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17 May 2011, 08:36
i think C is clear enough , but took me god damn 5:19 min lolz
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17 May 2011, 08:55
Ok I get it now.. I thought both X and Y contribute to the cause together, thats why the use of "along with". But the issue here is that both X and Y contribute independently to the cause..
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17 May 2011, 14:33
whats the source of this question ?
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17 May 2011, 20:37
Source is my own personal construction, posted only in gmatclub . You will not find this elsewhere.
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14 Jan 2012, 23:33
+1 for C.Use of was and as well as made C jump out of the rest of the options.
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15 Jan 2012, 06:24
The biggest SC i have ever read.......and happy that i got it.....Hurray
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07 Apr 2012, 08:13
IMO C

parallelism by X as well by Y.....

and was caused by makes it correct passive sentence...
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03 Jun 2012, 13:11
Is there any strategy to break a long SC question and focus on the error part?
I find it really difficult. It took 8 minutes of serious analysis only to mark a wrong answer. Please help me here.
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05 Jun 2012, 23:12
This question got me worrying about a couple of things.
a. how to answer such questions in 90 seconds.
b. How to make splits in such lengthy sentences.

Any pointers on how to answer such questions please?
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06 Jun 2012, 08:25
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Well let me give my perception of how to handle long passages. Firstly, in most of the cases, it is no more a ploy than to intimidate the candidate. Most of them are decided by simple and basic grammar principles such as S-V number mismatch, basic tense and comparisons, fragmentations and run-ons. I have not found most of them go deep into meaning. Sometimes the wrong choices omit some part of the original passge and to tht extent alter the meaning.

However, the basic approach will be to strip the passage naked by getting rid of the unnecessary modifier phrases and reduce the bulk.

For example, let us take the case in question.

The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

Now in this case, if you try to match the subject of spate with its due verb, you will see that you do not have one. So now, you search a working verb. B and C are properly verbed by was caused. So keep them.

In D, the subject is the singular spurt, but the verb is ‘having caused’.

In E, the subject is movement and the verb ‘was caused’ (as well as has no role here)

Now between the B and C, B misses the ‘by’ parallelism. C is perfect.

Therefore, no need to worry about coal trade or traffic jam or the maintenance delay, those modifiers purposely stacked for distracting

Another example:

Humans have been damaging the environment for centuries by over cutting trees and farming too intensively, and though some protective measures, like the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great increases in population and in the intensity of industrialization are causing a worldwide ecological crisis.
though some protective measures, like the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great increases in population

though some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, were taken decades ago, great increases in population

though some protective measures, such as establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries having been taken decades ago, great population increases.

with some protective measures, like establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries that were taken decades ago, great increases in population

with some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great population increases

What is the verb for the subordinate clauses starting with ‘though some protective measures’? You will see that only choice B has a working verb and hence that is the choice.

Example 2
In attempting to solve the problems caused by a lowering of the price of oil, oil companies operating in the North Sea have taken a variety of approaches, which includes their reducing employment, using new technology to pump oil more efficiently from smaller fields, and finding innovative ways to cut the cost of building and operating platforms.

which includes their reducing employment, using new technology to pump oil more efficiently

which includes reducing employment, using new technology to be more efficient in pumping oil

which include reducing employment, using new technology to pump oil more efficiently

which include the reduction of employment, their using new technology to pump oil more efficiently

including a reduction of employment, their use of new technology to be more efficient at pumping oil

Even a cursory glance will make out that it is approaches which include, an not includes. So A and B are out; then it is simple list parallelism among C, D and E, you can see C fits the bill easily.

Take away; If you see a big passage, fall back on grammar first.
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06 Jun 2012, 17:54
I have never seen a SC problem this long. Isn't this a bit unrealistic? Either way, I read each sentence and knocked it down to C and E. Re-read each, caught the cause/causes thing in E and went with C.
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06 Jun 2012, 19:05
IMO C, A lacks a "was", B "along with" distorts the meaning, D,E is not structurally readable. Hence C.
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07 Jun 2012, 00:06
spent 1.55 min and chosen the wrong one that is B. i was confused between B and C. indeed a very good question and i have fallen in the maze of words
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14 Jun 2012, 00:35
Thanks for such amazing explanations.. please post a few more such questions if you can.
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Real test of timing issues! thanks for posting!
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all answer choices are wrong.

1. use of due to is not correct.
2. by spurt in traffic in passive voice is not correct. (refer chapter 5, MGMAT SC) better because or through would have been used rather than by.
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I got it wrong with A. Can someone explain the difference between 'along with' and 'as well as'.

Both are grammatically correct. However, when you end up in a situation where there are two options and both are grammatically correct, chose the option that is more closer/similar to the original sentence.
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Does the question essentially boil down to the uses of "along with" and "as well as"? If yes then could someone please explain why "along with" is incorrect?

Try skimming option A . The traffic caused by ifjglid as well as by sdljfldsj ( incomplete sentence )
Now option C . The traffic was caused by dskhfljfdsl as well as by jdfjdldfsl.( complete )
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Distinction bw A,B,C
A - The recent spate....caused by X that was due to Z as well as by Y - parallel but the sentence is incomplete as we need....was caused by.....
B - The recent spate....was caused by X that was due to Z as well as along with Y - not parallel

C - The recent spate...was caused by X that was due to Z as well as by Y - parallel and complete
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26 Feb 2016, 05:56
(B) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing- Tibet highway reportedly was caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute along with the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

C) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly was caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

Can some one help me in understanding what's wrong with B, regarding the usage of Along with.

I eliminated C since I felt its not parallel.

In Choice C - "Government control enroute as well as by the delayed response" - Felt that the use of prepositional phrase "by" makes the sentence not parallel. Can some one kindly help me in understanding this?
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