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There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself – Correct. 'Itself' refers to virtue. Hence correct
B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves Incorrect. Themselves is plural whereas virtue is singular
C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself – Incorrect ‘it’ is ambiguous. should be plural to refer to acts of nature
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves Incorrect. Themselves is plural whereas virtue is singular
E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves Incorrect. Themselves is plural whereas virtue is singular
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There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself
B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves
C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves
E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves


OE is as follows:

In a confusing and unusual sentence such as this, it is essential that you find the easiest, most concrete errors first. The easiest error is found in (C) – the “it” improperly refers back to the plural “acts of nature”. (B) and (D) both contain the illogical and incorrect structure “so rare and dramatic enough” and also use “themselves” improperly at the end. “Themselves” is referring to patience so must be singular. (E) is correct until the very end (and contains the “so…that” structure that people prefer over “so as to” ) where it also contains the error with “themselves” It makes no sense to say “that they (the acts of nature) seem to be a metaphor…themselves” Correct – “they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience ITSELF” - emphasizing that the acts are a metaphor for that one core virtue. Many people do not pick (A) because of the unusual “so…as to” idiom but that is exactly the kind of decision point that you are unqualified to make! “So…as to” in this example is perfectly correct and only (A) has all of the other elements correctly structured. Correct answer is (A).
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My answer is B.

Reasoning:

There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A. a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself

B. an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves

C. the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself

D. the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

E. a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves


Essentially what we need to say is: "There are acts, such as [a] and [b], that are [x] and [y] that they seem to be metaphors for patience themselves.

Now notice there are a few splits.

First, we have "a dormant volcano exploding" vs "an/the explosion of a dormant volcano". I could be wrong, but I believe "the explosion of" is more parallel to "a total solar eclipse" than "volcano exploding". While we cannot use this to rule out answers immediately, we should hold this thought.

Secondly, we have the split at the end between itself/themselves. This is where this question becomes hazy due to its quality, since it is not an official GMAC/OG question. Are we referring to "the few acts of nature" or "virtue of patience"?. I believe this is a crucial differentiation that must be used to split the answers. Logically, the referend must be "the few acts of nature" because if "virtue of patience" was intended, you can completely omit the last word - "... seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience" is 100% clear and adding "itself" to the end of that phrase changes nothing. Therefore, we must choose "themselves".

E expresses this clearly, but I do not think the singular tense of "a metaphor" is correct for "they". The only other answer that expresses this clearly is B, which correctly uses the plural "metaphors" and "themselves".

However, my answer changes to A if "itself" references, although redundant in my opinion, "the virtue of patience".
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Same doubt. Was confused b/w A and C.

"dormant volcano exploding" doesn't seem parallel with a noun.
Can someone from veritas explain.
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There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself
B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves
C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves
E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves


Option A , IMHO. My analysis of the question :

Meaning : The author says that there are a few acts of nature that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience. The acts of nature being total solar eclipse and dormant volcano exploding.

Error analysis :

S-V --> correct. are correctly used with acts of nature
Idiom --> So X as to ; correct
Parallelism --> so rare || so dramatic
Pronoun --> Itself correctly refers to virtue

POE :

Option A --> Correct
Option B --> themselves is wrong
Option C --> Idiom usage ? So x as to ought to be used (experts please verify my understanding)
Option D & E --> themselves is wrong.

Answer must be option A.
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NeverSurrender wrote:
There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself
B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves
C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves
E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves


Option A , IMHO. My analysis of the question :

Meaning : The author says that there are a few acts of nature that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience. The acts of nature being total solar eclipse and dormant volcano exploding.

Error analysis :

S-V --> correct. are correctly used with acts of nature
Idiom --> So X as to ; correct
Parallelism --> so rare || so dramatic
Pronoun --> Itself correctly refers to virtue

POE :

Option A --> Correct
Option B --> themselves is wrong
Option C --> Idiom usage ? So x as to ought to be used (experts please verify my understanding)
Option D & E --> themselves is wrong.

Answer must be option A.


