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JUST A DETAILED REVIEW OF WHAT I DO and what i am.... I work for a public sector bank wherein the government of India owns 55%... there is tough competition to get into this job.. its not a Investment bank or a foreign bank... its a government bank with a triple bottom line... it may be treated as government career as most of our day to day functions involve implementing government policies with respect to financial inclusion, out reach of credit to rural poor, improving agriculture sector through involvement with village governments, engaging with rural women to uplift them through Self help groups, etc ( and i have done this as a job for 3.5 of 4 years on a daily basis)

Background and nationality-
26 years , Indian, male,

Undergrad Information- Aerospace Engineer - SRM UNIVERSITY
7.32/10 GPA- top 25% of the class- (university level- TOP 40 in India)

GMAT: 730 ( on 3 gmat prep mocks -- test on Nov 7th with target of 770 which i will likely achieve)

Work experience and leadership - largest bank and financial services group (public sector) of the country ( back bone of the Indian economy )... State Bank of India (TOP 50 global bank and a F 500 company) .. selected as one of the 2000 officers out of 2.5 million applicants.

1. Credit analyst- 6 months- Commercial Credit- State Bank of India
Ensuring risk quality and credit quality aspects of proposals appraised keeping in view the credit policy of the bank. Performing industry analysis, due diligence processes, etc. Obtaining and analysing relevant financial information, including operating statements and balance sheets for carrying out CRA exercise/preparation of proposals for underwriting new loans, increasing loan commitments, periodical review or substantive changes in terms.Preparation of reports of Special Mention Accounts (NPA) for submission to the appropriate authorities.
Carrying out inspection of units as and when required and mandated in the loan agreement.Ensuring compliance with the bank’s credit policy, local regulatory requirements and compliance with the central bank. Coordinate with officers handling opreations to ensure timely updating and modification of data/terms and conditions/ date of review/approval etc are in the system as and when such change takes place for ensuring correctness of data and information. Achieved more than 35% growth over existing loan book of the asset management team that I worked in a span of 4 months. Appraised credit facilities to the tune of $99 million (Rs 705 cr). Handled 17 corporates accounts with a total exposure of $244.36 million.



2. Deputy Branch Manager of large branch- 1 year 2 months- State bank of India
Incharge of Branch Operations, the head of staff, and head of personal banking division at the branch level.Was directly responsible for the functioning, training, and working of 8 full time staff members. Was incharge of business development in the areas of customer acquisition, agriculture, bullion backed credit, personal segment advances, deposit mobilisation, and cross selling.
Achievements
MANAGING DIRECTOR’S CLUB- MUTUAL FUNDS- OUSTANDING PERFORMANCE IN Bank's MUTUAL FUNDS- 3RD IN THE STATE AMONG 19853 EMPLOYEES.
GOLD QUALIFIER IN YEAR END CAMPAIGN- MUTUAL FUND- FELICITATED BY CHIEF GENERAL MANAGER.. 7th among 19853 employees.
CHIEF GENERAL MANAGER’S CLUB- SBI GENERAL INSURANCE- TOP 3 IN THE STATE
Adjudged the best Deputy Branch Manager in the Network of 850 branches by the General Manager of the network
Adjudged the best Deputy Branch Manager in the Region of 48 branches by the Assistant General Manager/ Regional Manager

The following are the achievements of the team that I lead as the DBM
Gold loan campaign- Was among the 35 branches that qualified in the national level twice in 2 back to back months
QUALIFIED xyz CAMPAIGN- TOPPER AT THE NETWORK LEVEL AMONG 830 BRANCHES.
Achieved an Audit score of ‘AA’ a rare feat given the current banking scenario in india.
DEPUTY GENERAL MANAGER’S CLUB – NOMINATED BY ALL THE DGMS IN THE STATE TO BE BEST BRANCH AMONG 1300 BRANCHES.


3. Branch Manager – 8 months- State Bank of India
As branch manager lead a team of 4 staff members with Rs35 millions of business. Primarily responsible for business development of the branch, functioning of the staff, marketing, appraising MSME credit proposals, ensuring due-diligence of all liability and asset products, and overall security measures of the branch premises.As Branch Manager and team lead, I had along with my team successfully tripled the number of deposit holders in a span of 6 months, increased the agri-gold loan business by 150% over the previous fiscal, sourced and apprised MSME loans to the value of 300% the asset portfolio of the branch, made the branch a 100% digitally banked rural branch from 15% previously by conducting digital awareness programs in the nearby villages, with the help of Sarpanchs ( head of the village level government) and also insured 85% of salaried factory workers from a previous level of 3% a feat appreciated by the GM of the network.

4. New recruit officer - 2 years- State Bank of India
Mandatory time of 2 years of learning of the bank policies and assisting the branch functionaries in business development.
Handled crowds of about 20,000 everyday for 3 months during the demonetization (lineups were 2-3 kms) exercise that took place in 2016 (the greatest challenge at the time).
Increased revenue of a branch by 50%.

