Check GMAT Club Decision Tracker for the Latest School Decision Releases https://gmatclub.com/AppTrack

It is currently 23 May 2017, 12:09

Close

GMAT Club Daily Prep

Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions. We have subscribed you to Daily Prep Questions via email.

Customized
for You

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Track
Your Progress

every week, we’ll send you an estimated GMAT score based on your performance

Practice
Pays

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Not interested in getting valuable practice questions and articles delivered to your email? No problem, unsubscribe here.

Close

Request Expert Reply

Confirm Cancel

Events & Promotions

Events & Promotions in June
Open Detailed Calendar

While depressed property values can hurt some large

  new topic post reply Question banks Downloads My Bookmarks Reviews Important topics  
Author Message
TAGS:

Hide Tags

1 KUDOS received
Senior Manager
Senior Manager
avatar
Joined: 06 Apr 2005
Posts: 349
Location: USA
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 112 [1] , given: 1

While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 07:14
1
This post received
KUDOS
26
This post was
BOOKMARKED
00:00
A
B
C
D
E

Difficulty:

  65% (hard)

Question Stats:

50% (02:07) correct 50% (01:12) wrong based on 1492 sessions

HideShow timer Statistics

While depressed property values can hurt some large investors, they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity - in many cases representing a life's savings - can plunge or even disappear.

(A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose
(B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their
(C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating, because their
(D) for homeowners, it is potentially devastating in that their
(E) it can potentially devastate homeowners, whose

I don't have the OE, Please give me a detailed explanation for your answers.
[Reveal] Spoiler: OA
Request Expert Reply
If you have any questions
you can ask an expert
New!
2 KUDOS received
SVP
SVP
avatar
Joined: 14 Dec 2004
Posts: 1693
Followers: 3

Kudos [?]: 145 [2] , given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 08:22
2
This post received
KUDOS
'E' & 'D' are out, 'it' can't refer to plural 'depressed property values'.

'C' is out since there is no clear antecedent for 'their'.

in 'B', 'in that their' appears awkward & also same problem as in 'C' for 'their'.


'A' it should be. (also, 'whose' clearly refers to homeowners)
1 KUDOS received
Intern
Intern
User avatar
Joined: 29 Jul 2005
Posts: 16
Followers: 0

Kudos [?]: 1 [1] , given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 08:54
1
This post received
KUDOS
Answer Choice: A

B-'in that their' is too wordy and awkward

C &D -'for' is too confusing as a conjunction

E-'it' is unclear
1 KUDOS received
Director
Director
User avatar
Status: Verbal Forum Moderator
Joined: 17 Apr 2013
Posts: 612
Location: India
GMAT 1: 710 Q50 V36
GMAT 2: 750 Q51 V41
GMAT 3: 790 Q51 V49
GPA: 3.3
Followers: 78

Kudos [?]: 496 [1] , given: 298

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 10 Feb 2014, 04:36
1
This post received
KUDOS
OA is A for sure and Forum Moderators can Lock it. Thanks!
_________________

Like my post Send me a Kudos :) It is a Good manner.
My Debrief: http://gmatclub.com/forum/how-to-score-750-and-750-i-moved-from-710-to-189016.html

Expert Post
1 KUDOS received
Manhattan GMAT Instructor
User avatar
Joined: 30 Apr 2012
Posts: 800
Followers: 367

Kudos [?]: 745 [1] , given: 5

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 10 Feb 2014, 16:29
1
This post received
KUDOS
Expert's post
You are correct that the OA is A. This question is a really good example of shifting pronoun antecedents. Pronoun ambiguity isn't a big issue with the GMAT anymore, but shifting a pronoun's antecedent is incorrect...

KW
_________________


Kyle Widdison | Manhattan GMAT Instructor | Utah


Manhattan GMAT Discount | Manhattan GMAT Course Reviews | View Instructor Profile



1 KUDOS received
Manager
Manager
avatar
B
Joined: 03 Jan 2016
Posts: 92
WE: Operations (Manufacturing)
Followers: 0

Kudos [?]: 18 [1] , given: 14

GMAT ToolKit User Reviews Badge
Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 05 Sep 2016, 02:08
1
This post received
KUDOS
shonakshi wrote:
Is they not pointing towards large investors :? Can someone plz explain?


While depressed property values can hurt some large investors, they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity - in many cases representing a life's savings - can plunge or even disappear.

No, here "They" logically refers to depressed property values.

Do you think, large investors can be potentially devastating for homeowners w.r.t. to sentence intended meaning.

Here is how we check pronoun antecedent.

In an accident, the car hit the tree, but its engine was not severely damaged.

here, only logical antecedent for its is car. It can not be Tree because tree doesn't has go engine.

