Connor1396 wrote:
what does the -ing modifier modifies in a comma -ing structure?
Does it modify the subject of the sentence before the comma or it modifies the whole sentence before the comma
Hi
Connor1396, I would say
both conditions should simultaneously satisfy.
Just want to make clear what it means by
modify the whole sentence.
For example:
Peter was born in India, graduating from Harvard.
Here, the participial phrase is
graduating from Harvard and the participial phrase here correctly modifies
Peter, the subject of the preceding clause.
However, this sentence would still
not be great because the fact that Peter was born in India, has
no correlation with Peter graduating from Harvard. These are basically two completely
Independent facts and so, there is
no reason for us to use a participial phrase here.
We would rather say:
Peter was born in India and graduated from Harvard.
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