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The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
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I would like to go with A

The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry davy ......................................................, a critique

Humphry davy is the Subject so critiquing can not come, eliminated D&E

A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a this actually changes the meaning
C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyke and envisioning as well not parallel

please correct me if im wrong
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This is a "noun + noun modifier" construction and we have two modifiers which should modify the same noun. They are:
(1) a critique of all chemistry
(2) a vision of a new chemistry
Also, remember that we should retain the meaning of original sentence unless the original sentence is senseless.

Let's analyze the options one by one.

The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

(A ) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a

Both the modifiers modify noun "Essay" and are parallel to each other, hence CORRECT.

(B ) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a

(1) The first modifier "a critique of all chemistry" is a "noun+noun modifier" construction but the second part "his envisioning of a" is a
Complex gerund. A complex gerund could be made parallel to only complex gerunds and action nouns. But here "a Critique" is not
an action noun. So they cannot be made parallel to each other.
Note: "His" in "his envisioning" is a possessive determiner here. So his envisioning gives an impression that it is for "Essay".
(2) "and" and "also" are redundant.

(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well

Same as above. Also, "and" and "as well" are redundant

(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of

"critiquing " is a present participle and modifies the subject(Humphry Davy) of the previous clause which is not the intent of the sentence.

(E )critiquing all the chemistrydone since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
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mrsmarthi wrote:
The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry davy presented the results of his early experiments in his "Eassay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a His is ambiguous
C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyke and envisioning as well
D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
E) critiquing akk the chemistring done since Robert Boyke as wekk as his own envisioning of

Here second part is modifying "Essay"

Parallel construction a critic of as well as a vision of

I pick A
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guys just want to check if iam right my ans is A
the underlined part is a modifier for the book,thus it must be an adjective(a critique of...)whereas the opt d and e use critiqing which is a verb form and must modify humpry davy and not his book(as davy is critiqing through the book)
please tell me if iam right
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sasen wrote:
A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
ROBERT BOYLE ISNOT A TIMEPERIOD THAT CAN BE USED TO COMPARE USING "SINCE"

B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
"FOLLOWING" BETTER CLARIFIES THE MEANING THAT SUCH A CRITIQUE WAS PROBABLY ALSO WRITTEN BY ROBERT BOYLE AND DAVY FOLLOWED THE SAME.
"VISION" AND "ENVISION" HAVE A DIFFERENCE(GOOGLE IT OUT).IM SURE,WE WILL
SEE THAT ENVISION IS A BETTER OPTION.
C,D,E ARE ALL JUNK
C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyke and envisioning as well
D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
E) critiquing akk the chemistring done since Robert Boyke as wekk as his own envisioning of

In B, what can 1 convey by saying "chemistry following a person"I find the idea a bit absurd .and envision is a verb i think.
Envisioning is a gerund .Can some 1 find his envisioning of something .Looking for opinions.

Concrete noun cannot be paralleled with simple gerund. "envisioning" is gerund and not prefer as "vision". A is correct.
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The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
Correct parallelism. Other answers have parallelism problem.

(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
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A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
ROBERT BOYLE ISNOT A TIMEPERIOD THAT CAN BE USED TO COMPARE USING "SINCE"

B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
"FOLLOWING" BETTER CLARIFIES THE MEANING THAT SUCH A CRITIQUE WAS PROBABLY ALSO WRITTEN BY ROBERT BOYLE AND DAVY FOLLOWED THE SAME.
"VISION" AND "ENVISION" HAVE A DIFFERENCE(GOOGLE IT OUT).IM SURE,WE WILL
SEE THAT ENVISION IS A BETTER OPTION.
C,D,E ARE ALL JUNK
C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyke and envisioning as well
D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
E) critiquing akk the chemistring done since Robert Boyke as wekk as his own envisioning of
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Can we have the OA.....mrsmarthi???????????
What's the point of posting a question if u can not post the OA.... or are u looking for participants requesting u to post it....
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mrsmarthi wrote:
The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a ,since should refer to a time frame, it should be like Since robert boyle's time
(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

I went for E considering this flaw in option A as considering and envisioning(gerund) seems parallel and probably the best one
Correct me if i am wrong
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The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a. Correct. Since Robert Boyle means 'since time of Robert Boyle'. Its correct modifier of "Essay on Heat and Light"
(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a his envisioning of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found' is awkward usage. 'Vision' is more correct usage.
(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well 'and envisioning as well new chemistry that Davy hoped to found' becomes wrong English usage.
(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of It modifies the whole sentence rather than just a book.
(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of It modifies the whole sentence rather than just a book.

