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# Warning that computers in the United States are not secure

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Warning that computers in the United States are not secure, the National Academy of Sciences has urged the nation to revamp computer security procedures, institute new emergency response teams, creating a special nongovernment organization to take charge of computer security planning.

(A) creating a special nongovernment organizationv to take
(B) creating a special nongovernment organization that takes
(C) creating a special nongovernmentorganization for taking
(D) and create a special nongovernment organization for taking
(E) and create a special nongovernment organization to take

The correct choice is E

My doubt is relating to the comma used before 'create'. Shouldn't be the correct answer choice be without the comma. If I remove the comma would the meaning of the sentence changes?Is the comma before create necessary?
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Warning that computers in the United States are not secure, the National Academy of Sciences has urged the nation to revamp computer security procedures, institute new emergency response teams, creating a special nongovernment organization to take charge of computer security planning.

(A) creating a special nongovernment organizationv to take
(B) creating a special nongovernment organization that takes
(C) creating a special nongovernmentorganization for taking
(D) and create a special nongovernment organization for taking
(E) and create a special nongovernment organization to take

The correct choice is E

My doubt is relating to the comma used before 'create'. Shouldn't be the correct answer choice be without the comma. If I remove the comma would the meaning of the sentence changes?Is the comma before create necessary?

Even after several reminders you have not complied with the forum rules: neither you have edited your question title nor you have stopped creating duplicate posts.I would be forced to issue a warning if this continues.
This topic was already discussed warning-that-computers-in-the-united-states-are-not-secure-22713.html
Moreover this topic was discussed in 2005 when OG13 wasn't published.Are you sure about the source of this question?
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Re: OG-13, Question 18   [#permalink] 21 Nov 2013, 01:20
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