debbiem wrote:
chetan2u wrote:
Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit[/u] is a relatively recent phenomenon, beginning only after World War II.
A. Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
although 'it' initially may seem odd, but it clearly refers to the clause in 2nd part of the sentence.. correct as it is..
B. Though it is now taken for granted by most people, the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic merit
two errors..
1) it is in passive voice and we have an active voice available in choices
2) changes the meaning by changing ' the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic ' to ' the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on academic '
C. Now taken for granted by most people, colleges and universities admitting students based on their academic merit
wrongly constructed
D. Most take them for granted now, but the admission of nationwide students to colleges and universities based on their academic merit
them refers to singular the admission.. also changes meaning as in B
E. Most people now take for granted that colleges and universities admit students nationally based on academic merit, and it
The original shows contrast and here it removes the contrast..also improper construction
so ans A...
Need a guidance on the Correct choice..
Is the construction :
A. Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide [color=#007236]admission of students to colleges and universities based on academic merit .[/color] not wrong??
The verb ED modifier 'BASED" incorrectly modifies university and not admission.. BASED ON MERIT should modify admissions and not university.
mikemcgarry egmat Need help
Hi,
you arre correct that "based on merit" modifies "admissions" but just not 'admissions',
It modifies the entire phrase
"the nationwide admission of students to colleges and universities"we are talking specifically about the admissions to colleges and universities..
Even if we say it modifies only admission, what can you replace it with..1) "to college and universities", but this also modifies admissions
2) " of students", but this also modifies admissions..
you try and shift this closer to admissions..1) Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission
based on academic merit of students to colleges and universities.Now we donot know whose admission are we talking of..
2) Though most people take it for granted now, the nationwide admission of students
based on academic merit to colleges and universities.this too does not make sense..
so the choice A is written correctly..
Hope it helps you