT clause. That is A should not be Subject + verb construction
2. Here B should be a comparable NOUN (compare with NOUN in A). B should be an independent clause.

As A, B
1. Here A could be a CLAUSE or Prepositional Phrase
2. Here B should be an independent clause.

Choice D incorrectly uses Like + Clause construction (Like + character + Does).

Now the correct Choice B and a little doubt:

It maintains the paralleism.
She is fluent........has reported.... ,and ,like ......, emigrated

Hi, GMATNinja, GMATNinjaTwo

She is fluent........has reported.... ,and ,like ......, emigrated
Is this correct construction because "and" & "emigrated" are set off by TWO commas and so the parallelism is maintained. I am thinking of an official correct choice like this one.
She is fluent........has reported.... ,and like ......, emigrated (Notice only ONE comma) --- this construction will be wrong for sure. Right?


Hi Let me help you with this one.

Remember a simple rule:

You never say that "I ate ice cream, chocolate, tea". This is wrong. While typing a list of items/things a "and" is always used before the last thing. So the correct version will be that " I ate ice cream, chocolate AND tea."

When in the highlighted part you type " ..... , and like ..... , the sentence becomes nonsensical. You are specifically saying that "She is fluent ... has reported .... and like". You are basically toppling "emigrated" out of the list of things. "like ..." modifies "she" and should not become the part of the list, that's why it is put between the two commas. So the correct version is "she is fluent .. has reported ... and emigrated", correctly depicting the 3 things that she does.

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