Leadership
Leadership (extra-curricular):

1. Organiser and Head of Planning Committee – DEPARTMENT FEST – 2013
Organized and planned the UN international Space week in Aerospace Department. Planned, Created, and set-up events for participation. Coordinated and Managed 50+ volunteers for the success of the technical fest.

2. Joint Secretary and English teacher- a student based NGO- 2012-2013
Was a part of the management team of a student based NGO. As Joint Secretary, I developed syllabus and teaching functions, guidelines for environment awareness focus campaigns , put together the online campaigning strategy, formulated HR policies including setting up of different verticals , conducting interviews for on-boarding of volunteers, conducting induction programs for new volunteers of the newly formed NGO. I had also introduced Volunteer incentive program for extraordinary recognition. I was also given additional responsibility of being in charge of the book wings program where I planned, organized, scheduled classes on a weekly basis for teaching English to under-privileged children.

3. Director & President – student based ngo -2013-2015
As the director of Go Green, I was directly responsible for 200 volunteers. Organized Beach clean-up programs, environmental cleanliness awareness campaigns, water conversation campaigns, animal habitat restoration programs, sanitation awareness programs etc., . As the director, I was in charge of proper policy implementation of the NGO to ensure effective outreach of the awareness campaigns, build relationships with the external agencies for planning events of a larger scale, ensuring that every volunteer is well versed on climate change & sustainable development goals relating to environment and helping the junior volunteers in the on-boarding by conducting induction programs and team building exercises. As the first Director, I had an additional responsibility of formulating polices on succession of the directors and voting of green-captains .

4. Volunteer- Earthlings- 2015-present
active environmental activist in my city and region by participating in awareness programs and educating the general public.( couldnt take up a leadership position because of time constraints as i have 6 day week and have to cme in even on sundays ... that being said i have always pitched my view because of my experience of running an NGO)

Community and others- (dont know what to write here) - Have a deep connection with nature and environment. Always been an active activist for environmental causes. Have been volunteering for the past 7 years of my life biweekly to raise awareness and continue to do so

Post MBA goals- Want to move to consulting with a specialization in public sector and climate policy and hope to make it to MBB after mba.
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Hi!

I am 24, Indian, UG in Computer Science Engineering.

Work ex: Consulting at Tier-II consulting firm ( Fortune 500 professional services company) - Got a policy exception to join consulting from technology without an MBA - the youngest member of consulting practice at my company in India - due for promotion which will make 3 promotions in 3 years of my career at the company.

Extra-curricular:

1. Trustee of a sports foundation - We train underprivileged kids in sports for free with an aim to make them professional athletes. This foundation is under leadership of an accomplished Paralympian
2. Advisor to an NGO which has fixed over 500 garbage dumps in India
3. Advisor to Member of Parliament ( Congressman ) - Help him with policies and initiatives around startups and tech

Reason for MBA - Get a deeper understanding of business and global markets and build a global network. I want to come back to India post-MBA and work for a VC along with helping the government in building a strong startup ecosystem for my country.

I am planning to write an MBA in the next 4 months and apply to class of 2021. You advice will be very helpful formulizing my strategy going forward.

Thanks in advance!
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HI! Hoping for your help in evaluating my profile. Thanks!

Demographic
27 years old. Male from the Philippines.
Undergraduate Degree: BS Management Engineering (Honors Program), GPA 2.80
GMAT: 710 (considering retaking it to offset my low GPA)

Work Experience
5 years in the Oil & Gas Industry working for a “Big Oil” Company
- Completed the competitive “Big Oil” Graduate Program
- Assigned in various regions in the Philippines. Within the 5 years I’ve been with the company I have already held 6 different and challenging roles and have been promoted the equivalent of 4 times.
- Assigned as the terminal manager for one of “Big Oil’s” largest terminals in the country. Had 4 direct reports and over 100 contractors reporting to me. Historically, I was the youngest manager for the terminal I was assigned in.
- In my current role I responsible for the management of several contractors/haulers who deliver to the most significant delivery envelope in the Philippines (Metro Manila)
- I was recognized and awarded as one of the top outstanding employees In the company for my performance in 2018
- I have led several large projects for the company that have provided millions of dollars in benefits. I have also been given significant responsibility by the company (e.g. Terminal Manager role) for the positions I’ve been in.
- Every year we go through performance rankings, and I have consistently been ranked high against my peers and have been given excellent performance feedback.

