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I will choose E, idiomatic and precise...

What about B, which removes it which might be referring to launderes incorrectly
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B is wrong because we do not what allowing mofidies. Launders or globalization. Moreover, we need to tell the reason why The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launders and it can only be achieved best by a seperate clause...


E fits it well.
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E make sense. the strucutre is:

Because + Clause
Because of + Noun Phrase

so A and B donot agree with any of the above structures. only C,D and E meet the first structure. C and D, both, are ungramatical.
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saurya_s wrote:
ranga41 wrote:
I will choose E, idiomatic and precise...

What about B, which removes it which might be referring to launderes incorrectly


It cannot refer to money launderers who are plural, globalization is the only singular noun in the sentence...so i will stick to E
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ranga41 wrote:
I will choose E, idiomatic and precise...

What about B, which removes it which might be referring to launderes incorrectly

B changed the original meaning of the sentence. I will vote for E as well.
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"because" is a conjunction and should be followed by a clause. B has a participial phrase with no verb. Hence, only E is left.
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E

A, B out -> because of
C out -> the structre problem
D out -> 'have been placed' is problematic
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E make sense. the strucutre is:

Because + Clause
Because of + Noun Phrase

so A and B donot agree with any of the above structures. only C,D and E meet the first structure. C and D, both, are ungramatical.


Himalaya,
Can u plz explain this concept. Doesn't B fit the second structre - Because of + Noun Phrase
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Paul wrote:
"because" is a conjunction and should be followed by a clause. B has a participial phrase with no verb. Hence, only E is left.

B is a "because of" construction, not a "because" one, so since it has no verb, it could actually be correct.
please clarify.
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OA is E,
Could anybody explain whats wrong with B?
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The tense form of underlined sentence is - present perfect - has been. Hence the tense form in underlined word should be - simple present.

From this you can remove answer choices A and B, left with C, D and E. C is awkward and confusing. D has wrong tense form - have been. E meets all the requirements.

Hence the correct answer choice is E.


A. of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred

B. of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C. it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D. it allows the transfer of money have been placed in a bank in a less regulated
jurisdiction
E. it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
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The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launders, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A. of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B. of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C. it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D. it allows the transfer of money have been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E. it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred

Originally posted by raghavs on 07 Oct 2010, 11:12.
Last edited by Skywalker18 on 26 Nov 2017, 04:07, edited 1 time in total.
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raghavs wrote:
The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launders,
because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be
transferred
to a branch in a more regulated one.
A. of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be
transferred
B. of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C. it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D. it allows the transfer of money have been placed in a bank in a less regulated
jurisdiction
E. it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred


You can eliminate options A and B, because it says "because of allowing" which is incorrect.

Now, among C, D and E:

C: It allows that money placed in a bank ...... is transferred - This is clearly an awkward construction.
D: "Money have been placed" - This is incorrect sentence structure, on many counts. Even if everything else was right, transfer of money have been placed is awkward, and the use of "have" is incorrect here.
E: This is correct.
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This was a simple one.
The answer is definitely E.
A&B- Of allowing is gramatically worong.
C- It allows that id wordy
D- use of have been makes the sentence wrong
E- the bets answer..
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The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.

A. of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B. of alowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C. it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D. it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E. it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred

Originally posted by ksung84 on 22 Jul 2013, 07:27.
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The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.

A. of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B. of alowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C. it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D. it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E. it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred


I would like to discuss what "it" is referring to as used in answer choices C, D and E. Moreover what is wrong with B?
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ksung84 wrote:
The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.

A. of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B. of alowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C. it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D. it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E. it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred


I would like to discuss what "it" is referring to as used in answer choices C, D and E. Moreover what is wrong with B?
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Per my understanding, "It" refers to "Globalization"...So "Globalization allows money placed in a ......."

B is wrong. Reason is the distinction between "Because of" vs "Because"......"Because of" is a prepositional phrase and must always be followed by a noun or a noun phrase and not a clause. "Because" is followed by a clause. Option B violates this rule.
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