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The word 'are' and 'calls' shows that the sentence is in present tense. Therefore option (B) & (C) are straight away ruled out for having the word 'constituted' in the end.
Option (D) "unrealistic enough so that the constitute" has the wrong idiom (correct idiom is (Adjective) enough that)
Option (E) "unrealistic enough so as to constitute" has the wrong idiom (correct idiom is (Adjective) enough that)

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The word 'are' and 'calls' shows that the sentence is in present tense. Therefore option (B) & (C) are straight away ruled out for having the word 'constituted' in the end.
Option (D) "unrealistic enough so that the constitute" has the wrong idiom (correct idiom is (Adjective) enough that)
Option (E) "unrealistic enough so as to constitute" has the wrong idiom (correct idiom is (Adjective) enough that)

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Can anyone explain what is the problem with choice C here. Why is Present Perfect incorrect ?
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Can anyone explain what is the problem with choice C here. Why is Present Perfect incorrect ?


The Emperor Augustus, it appears, commissioned an idealized sculpture portrait, the features of which are
so unrealistic as to constitute what one scholar calls an "artificial face."

(A) so unrealistic as to constitute
(B) so unrealistic they constituted
(C) so unrealistic that they have constituted
(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute
(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute

A uses the idiom So X as to Y

In option C, idiom so that which indicates purpose.

He spoke slowly so that the assistant could write everything down.

here, the features of which are not purposely unrealistic to constitute an artificial face.

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Can anyone explain what is the problem with choice C here. Why is Present Perfect incorrect ?


The Emperor Augustus, it appears, commissioned an idealized sculpture portrait, the features of which are
so unrealistic as to constitute what one scholar calls an "artificial face."

(A) so unrealistic as to constitute
(B) so unrealistic they constituted
(C) so unrealistic that they have constituted
(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute
(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute

A uses the idiom So X as to Y

In option C, idiom so that which indicates purpose.

He spoke slowly so that the assistant could write everything down.

here, the features of which are not purposely unrealistic to constitute an artificial face.

Correct me if I'm wrong :|


Yes, it's written hypothetically. So you cannot use Present Perfect here. You are right.
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present perfect is not required in C.
A is correct.

rest are unidiomatic.


perfect in c show that this happen before "are unrealistic". NO LOGIC
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Can anyone explain what is the problem with choice C here. Why is Present Perfect incorrect ?


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The verbs are and calls indicate that the sculpture is being viewed and judged in the present. Thus, neither the
past tense verb constituted (in B) nor the present perfect verb have constituted (in C) is correct; both suggest
that the statue's features once constituted an artificial face but no longer do so. Also, B would be better if that
were inserted after so unrealistic, although the omission of that is not ungrammatical. Choices D and E use
unidiomatic constructions with enough: unrealistic enough to constitute would be idiomatic, but the use of
enough is imprecise and awkward in this context. Choice A, which uses the clear, concise, and idiomatic
construction so unrealistic as to constitute, is best
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88. The Emperor Augustus, it appears, commissioned an idealized sculpture portrait, the features of which are
so unrealistic as to constitute what one scholar calls an "artificial face."
(A) so unrealistic as to constitute
(B) so unrealistic they constituted
(C) so unrealistic that they have constituted
(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute
(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute


this is tense problem
the main clause is in the past "commissioned" and the dependent clause is in prsesent : "which are". the main clause is in the past but the dependent clause talk about fact which exist indefinitely, so, is in present time. the features now exist indefinitely. the constitution must take the time of "are" . we do not have reason to change time of the action "constitution"

in many questions of og books. the main clause is in the past tense and the dependent clause is in the present time. this is possible because meaning/logic permit. most of the time in our world, verb in main clause is in the past, verb in dependent clause is also in the past.

i know 4 uses of present time,which i learn from grammar books, and which are

- to say about situation which exist now and will exist indefinitely. our case in this problem "are" and "contrbute"
- to say about timeless fact
-to say about habit
- to say about a condition.

in this problem , gmat test us the use of present tense, a basic knowledge but not easy at all.
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Rule 1 - "So as" together is almost always never correct. The correct form is "So + adjective + as to + verb".
Rule 2 - If nothing seems wrong with the question, don't even bother for a better sentence among the answer options. Only if there seems like a mistake, go ahead and consider a better way of saying that part of the sentence.