Extra Curricular
Triathlete
- I’ve joined many triathlon’s including two 70.3 Ironman events.
- Currently I am training for my first full Ironman 140.6 which will be in 2020.
Volunteer Work
- I’ve participated in various coastal clean up activities across the Philippines thanks to the opportunities provided to me through my work

Reason for MBA (Still working/reflecting on this part)
- Seeing the “bigger picture”, I’ve been quite fortunate in having several roles across operations but I do not yet have experience in other areas of business such as finance, marketing, sales, etc. I plan on majoring in strategy so I can capitalize on the various classes provided by MBA’s schools to develop a more wholistic approach when it comes to solving business problems.
- Diverse culture and international student profile. Adapting the best practices and management styles of different people. Coming from an “asian” background I do tend to be shy and not vocal, this is something I hope I can work on by being exposed to the “western” side of the world.
- My end goal would be to land in a role in a consulting company by using my skills (A strong foundation in operations, and “big picture” view of the needs of businesses)

Reason for the low GPA
- The course I finished was highly competitive (only 50% of us graduated) and as a honors course, it was one of the more prestigious courses of the university
- Poor balance of time, I was heavily involved in extra-curricular activities. I led several student org projects and was also a member of the fencing varsity team (I won gold in our UAAP (NCAA for the americas) competition). I plan on showing that I have already overcome this weakness through my success in work.

Questions: Do I need to re-take the GMAT to make up for my low GPA? Is 710 enough? How are my chances?
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Hi all!

Looking to get some input on my profile

Gender: Male
Nationality: Danish
Age: 25
Education: BSc in Business Administration and Project Management from Copenhagen Business School
GPA: 10.6 out of 12
Education, other: Exchange semester at National University of Singapore
GMAT: Took my first test while I was really sick. Got a 680 - I expect clear improvement on my next test.
TOEFL: 118
Work experience: Working for the family business at our US-office (HQ is in Denmark). The company engineers and manufactures high tech equipment for the wind turbine industry.
Specifically, I work with Sales and Business Development. I have worked full time for the company for 3.5 years (about 2.5 years in the US and 1 year in DK).
I also worked part-time for 2 years while studying (approx. 20 hours per week) for an investment firm developing solar energy. So clear background with a focus on renewables and finance.
Community and others: Served as a member of the study board at my bachelor's program. I was a contact person for exchange students coming to my university.
Post-MBA goals: Either continue working with the family business or start my own company.
Anything else?: I have a pretty strong international background, having worked in the US for a few years now, lived in Singapore for half a year and I have also lived in Spain for 1 year back when I was in 9th grade. I did a lot of bicycling in my youth and had a lot of races at a semi-professional level with sponsors.

One of the things I am really not sure about is how to approach the fact that I am working for the family business.
On the one hand, I can see how the school would like this, as I will be a "low risk" student in terms of securing employment once done with my MBA. Furthermore, working at the family business also means that I get to work with some fairly big tasks despite my young age. Also, I have really got to see a lot of different aspects of the business, both working in our production facilities helping out with manufacturing, seen the equipment in use in the field, and most recently worked closely with our top clients in the US.
But on the other hand, I am afraid if the schools may think that I have not truly earned the progress that I have made over the past years or that I am not truly qualified for what I do (lots of responsibility at a pretty young age).
Does anyone have experience with or knowledge about how B schools look at this?

Thanks so much in advance! Looking forward to reading your thoughts on my profile.
/Karl
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New post 16 Nov 2019, 17:17
Hi!

I would like to have a sense of the trade-off between age and GMAT score. As well as an evaluation of my chances to get into Sloan.

The question is simple: Apply with a 680 GMAT this year (Intake 2020:R2) or apply with an estimated 710 GMAT but one year older (intake 2021:R1)?

Average GMAT for Sloan is super high, as we all know, so getting closer definitely matters, but also I turn 29 on 2020 so I fear about age discrimination. My first exam without any studying was 640 and I've gone up only 40 points so I know I can get higher with time and effort. The rest of my application would remain "the same" I would have an extra year of managerial experience though as I've recently been promoted.

Background
Demographics
Latin (Salvadoran) Male, 28
Studies
Majored in Economics from country's top business school
Magna Cum Laude
Partial Scholarship from a national program based on academic performance
GPA: 8.8 (10 point based scale, top 5 out of 90)
1 year double degree program (exchange) with a German university (majored in International Business Management)
Current GMAT
680
Work experience
5 years: 3 in FMCG for a world known company, 2 in a telecom multinational
3 years in analytics, 2 in Product Management. A total of 5 different roles/titles. Currently a manager with a team of 2.
Recommendations
Directors in both companies I've worked for. I was a direct report. I expect an honest but very good recommendation.
Community
Teacher in an "english for work" program directed at high-school students in low income area (past 2 years).
Member of a known international youth organization seeking to help local communities (current).
Others
Started an mobile app design company in 2012 (while studying 2nd year). Sold my stake after a year, company stills exists today (small).
Economic debate national winner representing my university
2nd place in national entrepreneurship competition
Post MBA goals
Start a tech consumer or BPO firm based in latam

Any help appreciated!
Thank you very much.
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Hi all!