As already explained above, "dormant volcano exploding" is not the ideal construction - it should have been "explosion of a dormant volcano". The acts of nature are "eclipse" and "explosion", not "eclipse" and "dormant volcano".
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rukna wrote:
Same doubt. Was confused b/w A and C.

"dormant volcano exploding" doesn't seem parallel with a noun.
Can someone from veritas explain.


Noun+participle form such as this one may be right when the noun part is emphasized, but is wrong when the participle part is emphasized.

"dormant volcano exploding",noun = volcano and participle = exploding [ignore the adjective dormant for the time being.] Such construction is correct when the volcano part is required to be highlighted.

I saw the volcano exploding: there is no error in the sentence.
John's father was upset about John failing the exam. : the emphasis is on "failing" and therefore the sentence is wrong.

The reason is that the participle is just a modifier used to modify the preceding noun.

The conveyed sense in option A is that there are two examples of acts of nature: solar eclipse and dormant volcano. The present participle "exploding" is just a modifier for the noun "volcano" and not the second object in the list of 2 examples.

However the process of "explosion" is supposed to be the second object, not the volcano itself. Therefore although grammatically Option A is correct, it conveys the wrong meaning.


Hi Sayntan,

I have a doubt about option A.According to MGMAT SC guide a simple gerund can't go parallel with a noun.Only a complex gerund phrase can be parallel with a noun.
So , the exploding of volcano(though sounds terrible) could go parallel with total solar eclipse.

Please enlighten me if I'm wrong.
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sayantanc2k wrote:
rukna wrote:
Same doubt. Was confused b/w A and C.

"dormant volcano exploding" doesn't seem parallel with a noun.
Can someone from veritas explain.


Noun+participle form such as this one may be right when the noun part is emphasized, but is wrong when the participle part is emphasized.

"dormant volcano exploding",noun = volcano and participle = exploding [ignore the adjective dormant for the time being.] Such construction is correct when the volcano part is required to be highlighted.

I saw the volcano exploding: there is no error in the sentence.
John's father was upset about John failing the exam. : the emphasis is on "failing" and therefore the sentence is wrong.

The reason is that the participle is just a modifier used to modify the preceding noun.

The conveyed sense in option A is that there are two examples of acts of nature: solar eclipse and dormant volcano. The present participle "exploding" is just a modifier for the noun "volcano" and not the second object in the list of 2 examples.

However the process of "explosion" is supposed to be the second object, not the volcano itself. Therefore although grammatically Option A is correct, it conveys the wrong meaning.


Hi Sayntan,

I have a doubt about option A.According to MGMAT SC guide a simple gerund can't go parallel with a noun.Only a complex gerund phrase can be parallel with a noun.
So , the exploding of volcano(though sounds terrible) could go parallel with total solar eclipse.

Please enlighten me if I'm wrong.


When there is a noun available, do not use a gerund. When used in parallel with another noun, "explosion" is better than simple or complex gerund.
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There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself
B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves
C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves
E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves


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Thoughts on this?

(B) seems correct to me. but OA is (A).

(A) seems more wordy.
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ParthSanghavi wrote:
NeverSurrender wrote:
There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself
B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves
C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves
E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves


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Thoughts on this?

(B) seems correct to me. but OA is (A).

(A) seems more wordy.


Good question - and even thought it shows up in solutions and forum threads, I'd always try to find a better reason to eliminate an answer than "it's wordy." Otherwise the whole game would just be pick the shortest answer, which of course is way too easy. So while it's not bad strategy to say that if you're between two answers and don't see any other actionable differences then pick the shorter one, make sure you heed that caveat "if there are no other actionable differences."

Here note that you have a couple indications that they're testing singular vs. plural. The last word of each answer choice gives you a choice between "itself" (singular) and "themselves" (plural) and in between you have "it seems like" vs. "they seem like" and "metaphor" vs. "metaphors." This is in large part a singular/plural question. And you know that numerical agreement (with subject-verb and with pronoun) is something the GMAT frequently tests, so I'd definitely prioritize that kind of decision over wordiness, or "it feels wrong," etc.

