OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 197: Sentence Correction (SC2)
HIGHLIGHTS• Do not get bamboozled by the structure of option A.
The correct answer may not contain the same kind of phrasing as that in (A).
• BOTH
-- is not a necessary word. The word "and" can conjoin two things.
-- In English, we use "both" to emphasize that a statement applies to two items in the much-used idiom BOTH X and Y
Jean-Michel Basquiat started out as a graffiti artist in Manhattan.
About 18 months ago, one of his paintings sold at Sotheby's for a little over $110 million dollars—the record for a painting by an American artist.
THE PROMPTQuote:
Jean-Michel Basquiat, who was a painter and a musician, created paintings both based on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol and Robert Rauschenberg, yet he rejected pop-art’s promotion of consumerism and embraced overtly political themes in his work.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Jean-Michel Basquiat, who was a painter and a musician, created paintings both based on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol and Robert Rauschenberg, yet he rejected pop-art’s promotion of consumerism and embraced overtly political themes in his work.
• in the idiom BOTH X and Y, X and Y must be parallel.
X = based on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol (adjective phrase - "based" is a past particple
Y = Robert Rauschenberg (proper noun, a person)
Eliminate A
Quote:
B) Jean-Michel Basquiat, the painter and musician, created paintings that were based both on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol and Robert Rauschenberg, yet he rejected pop-art’s promotion of consumerism and embraced overtly political themes in his work.
• the X and Y elements are not parallel
X = on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol (prepositional phrase)
Y = Robert Rauschenberg (noun)
Eliminate B
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C) Painter and musician Jean-Michel Basquiat, who created paintings based on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol and Robert Rauschenberg [verb for Basquiat in THIS clause?], yet he rejected pop-art’s promotion of consumerism and embraced overtly political themes in his work.
• the first clause is not a full sentence.
• that is, the first clause is a fragment because the relative pronoun WHO "eats up" the only verb,
created—and
Basquiat is now a subject without a verb
-- GMAC tests this error often. I discuss the setup briefly in "Notes."
Eliminate C
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D) Painter and musician Jean-Michel Basquiat created paintings that were based on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol and Robert Rauschenberg, yet he rejected pop-art’s promotion of consumerism and embraced overtly political themes in his work.
• I see no errors, and the absence of the word "both" is fine. The sentence is grammatical and logical
KEEP
E) Painter and musician Jean-Michel Basquiat created paintings based both on the pop-art works of Andy Warhol and
Robert Rauschenberg, yet he rejected pop-art’s promotion of consumerism and embraced overtly political themes in his work.
• again, X and Y are not parallel. The elements are the same as those in (incorrect) option B.
• "Painter and musician" is an appositive phrase that describes Jean-Michel Basquiat. Moving the description of him around does not fix the error.
Eliminate E
The answer is DNOTES• BOTH? If we really wanted to use "both," we could do so.
Correct: Basquiat created paintings based on the pop-art work of
both Andy Warhol and Robert Rauschenberg.
• The "relative pronoun ate the verb" trap. GMAC tests this error frequently.
Whenever a subject is followed by a relative clause (a which-clause, who-clause, or that-clause), remember that the pronoun (which, who, that) "eats" one verb.
Be sure that the subject of a full clause has its own verb, in order to avoid incomplete sentences such as the one in option (C).
COMMENTSAgain, these answers are very good.
And again, I am pleased to see both veterans of and relative newcomers to Butler.
Happy kudos.