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New post 01 Sep 2013, 05:40
The answer will be Option "C".

The word we are looking for is "Cost" and not "Costs". As it is also mentioned at the end of the sentence "at lower cost". This eliminates Options A, B and E.

Out of Options C and D, Option C sounds better.
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Even after seeing Video couldn't understand whats wrong with A. The rising is singular so SV pair holds then why A is wrong?
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Answer is "C"

By applying the Subject-Verb agreement rule, "has" has to go with a singular subject which is clearly mentioned in option C as "The rising cost"...
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New post 23 Feb 2015, 18:10
For the people, who are asking why A is wrong?!!
As it seems to me ,
A. The rising of costs - is participle phrase.
for example -
Rising out of the sea in front of us, the sun started to warm our faces.
here , the phrase is modifying the noun "the sun".
In option A, the phrase does not modify anything.
If the sentence would be like
The rising of costs, .......(modifying something)
then we could go for A.
While in Option C
we have used a present participle itself.
The rising cost.
Using it as a subject works fine here.


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What confused me in this question is that it is difficult for me to understand when I need to use cost and when costs with plural sentences. Would like to get opinion of our experts.
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For the people, who are asking why A is wrong?!!
As it seems to me ,
A. The rising of costs - is participle phrase.

Actually rising is used as (what is called) a gerund here, and not a participle. Summarily, participles are adjective forms of the verb, while gerunds are noun forms of the verb.

Quote:
Rising out of the sea in front of us, the sun started to warm our faces.
here , the phrase is modifying the noun the sun.

Indeed, in this case, rising is used as a participle.

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What confused me in this question is that it is difficult for me to understand when I need to use cost and when costs with plural sentences. Would like to get opinion of our experts.

Hi Ergenekon, since the verb has is in the non-underlined portion, the subject should be a singular subject. rising is the subject in A and cost is the subject in C (since rising is used as a participle in C). So, both A and C use singular subject and qualify this criterion.

Now coming to the difference between A and C.

However, if a verb-form has a pure play noun form available, generally GMAT idiomatically prefers to use it, rather than the -ing form.

For example, rising has a pure play noun form available: rise. Hence, GMAT would generally prefer to use rise in costs rather than the rising of costs.

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EducationAisle, my question was a general one. When we need to say costs of operations and when cost of operation?
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EducationAisle, my question was a general one. When we need to say costs of operations and when cost of operation?

Hi Ergenekon, the general recommendation is that when we are looking at a grand total, then we use cost, while if there are several components, then we use costs.

For example: Costs of various components used in the manufacture of a car, add up to the total cost of the car.

Having said that, I am not sure whether GMAT worries about (or even adheres to) this puritan aspect; in fact, I am reasonably sure that this discussion would be of academic interest only, because I can't see GMAT testing you on nuances between costs Vs cost (when cost/costs is used as a noun); of course GMAT can extensively test you on cost/costs as from a subject-verb agreement perspective.

This sentence that we are discussing is from Verbal review, and the OE does not even mention any difference between cost and costs, in arriving at the right answer.

Interestingly, while this sentence has the OA: The rising cost of data-processing operations, another official sentence has the construct: rising costs of malpractice insurance.

But as I said, I don't see GMAT testing you on this.
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EducationAisle, thanks for your reply. I encountered one question where gmat tests this concept. That is why it confused me in this question. combining-enormous-physical-strength-with-higher-intelligenc-87777.html
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You can see path vs paths distinction in the above link.
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EducationAisle, thanks for your reply. I encountered one question where gmat tests this concept. That is why it confused me in this question. combining-enormous-physical-strength-with-higher-intelligenc-87777.html

Hi Ergenekon, I understand, though cost/costs tends to get more amorphous than path/paths.

In that case as well, the fundamental distinction remains the same: If we are talking about individual separate paths by each/various Neanderthals, then we should use paths; if we are talking about just one path taken by the entire species (as is the case in the Neanderthals sentence), then we use path.
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Wait ...

So if the "rising" cannot create something, how about if we replaced "rising" with "rise" ? If "rise" would be acceptable as a subject, what is fundamentally different between "rising" and "rise" that makes one invalid as a subject and the other valid?
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Wait ...

So if the "rising" cannot create something, how about if we replaced "rising" with "rise" ? If "rise" would be acceptable as a subject, what is fundamentally different between "rising" and "rise" that makes one invalid as a subject and the other valid?


Your point makes sense. "The rising of costs " is a complex gerund which can as well be used as the subject of a sentence. Grammatically there is no problem with option A - the meaning conveyed is also alright. Nonetheless we are asked to find the best answer of the 5. Compare A and C - both are grammatically correct and convey the same meaning. Nonetheless C conveys the same meaning more economically, i.e. using less no. of words. As a last resort this reason is good enough to eliminate an answer choice when no grammatical or meaning error can be found in more than one answer choices.
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So if the "rising" cannot create something, how about if we replaced "rising" with "rise" ? If "rise" would be acceptable as a subject, what is fundamentally different between "rising" and "rise" that makes one invalid as a subject and the other valid?

Hi HiLine, I don't believe that A is incorrect because rising cannot create something. OE also just terms the rising of costs as wordy and awkward.

Let's take another example; which one of the following would you choose:

(i) The increasing of crimes is a bane on society.

(ii) Increase in crimes is a bane on society.

Hopefully it is evident that increase in crimes is more articulate than the increasing of crimes. In general, if there is a pure-play Noun form available (for example, increase), that structure is more elegant than the corresponding gerund form (the increasing of).
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The rising of costs of data-processing operations at many financial institutions has created a growing opportunity for independent companies to provide these services more efficiently and at lower cost.


(A) The rising of costs
The rising............has. (the cost has created.. NOT the rising)

(B) Rising costs
This choice makes us learn that we should read the full sentence. "has" is used as a verb in non-underlined portion, hence costs is wrong. we need singular subject COST.

(C) The rising cost
Singular subject and rising modifies the cost correctly.

(D) Because the rising cost
because is a subordinating conjunction. usage of because makes the sentence a dependent clause, which cannot stand alone. so we need an independent clause to connect also. but there is no independent clause. hence wrong.

(E) Because of rising costs
same as E
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Hi, just wanted to add a new perspective to this question.
The end of the statement says 'and at lower cost'
This is a hint to use cost instead of costs. Hence, Option C is the right answer!
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