So if you're debating A vs. B, note that A uses "itself" and B uses "themselves." The pronoun is referring to "patience" which is singular, so that's why you need A and not B.
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But A has "metaphors" with "as to seem like" and "itself" in the last
Do we need metaphor here or metaphors? Which one is singular?

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So with "metaphor" vs. "metaphors," recognize that you're dealing with the plural "there are few events," so that calls for the plural "metaphors" - those few events seem like metaphors.

With "itself" vs. "themselves," the key there is recognizing where the emphasis is going. The addition of the reflexive pronoun there is usually to add emphasis to a particular noun. For example:

I delivered the package to John myself --> "myself" is emphasizing that I was the one who delivered the package (when you might think I would have hired FedEx or asked someone else to do it)

I bought a book that was signed by the author herself -->"himself" is emphasizing that it's noteworthy that the author was the one who signed the book

Note that in either case there are multiple nouns that could receive the pronoun treatment, so you have read into the meaning of the sentence to determine which noun is deserving of that extra emphasis. Here "patience" is described as a particular virtue, and it makes sense to highlight that these events are metaphors for a specific virtue. I'd argue it doesn't make much sense to say "themselves" because there aren't really any other options for what could serve as those metaphors (think of the "I delivered the package myself" example...with that there may have been other options for deliverers so it makes a little sense to highlight that it was me. But in this case there really aren't other options). So the meaning dictates that we're emphasizing "patience," a singular virtue, and that's why you'd go with "itself."
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There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.


A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself

B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves

C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself

D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves


Here was my order of eliminations, for better or worse:

Eliminate (B) and (D) for redundant use of the word "enough"

B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

These answer choices have other issues, such as "themselves" at the end, referring to the singular word "virtue."

(D) Also has a parallelism issue "such as a solar eclipse or the explosion of...

Next I eliminated (C) for a pronoun error

C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself

"it" jumped out to me here. What is the singular pronoun "it" referring to? Acts of nature, which is plural.

(C) also has the same parallelism issue as (D).

Finally, I was between (A) and (E)

I finally honed in on the final split between "themselves." I realized I needed "itself" to refer to virtue.

In hindsight, the quickest way to get through this tough question is to start with the last split between "themselves" and "itself." I also think that that is the easiest split to make a decision on.
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In a confusing and unusual sentence such as this, it is essential that you find the easiest, most concrete errors first. The easiest error is found in (C) – the “it” improperly refers back to the plural “acts of nature”. (B) and (D) both contain the illogical and incorrect structure “so rare and dramatic enough” and also use “themselves” improperly at the end. “Themselves” is referring to patience so must be singular. (E) is correct until the very end (and contains the “so…that” structure that people prefer over “so as to” ) where it also contains the error with “themselves” It makes no sense to say “that they (the acts of nature) seem to be a metaphor…themselves” Correct – “they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience ITSELF” - emphasizing that the acts are a metaphor for that one core virtue. Many people do not pick (A) because of the unusual “so…as to” idiom but that is exactly the kind of decision point that you are unqualified to make! “So…as to” in this example is perfectly correct and only (A) has all of the other elements correctly structured. Correct answer is (A).
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A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself ; itself pronoun referent goes with singular the virtue correct

B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves the first that is okay , but the other that usage is lacking demonstrative ( adjective infront of noun which is missing) wrong also themselves is plural wrong

C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself ; pronoun referent issue

D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves ; themselves is plural wrong

E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves
themselves is plural wrong


NeverSurrender wrote:
There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.


A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself

B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves

C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself

D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves
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Wrong. Here we are judging parallelism hence in that we would just focus on that. "A DORMANT VOLCANO EXPLODING" represents an action - which thus is an apt "act of nature" just like the solar eclipse, so I think this is correct and the rest of the choices could be only rejected on the other errors pointed out here. Thanks.
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I am sorry. there is no "exploding" as pure noun in english. only pure noun can go with adjective such as dormant . gerund, which contain some features of noun, but not all, can not go with adjective like dormant.
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