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The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Con

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Re: The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Con [#permalink]

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daagh wrote:
Concision is certainly one of the factors but not the sole factor. Here in this case we can see how others are technically wrong.

A. shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days ------- 1.wrong modification of the pronoun ‘which’ 2. News is singular and the plural verb ‘were’ is SV mismatch 3. Awful redundancy of another, additional etc

B. shots that was sent by swift messenger took four days in order to reach New York City, and also another eleven days --- 1 wrong modification by using the restrictive ‘that’ 2. Redundancy in ‘also another’

C. shots that were sent by swift messenger took four days to reach New York City and another eleven days ---- 1, same modification problem as in B 2. Additionally, ‘news’ and ‘were’ – SV mismatch

D. shots took four days by swift messenger in order to reach New York City and another eleven days in addition ---- 1. redundancy of another and in addition 2. unnecessary use of ‘in order’

E. shots took four days by swift messenger to reach New York City and another eleven days—avoids all the grammatical errors and of course is also concise


Hi daagh,

in option B you ave mentioned "1 wrong modification by using the restrictive ‘that’" . Can you please explain what does it mean?
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Re: The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Con [#permalink]

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The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Concord, Massachusetts, were, according to legend, heard around the world, but news of these shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days to reach Charleston, South Carolina.

(A) shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days

(B) shots that was sent by swift messenger took four days in order to reach New York City, and also another eleven days

(C) shots that were sent by swift messenger took four days to reach New York City and another eleven days

(D) shots took four days by swift messenger in order to reach New York City and another eleven days in addition

(E) shots took four days by swift messenger to reach New York City and another eleven days

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This question looks at modifiers, subject verb agreement and redundancy/wordiness.
(A) shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days
wrong modifier for which, news is singular so were is incorrect, and another additional is redundant.

(B) shots that was sent by swift messenger took four days in order to reach New York City, and also another eleven days
modification error with that and also another is redundant
(C) shots that were sent by swift messenger took four days to reach New York City and another eleven days
modification error with that and news is singular so were is incorrect verb tense

(D) shots took four days by swift messenger in order to reach New York City and another eleven days in addition
In order is not needed here and in addition is redundant

(E) shots took four days by swift messenger to reach New York City and another eleven days- correct answer because concise and has correct subject verb agreement
Re: The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Con   [#permalink] 03 Dec 2017, 16:13

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