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Re: When he could no longer play violin himself, Howard taught, [#permalink]
==> E

Either it should be "encouraged" parallel to "imparted"

in ans choice D imparting doesnot match to engouraged. So i think D should not be a correct ans.
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Re: When he could no longer play violin himself, Howard taught, [#permalink]
the answer should be E. the imparting and encouraging actually tells us what he did during his teaching. it is more like a modifier rather than a parallel structure.
that is, he taught, imparting and encouraging rather than he taught, imparted and encouraged....
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Re: When he could no longer play violin himself, Howard taught, [#permalink]
Nightmare007 wrote:
when he could no longer play violin himself, Howard taught, imparted his knowledge to students to encourage them to be as successful as he once was.
a. imparted his knowledge to students to encourage
b. and he imparted his knowledge to students and encouraged
c. and imparting his knowledge to students encouraged
d. imparting his knowledge to students and encouraged
e. imparting his knowledge to students and encouraging

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Help required. Why i find this question put in a bad format.
I can't find parallelism here nor i can find it complete.


If I consider imparting knowledge and encouraging students as modifiers of Howard taught, option E seems correct.
However, consider this structure: Howard taught, imparting his knowledge to students and encouraged students... Here taught and encouraged should be parallel as in option D.
Is option D wrong because there is no comma after students? If there was a comma after students, would encouraged be considered parallel with taught?

Experts - Kindly comment if my understanding is correct. I faced a similar issue with another question. Any help here would be highly appreciated.

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kuttingchai wrote:
==> E

Either it should be "encouraged" parallel to "imparted"

in ans choice D imparting doesnot match to engouraged. So i think D should not be a correct ans.


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The sentence is not complete as it is written. There would have to be an ‘and’ between taught and imparted for it to be correct. B is incorrect as it unnecessarily repeats the subject by using ‘he’. Therefore you must use ‘imparting’. The final clause should have parallel structure within it. Therefore E is correct, not C or D. ‘Imparting’ and ‘encouraging’ are parallel.
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