WaterFlowsUp wrote:
Bumping for review and further discussion*.
*New project from GMAT Club!!! Check
HEREferuz77 wrote:
The judge told the jury that he had excused a juror for having purposely provided murder photos to the media and then stashed the money received to hide evidence supporting his claim of innocence.
(A) stashed the money received to hide evidence supporting
(B) stashed such money as he received to hide evidence supporting
(C) stashed the money he had received to hide evidence that would support
(D) of stashing the money he had received to hide evidence that would support
(E) of stashing such money as he received to hide evidence that would be supportive of
D is CorrectIt is important to know the structure of the sentence.
Main Clause :-
(Subject)The judge
(Main Verb)told
(Direct Object)the jury that..........
Subordinate Clause :-
(Subject)he
(Verb)had excused
(Object)a juror
(Compound Predicate)for having purposely provided murder photos to the media and then stashed the money received to hide evidence supporting his claim of innocence.
The compound predicate should contains two predicates (Two reasons for which Juror had been excused), that are parallel to each other.
Predicate 1 :- for having purposely provided murder photos to the media (Adjectival Clause - Modifying the object - Juror)
Predicate 2 :- then stashed the money received to hide evidence supporting his claim of innocence. :- The verb
stashed makes this part an independent clause referring to The Judge and thus is not parallel to Predicate 1. So A is out.
B) INCORRECT - for the same reason cited in Choice A
C) INCORRECT - for the same reason cited in Choice A
D) CORRECT - This choice converts the independent clause in Adjectival Phrase which is parallel to first predicate.
E) INCORRECT - Wordy structures :- such money as, that would be supportive of....
Hope that helps!