Hi
ratesman,
Thank you for your post. Boosting that GMAT score will definitely be valuable if you're targeting the likes of Haas, Booth, Kellogg, etc (and even others in the next tranche of schools). When are you retaking the exam?
With respect to the GPA, where did you rank in your graduating class? Like were you in the top 20%, around average, below average, etc.? That information is more important than the number itself, particularly when admissions committees are evaluating international GPAs. For example, a 3.1 GPA in the U.S. is usually fairly low these days (given rampant grade inflation), but if your university had a fixed grading curve, or a 3.1 signified high or good performance, then that context is critical. I am not super worried about your GPA, but I'd love to know those details.
Beyond the stats, key elements for you are going to be unpacking and communicating the value of your experiences; detailing the specifics of your goals, how an MBA is an essential next step toward them (what knowledge, skills, and experiences are you missing and need to acquire via the MBA?), and what the deeper motivations are behind these goals (what drives you? what are you trying to solve?); conveying how exactly Haas or any other program helps you fill these necessary gaps and propels you forward; articulating what unique contributions you can make to the program and how exactly you plan to do so; and sharing who you are, what makes you you, your passions, purpose, authentic self, etc. Please feel free to take a look at this blog post for more detail:
https://www.avantiprep.com/blog/the-mos ... on-processThat might sound like a whole bunch of business school cliches, and I know you can't capture everything in a simple post like this, but (beyond boosting your GMAT score, which you seem pretty confident you'll be able to do), the way you've positioned your experiences and goals feels fairly black and white, even fairly conventional. I don't quite see the person, the purpose, or the differentiated "pop" to your story -- or, more specific to Haas, how you've
questioned the status quo, for example. I'm sure these things are there behind the scenes, and the good news is that it's within your control to introspect, brainstorm, break down your life and experiences, and weave it all back together in a way that accomplishes all of the things that I've highlighted above. As you do so, consider how these experiences and themes align with the culture of the schools to which you're applying, and in what ways they create mutual "fit" (e.g., with Haas's
Four Defining Principles).
I realize some of these concepts might feel a bit abstract in a static post like this, so please feel free to shoot me a note (
greg@avantiprep.com) or
sign up for a Free Consultation, and we can have a more fruitful, back-and-forth conversation. (As noted above, I am also curious to hear when you plan to retake the GMAT and learn more details and context about your GPA.)
Best Regards,
Greg
Founder,
Avanti Prep / Haas Alumnus
ratesman wrote:
Could you kindly review my profile for the 2019-2020 admission cycle?
I apologize for the very lengthy post.
My profile/stats:
* 28 this year, Southeast Asian (Chinese) based in Singapore
* GMAT: 710 (Q49, V36, IR7); first "blind" attempt; will be looking aiming for 750-770.
* GPA: 3.1/4.0; one of the top colleges/target schools in Singapore, this is my primary concern
* No. of WE: 3 years as of now (started upon graduation in May 2016).
>> Spent 1 year in the wealth management division (front office sales) of a tier1 US bank
>> Was a top performer and earmarked for promotion at the end of the year
>> However, I have always wanted to work in financial markets. Hence, I left for a tier2 investment bank after 1 year of cold calling
>> Joined on contract. Performance was good and they created a headcount for me after 1 year.
>> Got promoted to senior analyst in my 2nd year. Given additional responsibilities to cover 2 sets of clients (essentially 2 men's job)
* Extracurricular activities during college:
>> Elected into student office during college. Initiated and led various signature events
>> Part of a major band in school. Invited for various paid gigs and even overseas performances
>> Took part in various case competitions and overseas study trips
* Extracurricular activities post-college:
>> Part of the same alumni band
>> Part of an alumni mentoring circle
>> Volunteers in a church - mentoring younger boys
>> Freelance as a wedding pianist
Post MBA goals:
* Short/medium term - consulting with MBB with a focus on public sector/government or financial services (am not fully certain on the focus to be very honest) in the US. I plan to stay in the US for a few years. Alternatively, I'd be happy to explore options in general management/strategy. I believe all my short term goals are realistic with a T15 MBA.
* Long term - I am not looking to start any company or join a VC/HF/PE. I personally believe I am better suited to working in a large corporate. Hence, I am looking for longevity within the mgmt consulting firm or move into a strategy/COO role in the public sector/financial services.
I would like to have an immersive experience at school. Smaller size would be a plus, not a must. Would like a place with a heavy focus on teamwork and collaboration. Strength in general management will be a plus.
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