Looking to get some input on my profile

Gender: Male
Nationality: Danish
Age: 25
Education: BSc in Business Administration and Project Management from Copenhagen Business School
GPA: 10.6 out of 12
Education, other: Exchange semester at National University of Singapore
GMAT: Took my first test while I was really sick. Got a 680 - I expect clear improvement on my next test.
TOEFL: 118
Work experience: Working for the family business at our US-office (HQ is in Denmark). The company engineers and manufactures high tech equipment for the wind turbine industry.
Specifically, I work with Sales and Business Development. I have worked full time for the company for 3.5 years (about 2.5 years in the US and 1 year in DK).
I also worked part-time for 2 years while studying (approx. 20 hours per week) for an investment firm developing solar energy. So clear background with a focus on renewables and finance.
Community and others: Served as a member of the study board at my bachelor's program. I was a contact person for exchange students coming to my university.
Post-MBA goals: Either continue working with the family business or start my own company.
Anything else?: I have a pretty strong international background, having worked in the US for a few years now, lived in Singapore for half a year and I have also lived in Spain for 1 year back when I was in 9th grade. I did a lot of bicycling in my youth and had a lot of races at a semi-professional level with sponsors.

One of the things I am really not sure about is how to approach the fact that I am working for the family business.
On the one hand, I can see how the school would like this, as I will be a "low risk" student in terms of securing employment once done with my MBA. Furthermore, working at the family business also means that I get to work with some fairly big tasks despite my young age. Also, I have really got to see a lot of different aspects of the business, both working in our production facilities helping out with manufacturing, seen the equipment in use in the field, and most recently worked closely with our top clients in the US.
But on the other hand, I am afraid if the schools may think that I have not truly earned the progress that I have made over the past years or that I am not truly qualified for what I do (lots of responsibility at a pretty young age).
Does anyone have experience with or knowledge about how B schools look at this?

Thanks so much in advance! Looking forward to reading your thoughts on my profile.
/Karl


Hi Karl,

Wow--you have a really unique, interesting background that will help you stand out from the crowd. Business schools are very familiar with family businesses so I wouldn't be concerned that they will somehow look down on or not value your accomplishments. (In fact, many of them can appreciate that in some ways the dynamics of a family business are even more challenging than those of a company where you're essentially working with strangers. We've seen a number of truly outstanding essays over the years delve into this.) All of the top schools have a Family Business Club, and most restrict membership to students who already have work experience in a family business or intend to work for a family business after graduation. (And you're spot on that ad coms love to see people with guaranteed jobs already lined up!) I'd encourage you to find the contact info for students in the club--most will have an officer specifically for prospective students--and reach out to them to learn more about both how family businesses are viewed in the admissions process and the extra-curricular and academic offerings for students in this area.

Between renewable energy with experience in biz dev and investing and international work experience, you check a lot of boxes. As I'm sure you know, however, your GMAT will likely hold you back unless you can bring it up. We're seeing averages ~730+ at the top schools so if you think you left something on the table because you were sick I'd recommend retaking it--even waiting another year to apply if you need the extra time as you're fairly young.

I hope that helps and feel free to reach out if you have additional specific questions!
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Hi,

Please, if you can, evaluate my profile as an international applicant for the MBA program

Nationality: Indian
Age: 29
Undergraduate Qualification: Bachelor in technology with specialisation in computer science engineering.
GMAT: not taken yet
Work experience: 6+ years
About me - An engineer turned entrepreneur, started a textiles manufacturing and trading business, while studying, with my father (as his prior experience and willingness to work in the same industry he's ever been). Completed my engineering side-by-side. Then left for job, but kept involved in business somehow of the location benefits as my manufacturing process used to take place in the same city I got a job in. Then moved back for business, leaving my job. Since then, been in business and have turned quite a lot of things around for us, and for the market in a good way.
key achievements --
Turned everything from credit to cash.
Took things online,
and added a customer-centric approach.

All these things and ideas were new for the market and my customers, but now productivity has increased for both.
I think entrepreneurship is a good idea for my MBA, but not sure if it’s a good idea in case I want to experience something different like a job maybe for some time. Also, I am so much involved into everything I do, I don't want myself to not make use of my 2 years at an MBA program, so I am a little cautious of schools where I may not find the right mindset of people whom I can be with.

Why MBA?
I have some ideas related to my field which I think can really help and change the way things are done. I want to incorporate tech into small scale manufacturing, and I don't mean just computers. I am looking for a school where I can get some tech exposure along with my MBA, as I may need to take 1-2 tech courses along with an MBA.