My answer should be A. What is the OA?


Hi Barni, do you want to give five?
I totally agree with you according your 1st rule, however, 2nd one is weak.
Ok Let do the following,

The Emperor Augustus, it appears, commissioned an idealized sculptured portrait, the features of which are so unrealistic that they have constituted what one scholar calls an “artificial face.”

(A) so unrealistic that they have constituted
(B) so unrealistic they constituted
(C) so unrealistic as to constitute
(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute
(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute


Which one is right? and whatis wrong with A?

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Then i option A is wrong. the only incident of "they" in option A is features and iswrong.
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I am very much confused about option E being wrong.In fact option A and E both seem correct to me."so as to" can be used even if the actors in the main caluse and subordinate clauses are different.
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The Emperor Augustus, it appears, commissioned an idealized sculptured portrait, the features of which are so unrealistic as to constitute what one scholar calls an “artificial face.”

Logical meaning: The features of the portrait are so unrealistic that they appear to constitute an "artificial face" as per one scholar.

(A) so unrealistic as to constitute

(B) so unrealistic they constituted If the verb used for the scholar is 'calls' then the appropriate verb form in the underlined portion should be 'constitute'. The parts also are disconnected without a 'that'

(C) so unrealistic that they have constituted The use of present perfect is unnecessary.

(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute The option suggests a purpose. The features were intentionally made unrealistic so that they constitute an artificial face. The option instills a sense of purpose and that goes against the logical meaning.

(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute This option brings in the idea that there's some criterion to be met for the features to be unrealistic and once they do they qualify to constitute an artificial face. This is not what the logical meaning of the sentence is.

Thus, option A.
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C uses present perfect tense. this makes the choice incorrect.
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I am very much confused about option E being wrong.In fact option A and E both seem correct to me."so as to" can be used even if the actors in the main caluse and subordinate clauses are different.
may be this blog my Mike M???Garry could help.
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Your query has been well explained by subrataroy0210 in the above post - closing this request.
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So Adjective as to verb : Idiomatic usage.
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The Emperor Augustus, it appears, commissioned an idealized sculpture portrait, the features of which are so unrealistic as to constitute what one scholar calls an "artificial face."

(A) so unrealistic as to constitute
(B) so unrealistic they constituted
(C) so unrealistic that they have constituted
(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute
(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute


Nevernevergiveup You CAN use "so X as to Y" if X is an adjective or adverb. "X enough to Y" is also idiomatic. You should, however, avoid "so X as to Y" if X is NOT an adjective or adverb.

The perfectly correct sentences:
- Would you be so kind as to tell me the time? (Swan, "Practical English Usage," Oxford University Press 2005, p. 539)
- Its smell was so foul as to make a lady faint.
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Question No.: SC 88

The Emperor Augustus, it appears, commissioned an idealized sculpture portrait, the features of which are so unrealistic as to constitute what one scholar calls an "artificial face."

(A) so unrealistic as to constitute
(B) so unrealistic they constituted
(C) so unrealistic that they have constituted
(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute
(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute


there are only two cases, in which present perfect is used
1. an action which continue to to present time. in this case, "since" is required. this sentence have no "since".
C can not be right.
2. an action which finished in the past but has no past point of time or an action which finished in the past, but has no past point of time and is relevant to present situation.

both above actions are not fit to "features of which are so unrealistic that". "are so unrealistic that" show a timeless fact which is alway correct . the situation in result clause can not be finished in the past or can not be begun in the past while the main clause is a timeless situation.

so, C is wrong.

a very hard but basic question about difference between present simple tense and present perfect.
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gmat tests tense problem a lot because tense of english is basic and to solve tense problem requires us to understand meanings clearly. this topic is hard and basic. we do need good understanding of tense to convey our idea in writen english.
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(A) so unrealistic as to constitute -correct idiom so X as to Y
(B) so unrealistic they constituted -constituted is wrong
(C) so unrealistic that they have constituted - have constituted is wrong
(D) unrealistic enough so that they constitute - so that is wrong
(E) unrealistic enough so as to constitute - wrong idiom
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