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#First split_ meaning --> D & E out as they omit to claim that the model can provide sufficient evidence; this is a core element for the original meaning of the sentence.

#Second split_ redundancy --> A is out as "hopefully" and "can" express the same meaning of possibility

B and C remain --> In B the pronoun "it" is used incorrectly. Put where it is, it conveys ambiguity in the sentence. On the other hand, in C it is correctly used as non essential modifier with the meaning that the community hopes that the new model can provide sufficient evidence.

IMO C
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The new model of dark matter reactivity hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

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IMO C.
First, the use of "hopefully" is very arguable on GMAT. Here is an explanation by Mike from Magoosh.
https://gmatclub.com/forum/hopefully-159341.html

Now, only living can hope for something. Hence, new model cannot. This takes care of A,D & E.
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A) hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put
D) hopefully will put
E) hopes to put


Out of B & C, latter uses the correct construction by putting hope in a non-essential modifier, making it the correct choice.
Quote:
B) it is hoped, can provide sufficient evidence that will put

Quote:
C) can, it is hoped, provide sufficient evidence to put
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The new model of dark matter reactivity hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

A) hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put
a few issues .First, demonstrative pronouns such as "this" can not be used on their own.They need to be attached to their referent noun or used to create copies of a referent.It also seems we have a comma splice here.The sentence runs on,leaving the meaning mangled

B) it is hoped, can provide sufficient evidence that will put
This sentence reads awkwardly

C) can, it is hoped, provide sufficient evidence to put
This is the right answer.it avoids all the meaning,construction and pronoun errors

D) hopefully will put
its the evidence that will put to rest the debate not the model itself

E) hopes to put
Once again, its the evidence that should put to rest the debate

Answer is C
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It took me 1 minute and 19 seconds to choose (C).

(A) Comma splice.
(B) there must be a comma before "it is hoped".
(C) There is still debate on the use of "hopefully" as "it is hoped". The acceptance rate is higher and higher, but GMAT does not like such usage. Thus, C correctly uses "it is hoped" to express the intended meaning.
(D) See above.
(E) This one is the shortest, but I feel that only people can hope.
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The new model of dark matter reactivity hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

A) hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put
B) it is hoped, can provide sufficient evidence that will put
C) can, it is hoped, provide sufficient evidence to put
D) hopefully will put
E) hopes to put


MEANING: The new model can provide sufficient evidence to put to rest the age-old debate.

A) "the model can provide evidence, this will put" fragment;
B) "can provide…that will put" the first item "can" presents a possibility, but the second "will" presents a certainty, this is inconsistent and unintended;
D) "the model hopefully will put to rest" this imps the model itself will, certainly, put to rest the debate, not the evidence it generates, unintended;
E) same as (D).

Ans (C)
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Is D incorrect just because of usage of word hopefully or it does have run on issue too?

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Is D incorrect just because of usage of word hopefully or it does have run on issue too?

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D is not a run-on sentence. This version has just one subject (The new model) and one verb (Put to rest). D is grammatically sound.
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Funny thing- once we know the answer (OA) we can come up with any damn reason to justify the OA. Though the analysis is right, it always fails to occur to me if that kind of thinking is possible in the examination scenario. Looking at the question, the OA and then piecing together some reason, is good but I am not sure if it works, in reality.



eakabuah wrote:
The new model of dark matter reactivity hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

Meaning: The new model of dark matter reactivity can, it is hoped, provide sufficient evidence to put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

We can easily eliminate A for joining two main clauses with just a comma to create a run-on sentence.
On the grounds of meaning, will is not appropriate in the context of this sentence. Apart from expressing that something will happen in the future based on certain conditions, will also express certainty. Meanwhile hopefully also expresses hope amidst some level of doubt pertaining to the occurrence of some event. Can is more appropriate when some level of doubt exists within the context of the sentence. Hence, hopefully works better with can than will agrees with hopefully. Based on this I can eliminate D.
On the same grounds of meaning, it doesn't make much sense to say that Dark matter hopes to put to rest the age-old debate. Does dark matter has what it takes to hope? Or is it that someone hopes that dark can[probably] provide sufficient evidence to put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter. For this illogical meaning, E can be eliminated.

In B we have dark matter can provide sufficient evidence that will put to rest the age-old debate. Already, can provide expresses some level of uncertainty. Something that is uncertain cannot form the basis for making categoric claims that evidence will put to rest the age-old debate. The infinitive form to put rather than will put as in C is better and sensical. With the infinitive, we can say that dark matter can provide sufficient evidence [in order or with the purpose] to put to rest the age-old debate. Eliminate B.

Now I'm left with option C. I hope my analysis has not taken a wrong turn to the North Pole; since we are in the season of Christmas :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: .

A) The new model of dark matter reactivity hopefully can provide sufficient evidence, this will put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

B) The new model of dark matter reactivity, it is hoped, can provide sufficient evidence that will put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

C) The new model of dark matter reactivity can, it is hoped, provide sufficient evidence to put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

D) The new model of dark matter reactivity hopefully will put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.

E) The new model of dark matter reactivity hopes to put to rest the age-old debate on the existence of antimatter.
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