Extracurriculars: I am an active sports guy. I play tennis, have coaching experience of swimming (summers only :P) have formed 2 groups in my city -- running and cycling, started with 2 people now each group has around 500+ participants, 60% of them are moderately active, 80% are somewhat active.
I trek a lot and have taken most treks closer to my place, as I work 7 days so it's hard to take an off as treks need a lot of days, but I manage that somehow by minimizing risk.
I am a cyclist, too. you'll find me cycling in the hills, if not trekking.
I have taken part in brevet, 200 km one.
I am a part of the national cycling group and I represent my city for the group.
Also, I am a participant of a blood donation group, we provide blood to blood banks and the ones in need, in person, too. we don't charge for it, it's a free community service for anyone in need. we are presently handling 3 states and the group has around 5000 members, most of them are active. It's run by the people for the people, but then there are too many things to do.

References: From clients to these groups, I can ask anyone to recommend me, but I think it makes more sense if I ask my clients or business people.

shall I apply?
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I’d greatly appreciate if my profile could be evaluated. Feedback regarding my chances of getting admitted and tips for improving those odds are welcome. I will try to be brief in order not to take a lot of your time. Thanks in advance.


Personal Info: 25 years old Brazilian (from Salvador).

Education: Undergrad - Law School (not ranked);

UNDERGRADUATE GPA: 7,09/10 (Due to imaturity, since i got into university with 16 years old);
POSTGRADUATE GPA: 9,01/10 (Business Law post grad at the best law school of Brazil);
GMAT: 720 (Q50, V38, IR 7, AWA 5.5);
IELTS: 8.0;

Work Exp: 4 years of exp at matriculation:
2 years as an intern in M&A (boutique law firm);
3 years as an Associate Lawer - M&A (boutique law firm);

Extra Cs: Head of the pro bono practise of the law firm i work;
Member of the Brazilian Bar Business Law Commission;
2 months as an English teacher for AIESEC at Colombia;

Languages: Portuguese (fluent), English (fluent/advanced), Spanish ( intermediate) and French (level c1 - advanced)

Goals: To change my career and break into finance industry (PE or IB).

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Please help in evaluating profile:

GMAT - 730
Undergrad - B.Tech in Biotechnology (major) and Computer Science (Minor) (Undergrad) from IIT Guwahati (Top 10 in India)
GPA - 8.6/10 (Top 15% in my class)
Background - Indian - non IT Male
Total Work Ex - 5.5 years (~1 Year in IT consulting and ~4.5 years in consumer tech startups)

Brief Summary

During my 2 month B.Tech internship at University of Strasbourg - France, I published a research paper on HIV in International Journal of Virology. I have spent almost 3.5 years in a early stage start-up , where I was the first Data Analyst to be hired and went on to lead the Analytics team as Associate Director - Data Analytics. I was also working on Central Growth strategy and helping the CEOs office in raising a $50 Million Series D funding. I am currently working in a mid stage startup as a Sr Manager in Strategic Business Planning Team, scaling and commercialising the Commercial Interior Design vertical and refining the Annual Operating Plan for the entire organisation. I have also worked with an IT MnC in India for about a year as a Validation Consultant for the Regulatory Domain in the Medical Devices Vertical where I was helping the clients as well as internal teams to create products compliant with the FDA rules. I have done volunteering work with an NGO for 2 months, during which I trained the students from Primary Government School to participate in city level competitions where the children secured top positions. I have also taken a few online courses on Data Science and a executive course on Project Management from IIMB, one of the top B schools in India. I can get recommendations from the Founders/CXOs in the startups which I have worked. My short term MBA goal is to get into a startup and contribute in a larger capacity or join a corporate strategy team of a big organisation. Long term goal is to start a business on my own.
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Hey there! I would really appreciate an evaluation of my profile for admission for the MIT Sloan MBA

Stats:
Undergraduate top 10% - B.Sc. Information Systems - unknown school in Germany GPA 3.6/4
Graduate top 10% - M.Sc. Information Systems - unknown school in Germany GPA 3.7/4
Work at Tier 2 Strategy Consulting firm as Senior Associate ~ 4 years work experience
GMAT 710 with V38 / Q48, IR 8/8, AWA 5
TOEFL 119
28 years old, German, male
Exchange Semester in Korea (4month) - rather global project but have not spent much time there
No real extracurricular (aside from piano, guitar, bass)

Goal:
Looking for industry exit to Tech / FinTech player
Apply in Jan

Thanks a lot!
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Hi,
Thanks for offering to review my profile!

