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GOOD QUESTION..

i will go with D .

except d each choice has more than 1 flaw..,
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Daagh, can you please more how A,B, C are gone
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Can someone please explain C -

in alloys to harden steel, as well as a lubricant and , in trace amounts as a ...

in alloys - prep phrase?

to harden steel - infinitive phrase?

I felt its got to do with parallelism, but don't get the technical grammar behind this question...
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Can someone please explain C -

in alloys to harden steel, as well as a lubricant and , in trace amounts as a ...

in alloys - prep phrase?

to harden steel - infinitive phrase?

I felt its got to do with parallelism, but don't get the technical grammar behind this question...


Hi btg9788

I don't really get your question, but I guess your question is like "why C is wrong, and why D is correct"

C is wrong because of parallelism error.

...... molybdenum can be used [in alloys] to harden steel, as well as a lubricant and nutritional supplement in trace amounts.
The three bold parts are not parallel. Only "a lubricant" and "nutritional supplement" are parallel.

*in alloys - prep phrase? YES
* to harden steel - infinitive phrase? YES

D is correct. because:
......molybdenum can be used [in alloys] to harden steel; it can also be used as a lubricant and, in trace amounts, as a nutritional supplement
"It" modifies molybdenum correctly.
"as a lubricant" and "as nutritional supplement" are parallel.

Hope that helps.
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Thanks pqhai.

I did not type my question correctly. However, at second glance, I see why the other answers are incorrect. In C, I think that its more to do with meaning rather than grammar or parallelism etc.

The element Molybdenum can be "a lubricant and nutritional supplement" to prevent tooth decay - Meaningless sentence.

So C changes the meaning to something like Molybdenum acts as a lubricant+nutritional supplement to prevent tooth decay, which clearly is nonsensical.

Parallelism of course, as you said is missing in C.
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The answer is Definitely D. This was an easy one!
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The only strategic metal in which the United States is self-sufficient, molybdenum is a soft substance that can, paradoxically, be used to harden steel in alloys, as well as as a lubricant, and in trace amounts, in the nutritional supplements to help prevent tooth decay.

a. to harden steel in alloys, as well as as a lubricant, and in trace amounts, in the nutritional supplements

b. to harden steel in alloys, as well as a lubricant, and a nutritional supplement in trace amounts

c. in alloys to harden steel, as well as a lubricant and nutritional supplement in trace amounts

d. in alloys to harden steel; it can also be used as a lubricant and, in trace amounts, as a nutritional supplement

e. in alloys to harden steel; it can also be used as well as a lubricant and nutritional supplement in trace amounts


the sentence mention "paradoxically" but in D, paradoxically doesn't stand for anything, as now we have 2 independent clause. in 1st statement itself should itself why it is paradoxical. Am I wrong?
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Once we figure out that the initial phrase is not crucial to the meaning/intent, we can breakdown this sentence on the basis of parallelism.

Option A is definitely out for the use of as well as as – for a minute there I thought it was a typo! - Eliminate
Options B and C are out clearly for the lack of parallelism – to harden steel & as a lubricantEliminate
Option E – This option clearly wants to be eliminated – it can also be used as well as a – Redundancy – Eliminate!
Option D is the best choice!

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Hi Experts,

Could you please discuss each option in depth that which elements are not parallel in the options and which usage of 'as well as' is right or wrong?
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Hi Experts

Should we consider "as well as" to be a parallelism trigger?

Why is option A incorrect.

I was stuck between option A and Option D. I rejected Option A because "Molybdenum can be used as a supplement" seemed better than "Molybdenum can be used in supplements"

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Hi Experts

Should we consider "as well as" to be a parallelism trigger?

Why is option A incorrect.

I was stuck between option A and Option D. I rejected Option A because "Molybdenum can be used as a supplement" seemed better than "Molybdenum can be used in supplements"

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Hello KittyDoodles,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, "as well as" is indeed a parallelism trigger, as are all conjunctions.

Further, Option A incorrectly uses the "comma + conjunction ("as well as" in this sentence)" construction to join the first and second elements in a list with more than two elements; remember, the "comma + conjunction" construction is used to join the last element in a list with more than two elements with the rest of the list; the other elements are linked by commas.

Option D avoids this error by placing two of the elements in a separate list.

We hope this helps.
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[quote="KittyDoodles"]Hi Experts

Should we consider "as well as" to be a parallelism trigger?

Why is option A incorrect.

"as as a lubricant": Okay, technically, this is just "as + [prepositional phrase]", so IN THEORY it's not wrong.
but ...
"as as"
have you ever seen GMAC do something like this in a correct answer? No, you haven't—because GMAC would never write a correct sentence that looks like this.


You CAN, however, eliminate A because the last two parallel parts are objectively less parallel than they are in D.
A: as a lubricant || in the nutritional supplements
D: as a lubricant || as a nutritional supplement
This is a straightforward relative judgment.

"nutritional supplements" in choice A is also wrong, because molybdenum is only one nutritional supplement.
("The" in choice A is nonsense too, but the GMAT won't explicitly test the presence or absence of a/an/the.)
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IMO d) is the answer
a) and b) lacks parallelism
c) when we use and to list things, comma should be present. In option c there is no comma before and.
e) also as well as makes the answer choice redundant
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