sudarshan22 wrote:
Project SC Butler: Day 98 Sentence Correction (SC1)
For SC butler Questions Click Here Wary of potential predators, including humans, and prone to high levels of anxiety, Australian wildlife biologists must practice patience when attempting the spot the platypus. Meaning:Even if we notice modifier misplacement, we can get intended meaning:
1. the platypus does two things:
..............wary of potential predators - including humans
..............prone to high levels of anxiety
2. Australian wildlife biologists must be really patient if they want to spot the platypus
Errors and POE:Who wary and prone? Australian wildlife biologists? No. The platypus
Modifier misplacement, opening modifiers are in non-undelined part, so we need to start with modified entity after the comma. We need
the platypusEliminate (A), (B) and (D).
(A)
Australian wildlife biologists must practice patience when attempting the spot the platypus
(B)
Australian wildlife biologists must practice patiently when they attempt to spot the platypus
(C) the platypus can only be spotted by Australian wildlife biologists who practice patience
(D)
biologists of Australian wildlife must practice patiently when attempting the spot the platypus
(E) the platypus is most often spotted by Australian wildlife biologists willing to practice patience
Between (C) and (E)
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(C) the platypus can only be spotted by Australian wildlife biologists who practice patience
(E) the platypus is most often spotted by Australian wildlife biologists willing to practice patience
Both of them gramatically correct. So we are down to meaning.
By the timer statistic we can see 54% is for (C) - myself was also in this percentage
This is the most tricky part of the SC in GMAT, we really have to be LITERALLY strict with meaning, and put away our PREJUDICES such as this answer too wordy or sounds awful.
(C) the platypus can only be spotted by Australian wildlife biologists who practice patience From the first glance (C) seems clean and concise in comparison with long (E), there is high temptation to choose it.
If we LITERALLY down to meaning, "can only be spotted" is not exactly intended meaning of the original sentence.
We know that if Australian wildlife biologists wants to spot the platypus, they has to be patient.
But (C) implies that the platypus
CAN ONLY be spotted by Australian wildlife biologists, so other people
CANNOT see the the platypus - this is clear deviation from the intended meaning. So (C) is wrong.
(E) the platypus is most often spotted by Australian wildlife biologists willing to practice patiencethe platypus is most often spotted - is much more clear than (C).
but I don't like "Australian wildlife biologists willing to practice patience" - we don't know biologists are willing to practice or not willing from the original sentence.I didn't choose (E) because of 'willing'
It seems more wordy than (C).
But again we have to be really careful with meaning - even if "willing" a little bit strange to me 'most often spotted' is 100% better than 'can only.
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E is the answer
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