Background and nationality: Asian, male, 33 y/o, Indonesian (US resident)
Undergrad Information: public university in Texas with 3.7 GPA (magna cum laude), double majoring in finance and accounting
Executive Assessment: 161 (IR 18, VR 11, QR 12)
Professional certification: CPA

Professional experience:
All US based:
+ 2 years in local CPA firm as senior auditor.
+ 3 years as supervising senior auditor with big 4 accounting firms (one of EY, KPMG, PwC, Deloitte) servicing fortune 500 clients, primarily in energy and software sectors. Accolades include ovation award (top performance award), accounting system champion for southwest area, trainer / teacher for staff and experienced hire auditors' classes. Managed multi-location audits (managed US teams and a team from India remotely)
+ 3 years as audit experienced manager with one of national firms (one of GT, BDO, etc). IPO audit experiences
+ 2 years as executive in a private oil & gas exploration production company (starting with controller and now CFO) growing through M&A.

Business experience / side gig:
+ chairman and co-founder of a design and build construction company in Indonesia with a friend (US licensed and educated engineer) in 2018. 4 full time office employees. 20 field workers. Employing virtual reality design. i handle the financial aspect of the company and assist the ceo with sales and marketing (including creating website etc). my sales efforts generated approx. 60% of company's revenues.

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+ 7 years as community leader at church
+ 2 years volunteering as mentor for prospective graduates through a mentoring program at a Texas university.
+ volunteered for a friend's provincial legislative election (currently elected provincial senator in Jakarta whose focused is battling corruption there)

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+ move to tech / fintech industry as an exec or strategic consulting
+ apply what I learn at Columbia for my construction company
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Demographic
28F Black American (parents are Caribbean immigrants)

GMAT
710 - Q44 V44. “Perfectly balanced, as all things should be.”

Undergraduate
3.45 GPA. BFA in Industrial Design (Product Design) from a school that’s widely considered the top design school in the US. Lots of clubs that are either inherently leadership based (peer mentor, freshman orientation leader), or where I held leadership positions. I also took a course at Sloan during undergrad that was a collaboration with students from my major at my school so I will definitely speak to knowing what Sloan quality looks like from the inside.

Work Experience
A little over 4 years of full time by matriculation. Mostly in data analytics across a couple of industries, most recently marketing strategy. One title promotion at my last job and I’m up for one at my current job that’ll happen between application and interview (if I get one). Supplemental work experience includes starting a medical nonprofit with my family (on my parents’ island) hosting and producing a PBS documentary show, and pro bono PR work for a startup toy company.

Post MBA Goals
I want to work in product management so I can combine my education and experience in a meaningful way. I’m also interested in emerging tech as a focus.

Concerns
Everything is kind of just “good” and nothing is knocked out of the park. GPA is not bad enough to hurt but not good enough to be a plus. GMAT is great in general but lower than average for Sloan.
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Hi everyone!

Ok, let's try this...

Personal info: Brazilian male. Caucasian. 33 years old (will be 34 at intake). 1 child.

Career and extra-curricular activities

Before college: I had several other jobs, ranging from waiter to entrepreneur.
During college: President of Junior Enterprise (student-run consulting firm providing business advice to local small businesses.
Undergrad degree: Business - at age 28 (I come from a modest family so it took me longer to be able to go to college). Avg. graduation score 82% (we don't use GPA).
After college: 3 years in consulting (2 of them at MBB) + ~2.5 years in large tech companies (current)

Motivations
Why MBA: [short version] Become a more well-rounded professional, developing the skills (hard, soft and interpersonal) that I need in order to build a successful path to senior management.
Post-MBA paths: Go back to tech, preferably a FinTech, or go back to consulting for a few more years.

GMAT: 700 (Q46, V40)

A few more details... As I mentioned, I come from a very modest family. I started working when I was 12 and moved by myself when I was 15. I always studied in public schools (in Brazil, that means lower quality education, unfortunately). I had many ups and down in life, until eventually I managed to set a clear course. Applied to MBB for the first time on my senior year in college. Didn't pass. Went to a boutique firm for 1 year. Applied to MBB again. Passed! Spent 2 years there. Moved to tech industry (working at a Uber competitor) and currently work at a FinTech.

Thanks in advance!

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Hi everyone, I am a 22-year-old Australian about to begin my final year of undergraduate studies with the intention to complete an MBA through Sloan's Early Admissions program. Due to my expected graduation date, I am eligible to apply to potential programs in 2021. I believe that my GMAT score and essay(s) will ‘make or break’ my application. I appreciate any feedback on my profile and would like to hear opinions on what would be an appropriate GMAT score to target for MIT Sloan. My current train of thought is minimum --> 710, target --> 730, dream --> 750.



(1) BACKGROUND

Work experience:

  • Big 3 German automotive manufacturer (Volkswagen, BMW, Mercedes)

      6-month internship in Germany

  • Prestigious boutique German automotive manufacturer

      14-month internship + thesis in Germany.

      Only (possibly first) non-EU resident at the company


Extra curriculars:

  • Founding president of the mechanical engineering student association

      200+ members in six months

      Organised an on-campus industry expo with 30+ companies and 1100 student registrations

      Company Q&As, industry visits, skill workshops, etc.

