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When the damage left by the 2004 tsunami in Thailand is beheld, nature's powerful forces become immediately apparent.

a.nature's powerful forces become immediately apparent

b.nature's powerful forces become apparent immediately

c.the powerful forces of nature become apparent at once

d.the powerful forces of nature becomes immediately apparent

e.the power of nature's forces become apparent at once

please provide explanations.
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Hi,

This the first time to post in this forum, I hope I can help.

When the damage left by the 2004 tsunami in Thailand is beheld, nature's powerful forces become immediately apparent.

I look at it in this way,

when THE damage left by the 2014xxxxx is beheld, THE xxxxx should follow for parallesim.
We need the after the comma.

This will leave us with C,D, and E.

a.nature's powerful forces become immediately apparent (not parallel)
b.nature's powerful forces become apparent immediately (not parallel)
c.the powerful forces of nature become apparent at once (Correct)
d.the powerful forces of nature becomes immediately apparent (SV error, powerful forces is plural and doesn't agree with becomes)
e.the power of nature's forces become apparent at once (SV Error, the power doesn't agree with become)

Hope this helps.

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Hre the subject of the sentence is the powerfull forces of the nature

In A and B and E nature's powerful forces become the forces per se do not become powerful, so this sort of construction does not have much sense

In D we have a SV disagreement

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carcass wrote:
Hre the subject of the sentence is the powerfull forces of the nature

In A and B and E nature's powerful forces become the forces per se do not become powerful, so this sort of construction does not have much sense

In D we have a SV disagreement

C left


But, option A and B does say that nature's powerful forces become immediately apparent - Here the sentence is talking about nature's powerful forces, and this is the therefore the subject of the sentence.
Similarly, the sentence C saysthe powerful forces of nature become apparent at once - Here too, the sentence is talking about the nature's powerful forces, albeit without possessives.
A, B, C are all talking about the forces present in nature and hence these forces should be considered as subjects. Please help me understand the reasoning.
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djanand wrote:
carcass wrote:
Hre the subject of the sentence is the powerfull forces of the nature

In A and B and E nature's powerful forces become the forces per se do not become powerful, so this sort of construction does not have much sense

In D we have a SV disagreement

C left


But, option A and B does say that nature's powerful forces become immediately apparent - Here the sentence is talking about nature's powerful forces, and this is the therefore the subject of the sentence.
Similarly, the sentence C saysthe powerful forces of nature become apparent at once - Here too, the sentence is talking about the nature's powerful forces, albeit without possessives.
A, B, C are all talking about the forces present in nature and hence these forces should be considered as subjects. Please help me understand the reasoning.



First I would say this is not a GMAT type question, in option A,B, and C difference is subtle.

Option D and E violates subject verb agreement.

Option A and B are grammatically same, and definitely we can not have two choices both correct, so we are left with C using POE.

I think you should refer zakyma's explanation above, I liked that explanation.
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PiyushK wrote:
djanand wrote:
carcass wrote:
Hre the subject of the sentence is the powerfull forces of the nature

In A and B and E nature's powerful forces become the forces per se do not become powerful, so this sort of construction does not have much sense

In D we have a SV disagreement

C left


But, option A and B does say that nature's powerful forces become immediately apparent - Here the sentence is talking about nature's powerful forces, and this is the therefore the subject of the sentence.
Similarly, the sentence C saysthe powerful forces of nature become apparent at once - Here too, the sentence is talking about the nature's powerful forces, albeit without possessives.
A, B, C are all talking about the forces present in nature and hence these forces should be considered as subjects. Please help me understand the reasoning.



First I would say this is not a GMAT type question, in option A,B, and C difference is subtle.

Option D and E violates subject verb agreement.

Option A and B are grammatically same, and definitely we can not have two choices both correct, so we are left with C using POE.

I think you should refer zakyma's explanation above, I liked that explanation.

What about passive vs active?
Doesn't that count for something?
I also chose C.

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I don't think this is a valid GMAT style like question.

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Possessives should not be applied to intangible nouns like "nature" - therefore (C) "the powerful forces of nature..."

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carcass wrote:
Hre the subject of the sentence is the powerfull forces of the nature

In A and B and E nature's powerful forces become the forces per se do not become powerful, so this sort of construction does not have much sense

In D we have a SV disagreement

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I am not sure about E. Could you please help me decline that? abhimahna , please pitch in, if you have a few minutes. :)
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