Main sentence in the question is 'Humphry Davy presented the results' and rest of the things are modifiers and clauses.
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The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

"Essay on Heat and Light" is a title, so we need an explanation of what this title refers to. In other words, we need a noun, not a verb. Thus, D/E gone.

A) "a critique of... as well as... a vision of" is parallel, so this sounds good

B) "following Robert Boyle" is ambiguous and distorts the intended meaning of the author. The chemistry is not following Robert, is it? "his envisioning" incorrectly refers to Boyle, instead of Davy. B gone

C) This option looks good up until the present participle envisioning. This messes up the parallel structure. Also "envisioning as well new chemistry" sounds weird, and does not preserve the intended meaning of the author. C gone

So we go with A
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My question is - what is the different between "Davy presented his essay, a critique..." vs. "Davy presented his essay, critiquing..." Can I choose an answer only based on these two things? There is a ton of ambiguity with E but my question still stands.

I used a semi-guess to choose A because I figured that "a critique" would modify the subject right before the comma and in this case, it was his essay. Is that poor reasoning?

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critiquing modifies the verb presented - he presented essay critiquing .......

a critique modifies the essay itself - essay was a critique for something. This is the intended meaning of this sentence, so you can easily make your decision based on this. Also parralelism required in the second part of the sentence - "the essay was a critique as well as a vision"
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russ9 wrote:

My question is - what is the different between "Davy presented his essay, a critique..." vs. "Davy presented his essay, critiquing..." Can I choose an answer only based on these two things? There is a ton of ambiguity with E but my question still stands.

I used a semi-guess to choose A because I figured that "a critique" would modify the subject right before the comma and in this case, it was his essay. Is that poor reasoning?

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critiquing modifies the verb presented - he presented essay critiquing .......

a critique modifies the essay itself - essay was a critique for something. This is the intended meaning of this sentence, so you can easily make your decision based on this. Also parralelism required in the second part of the sentence - "the essay was a critique as well as a vision"

Well, A and E are both parallel so that's not the issue. I see what you're trying to say but I would challenge that:

- In A/B/C/ Is it safe to say that whenever we have a sentence followed by a , noun can we infer that the first word is going to modify the noun before the comma? What I mean is -- can we say that the book was a "critique" since the book isn't alive, it can't be actively critiquing. Does my question make sense to anyone?

- Why is E wrong even if it's modifying the whole prior clause? "HD experiments were presented in a book" - "critiquing..." ...doesn't all that still make sense?

Any experts care to jump in?

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Since Robert is better than "following", "after", or "from" Robert.
A and E is left.
in E, Davy critiqued his own envisioning is confused and "done" is redundant
Nothing is wrong with A, so A is the answer
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Well, A and E are both parallel so that's not the issue.

Actually E is not parallel. If the sentence was:

....critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as envisioning new chemistry....

Then the sentence would have been parallel (critiquing and envisioning...), though still incorrect for other reasons.

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- In A/B/C/ Is it safe to say that whenever we have a sentence followed by a , noun can we infer that the first word is going to modify the noun before the comma? What I mean is -- can we say that the book was a critique since the book isn't alive, it can't be actively critiquing. Does my question make sense to anyone?

Perhaps the meaning of the word critique isn't very clear. critique means: a detailed analysis and assessment of something. So, book being alive would not matter.
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A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
ROBERT BOYLE ISNOT A TIMEPERIOD THAT CAN BE USED TO COMPARE USING "SINCE"

B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
"FOLLOWING" BETTER CLARIFIES THE MEANING THAT SUCH A CRITIQUE WAS PROBABLY ALSO WRITTEN BY ROBERT BOYLE AND DAVY FOLLOWED THE SAME.
"VISION" AND "ENVISION" HAVE A DIFFERENCE(GOOGLE IT OUT).IM SURE,WE WILL
SEE THAT ENVISION IS A BETTER OPTION.
C,D,E ARE ALL JUNK
C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyke and envisioning as well
D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
E) critiquing akk the chemistring done since Robert Boyke as wekk as his own envisioning of

Although I wouldn't personally say "since Robert Boyle", I believe that the usage is techinially correct.

The problem with (B) is "and also" which is both awkward and redundant.

I would go with (A).

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