  • Elected undergraduate representative of 12,000+ students on the school’s academic board

      Hold monthly academic board meetings with the pro-vice chancellor and other high-ranking school officials. The academic board establishes the structure of academic programs and discusses school matters. There are a lot of NDAs!

  • In2Science mentor

      Mentor a classroom of low socioeconomic high school students to increase their engagement, confidence, and aspirations in STEM.

  • Student-Staff consulting representative

      Consult with my peers to identify program-related opportunities for improvement and present those issues at student-staff meetings.

  • Entrepreneurship club

      Committee member

  • Founded a side-business on a shoestring budget


  • Very early stage NPO start-up


  • Golden Key International Honour Society

  • Formula SAE


Undergrad school/major:

  • Location - Australia

  • QS 250, QS Engineering 100

  • Mechanical Engineering (Honours) | Business Management

      Will graduate with two degrees.

      Received several awards.

      Featured on university promotional material.

  • December 2020 graduation date


Other education/coursework:

  • Certificate III in Music Industry


Race/nationality:

  • White

  • Australian


Sex:

  • Male



(2) STATS

Cold GMAT Scores:

  • MGMAT#1 620 (Q40 V35)

      Taken 23/12/2019

  • GMATPrep#1 530 (Q32 V32)

      Taken 26/12/2019

  • Potential test dates: July 20’, December 20’, January 21’, February 21’


Undergrad GPA:

  • 4.0 / 4.0

      6 subjects remaining.



(3) MBA INFO

Goal of MBA:

  • [Short-term] To move away from traditional engineering roles and into management style roles particularly in NPO start-ups. By being accepted into a deferred program I will have the confidence after undergrad to take professional risks, whether that is to begin/grow a start-up or apply myself in a smaller boutique firm. Furthermore, I will have the support of the school’s network to help accelerate my professional progression in the period before matriculation.

  • [Long-term] My longer-term vision is to make a positive impact in Australia. Currently Australia has a large dependence on its mining and farming exports however both industries are in decline which will ultimately damage the economy. The automotive industry was once in this position, unfortunately the industry succumbed to the downward trend and manufacturing has since been abandoned. My goal is to bring back the automotive industry to Australia in the form of renewable and sustainable practises thus contributing jobs, innovative technology, and pride to the country.



(4) OTHER

International exposure and languages:

  • Two months in Tanzania

  • Two years in Germany

      Can speak German at an elementary workplace level which I learnt in my own time.


Matriculation:

  • Aim to work for 3-4 years before matriculating

      Assuming that I am accepted into a deferred program.

  • Will be ~27 years old at time of matriculation


Essay discussion points:

  • Aspirations to lead and make a positive impact.

      Unfortunately Fortunately I have no ‘sob stories’.

  • MBA goals

  • Time spent in Germany

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Hello!

Would be great to get any feedback if possible:

Background and nationality
-White
-Male
-American
-Age 30

Academic information
Undergrad
- 2.7 GPA
- Full scholarship to study a part of inaugural graduating class of small global business school
- Majored in finance
- Program was 2 years in Singapore and 2 years in Sydney

Grad
-4.0
-Northwestern Masters in Data Science (distance learning)
-Took mathematics (linear algebra, calculus, algorithms), an intro level class and Applied Statistics in R
-Left program (didn't think cost was worth it and wanted to pursue education full time)

GMAT: 710

Work experience and leadership
-Head of US Lending for Swedish fintech based in Stockholm managing a team of 14 tech and finance professionals
-Previously was Head of Analytics for large dutch bank fintech venture in Berlin Germany managing a team of 4
-Started career at a cleantech company doing renewable energy banking in San Francisco

Community and others
-Fellow at the royal society of arts for 3 years

Post MBA goals (want to explore the following)
-Go on to a director / VP role in fintech
-Explore PE / Venture
-Explore entrepreneurship

Why MIT
-Passion for analytics, data, technology and finance (best school for this intersection)
-Curriculum is focused on practical learning, which is where I excel (mens et manus)

Some 'sob story' details:
-"graduated" high school with 1.9 GPA from what might describe as a "not very nice place", got a lucky break into university, struggled but got through it, broke into finance by building a pricing model for the VP of Financial Product while working phones, shined from then on getting promoted roughly once a year for last 6 years, lived/ worked / studied in Asia, Australia, US and Europe over last 8 years
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New post 07 Jan 2020, 21:08
Please Evaluate my profile and any feedback would be nice

Male based in Dallas, Texas

Background and nationality: Age 29 & Black

Undergrad Information: Undergraduate GPA in Mechanical Engineering: 2.9 but Graduate School GPA in Technology Management: 3.87

