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B

Which is incorrect here and B is much better than A.

Answer is B
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Unfortunately, I cannot give exact grammatical explanation why A is incorrect. For me, B seems to be much better than A.


Can somebody give grammatical explanation?

May be, the meaning of the sentence is the key.

A says that forming a company because this new company has to control….
B says simple that because of the merger a new company was formed that would
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111. The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
A. forming a new company for controlling
B. forming a new company that would control
C. which would form a new company that controlled
D. which formed a new company for controlling
E. which formed a new company that would control


To me, A has incorrect meaning.
A says: The new company is made for controlling (it's sole purpose is to control) nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
B says: The new company would control nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
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111. The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
A. forming a new company for controlling
B. forming a new company that would control
C. which would form a new company that controlled
D. which formed a new company for controlling
E. which formed a new company that would control



B for me.

In A "controlling" seems to be the present participle, ie the present continuous form of control. This form does not go with the "to merge" in the main part of the sentence which indicates a future activity.
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111. The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
A. forming a new company for controlling
B. forming a new company that would control
C. which would form a new company that controlled
D. which formed a new company for controlling
E. which formed a new company that would control


To me, A has incorrect meaning.
A says: The new company is made for controlling (it's sole purpose is to control) nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
B says: The new company would control nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.


Supprising! I got the point, Thanks bkk!

OK, I discribe the poit I got here, if ot correct, pls modify it!
"agreed to control" say something uncertain, so "would control" better than " for controlling".

Pls comment! :lol:
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B is the right answer - which and that wouldn't go together - eliminates C and E - A is wrong. D is also wrong
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"For controlling" is correct idiom?
For me, "To control" sounds much better.

Please clarify.
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Its between A and B.
comma + ing -----> modifies the previous clause

If you see B : "would" is correct. Since its a future past.
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'forming' is correct to modify previous clause.

the companies agreed to merge......we need future in past tense form.....hence would

Hence B.
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I'll go with B

A is good option but not better then B.

Its a 2008 post; so i doubt if some one has OA?
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B. forming a new company that would control

is correct.
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Whenever 'Which' is used after a comma, it always modifies the noun before the comma.
Therefore in the question 'Which' is modifying 'West'.

C,D and E are out.

'Forming' i.e is a offshoot of their agreement to merge. So an 'ING' verb is required.

Between A and B
From past we are going to the present, so we need to used 'would'.
The correct answer is B.

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111. The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
A. forming a new company for controlling
B. forming a new company that would control
C. which would form a new company that controlled
D. which formed a new company for controlling
E. which formed a new company that would control


Can someone explain why option 'A' is incorrect.

Also in option B i thought 'would' is incorrect since the event is not about "future in the past."

Please advise where i am going wrong
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111. The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.
A. forming a new company for controlling
B. forming a new company that would control
C. which would form a new company that controlled
D. which formed a new company for controlling
E. which formed a new company that would control


Can someone explain why option 'A' is incorrect.

Also in option B i thought 'would' is incorrect since the event is not about "future in the past."

Please advise where i am going wrong


Hi! There,

Here are my 2 cents.

Two companies have agreed to do something. This function that they have agreed on is in the future and hypothetical. This is the reason 'B' is correct over 'A'

Secondly, I think that instead of 'for', 'to' must have been used as the intention of two companies will be shown by use of 'to'

Any thoughts?
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The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.

A. forming a new company for controlling
B. forming a new company that would control
C. which would form a new company that controlled
D. which formed a new company for controlling
E. which formed a new company that would control


"controling" in choice A means that some other agent , not the new company , will perform the controling. this is not logical. the two companies do not make a new company for someone/something else to control.

Originally posted by thangvietnam on 20 Sep 2018, 01:40.
Last edited by thangvietnam on 16 Nov 2021, 01:25, edited 1 time in total.
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The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.

A. forming a new company for controlling
B. forming a new company that would control
C. which would form a new company that controlled
D. which formed a new company for controlling
E. which formed a new company that would control


in choice A, "for controlling" dose not refer to subject of "forming", the two companies. "controling"here refer to general action not belonging to any noun in the sentence. So, "controlling" has not agent whick do "controlling". So, meaning is unclear and not logic

choice B show clearly that the new company do controlling. this is logic
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The two oil companies agreed to merge their refining and marketing operations in the Midwest and the West, forming a new company for controlling nearly fifteen of the nation’s gasoline sales.

A. forming a new company for controlling

For controlling is not idiomatic

B. forming a new company that would control
correct

C. which would form a new company that controlled
which can not modify the whole preceding clause

D. which formed a new company for controlling
which can not modify the whole preceding clause

E. which formed a new company that would control
which can not modify the whole preceding clause
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