GMAT: Not taken yet-Goal is >700

Work experience and leadership:
Overall experience: Operations/Manufacturing for about 7 years
Previous experience: Supply Chain Manager/Manufacturing Manager/Quality Engineering. (Fortune 500 Companies)
Current Experience: Program Manager @ Defense Aerospace company leading cross functional teams
Got promoted twice current company in 3 years

Community and others
Undergrad: Researcher at Robotics Lab, Academic Tutor and Financial Chair on National Society of Black Engineers. Multiple internships at Top companies.
Currently: Official paid mentor selected by current company to mentor high school & college students, Appointed-President of Employee Resource Group at Current job, Business Round Table Speaker-Go to high schools in surrounding areas to enlighten Kids on STEM and also tutor some STEM courses. Working in program in Dallas community with under privileged kids in alternative high schools schools to put them on the right path. Leader a Teenage program assisting college and high school students with mentorship, college admission, scholarships etc. President of National Society of Black Engineers Professional Chapter

Post MBA goals - Working in Technology and Strategy

Anything else?
Certification-PMP
Awards & Recognition: Manager of the Quarter Award & Leadership Awards
Excellent Performer ratings at work
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Hi, I would like to ask an evaluation of my profile (going for the MIT deferred admission/early applicants program).

Demographic: 23 years old, Western European, Male.

Education: GPA around 3.8 out of 4. Currently pursuing M.Sc in Business Administration in a top university in my country - focus on innovation. B.Sc. with top grades. I have been studying for periods of 3/4 months each in 4 European countries (good universities).

Internships: IT consulting and Strategy Consulting (tier 2).

Awards: many scholarships for academic merits, currently pursuing an honors program as well.


Extracurricular: I was the president of a couple of university clubs, and a member of a couple more.

Pre MBA: probably strategy consulting.
Post MBA: tech in Europe (I have plenty of experiences that show my love for tech).

GMAT: 720 (V40, Q48). Very low IR though (4)

What do you think?:) Thanks!

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Hello everyone

I am a 26 year old female from India.
GMAT : 760
Education : BTECH from a tier 2 college with GPA 8.25/10
Work experience : 4+ years of experience in a leading IT company in the country. I work in the automotive domain wherein I am involved in the development, validation and deployment of ADAS (Advanced Driver Assistance System ECU) softwares. For the past 1 year, I am in Japan, at client location, leading a team of 10 (both at onsite and offshore) wherein we are involved in the In Vehicle ECU Software development and deployment of the Driver Attention Alert System. I directly interact with our client so as to completely understand and analyse their requirements and then devise the strategy to achieve the same.
Extra-curricular : I am an avid reader and a writer. I have an online blog with over 20 published articles and over 1k followers.
Apart from this, I am a trained Bharatnatyam (Indian classical dance form) dancer, practicing dance right from the tender age of 6. I have performed at over 200 stages and have received many accolades throughout my school and university tenure.
Volunteer activities : Right from the age of 17, I have been involved in several NGO activities. While I was pursuing my 11th and 12th, I used to provide home tuitions for 10-12 under privileged students. Then while in college, I volunteered with Teach for India. I have also volunteered with Help Age India and taught our elderly basic Math and English.
I would like to know my chances at top Bschools in the world.

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New post 10 Jan 2020, 08:54
Hi gayatrisk1994,

Thank you for your post, and for sharing your profile. You, indeed, have a competitive profile for top universities. Can you share your post-MBA professional goals? Not only as they relate to the type of work that you want to do (including industry), but also the region you are targetting.

I would particularly welcome speaking about your experiences and ambitions, and see how I can help you make the transition. If you are interested, please reach out.

Best,

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Hello everyone

I am a 26 year old female from India.
GMAT : 760
Education : BTECH from a tier 2 college with GPA 8.25/10
Work experience : 4+ years of experience in a leading IT company in the country. I work in the automotive domain wherein I am involved in the development, validation and deployment of ADAS (Advanced Driver Assistance System ECU) softwares. For the past 1 year, I am in Japan, at client location, leading a team of 10 (both at onsite and offshore) wherein we are involved in the In Vehicle ECU Software development and deployment of the Driver Attention Alert System. I directly interact with our client so as to completely understand and analyse their requirements and then devise the strategy to achieve the same.
Extra-curricular : I am an avid reader and a writer. I have an online blog with over 20 published articles and over 1k followers.
Apart from this, I am a trained Bharatnatyam (Indian classical dance form) dancer, practicing dance right from the tender age of 6. I have performed at over 200 stages and have received many accolades throughout my school and university tenure.
Volunteer activities : Right from the age of 17, I have been involved in several NGO activities. While I was pursuing my 11th and 12th, I used to provide home tuitions for 10-12 under privileged students. Then while in college, I volunteered with Teach for India. I have also volunteered with Help Age India and taught our elderly basic Math and English.
I would like to know my chances at top Bschools in the world.

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