I hope this clears your doubt
1 KUDOS received
Intern
Intern
avatar
Joined: 06 Sep 2015
Posts: 32
Location: India
Schools: ISB '18
GMAT 1: 660 Q50 V28
Followers: 0

Kudos [?]: 2 [1] , given: 36

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 19 Oct 2016, 19:46
1
This post received
KUDOS
AR15J wrote:
If answer E would be - they can potentially devastate homeowners, whose


Will it be correct?


No, it won't be. "Can" is already stating a possibility so "can potentially" is redundant.

Hope this helps.
_________________

What gets measured, gets managed

1 KUDOS received
Intern
Intern
avatar
Joined: 14 Jun 2016
Posts: 9
Followers: 0

Kudos [?]: 5 [1] , given: 17

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 19 Oct 2016, 22:14
1
This post received
KUDOS
pranav6082 wrote:
AR15J wrote:
If answer E would be - they can potentially devastate homeowners, whose


Will it be correct?


No, it won't be. "Can" is already stating a possibility so "can potentially" is redundant.

Hope this helps.

Google returns millions of results for 'can potentially', and many from reliable sources, too. It does sound a bit redundant, but I doubt GMAT would base a question on this subtle a split.
1 KUDOS received
Intern
Intern
avatar
Joined: 06 Sep 2015
Posts: 32
Location: India
Schools: ISB '18
GMAT 1: 660 Q50 V28
Followers: 0

Kudos [?]: 2 [1] , given: 36

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 21 Oct 2016, 05:37
1
This post received
KUDOS
seanick wrote:
pranav6082 wrote:
AR15J wrote:
If answer E would be - they can potentially devastate homeowners, whose


Will it be correct?


No, it won't be. "Can" is already stating a possibility so "can potentially" is redundant.

Hope this helps.

Google returns millions of results for 'can potentially', and many from reliable sources, too. It does sound a bit redundant, but I doubt GMAT would base a question on this subtle a split.


GMAT prefers concise and clear sentence construction. It may be true in general English, but from the aspect of GMAT it is redundant.
_________________

What gets measured, gets managed

Director
Director
avatar
Joined: 11 Mar 2005
Posts: 718
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 66 [0], given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 09:39
A it is..

You need an independent clause to join a depenedent clause stared with while conjunction.

ISINT THIS QUESTION FROM OG. I HAVE SEEN IT SOMEWHERE...

(A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose
- whose correctly modifies homeowners... and they refer to values(plural subject)
(B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their
- wrong use of their.... OUT... in that is also wordy and used wrong
(C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating, because their
- need IC, their again created ambiguity...
(D) for homeowners, it is potentially devastating in that their
- it is singular and can not refer to VALUES
(E) it can potentially devastate homeowners, whose
- same problem as D
Director
Director
avatar
Joined: 11 Mar 2005
Posts: 718
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 66 [0], given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 11:56
What the heck is going on with you guys?

Himalaya, come on. how can A change the meaning?

B changes the meaning... lets break B

the problem words in this question are THEY and THEIR.

in B, they refer to "property values", and THEIR refer to homeowners,
How is it possible? doesnt sound like their refers to "property values" too.
Moreover, in that their is just unidiomatic, clumsy and wordy.

Noone can beat A..
Director
Director
avatar
Joined: 11 Mar 2005
Posts: 718
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 66 [0], given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 11:58
Ok, I just checked OG, question No 159...

same question..

A is the OA
Senior Manager
Senior Manager
avatar
Joined: 06 Apr 2005
Posts: 349
Location: USA
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 112 [0], given: 1

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 13:42
Hi folks,

A little tantalizing clue. A is not the answer. Ritesh!! I haven't checked the OG yet, but I took this question from ETS Paper Test # 14, and in case any of you happen to have this question paper - the question appears in page 29, Question 22, Section 6.

So continue hacking at the question...
Senior Manager
Senior Manager
avatar
Joined: 06 Apr 2005
Posts: 349
Location: USA
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 112 [0], given: 1

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 14:41
riteshgupta1 wrote:
Ok, I just checked OG, question No 159...

same question..

A is the OA


Hi Ritesh,
I checked the OG, and you are right, the answer is shown as A. But, according to the ETS #14 test paper, the answer is B. I will be happy if you don't reveal my answer right now, as I would like to see more participation. But, isn't it strange that ETS has two answers to the same question. Thought I would ping you, for your thoughts.
SVP
SVP
User avatar
Joined: 05 Apr 2005
Posts: 1712
Followers: 5

Kudos [?]: 79 [0], given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 15:03
Darth_McDaddy wrote:
riteshgupta1 wrote:
Ok, I just checked OG, question No 159...

same question..

A is the OA


Hi Ritesh, I checked the OG, and you are right, the answer is shown as A. But, according to the ETS #14 test paper, the answer is B. I will be happy if you don't reveal my answer right now, as I would like to see more participation. But, isn't it strange that ETS has two answers to the same question. Thought I would ping you, for your thoughts.


sorry Darth_McDaddy,

I also checked the answer, it is A, not B. ritesh is correct here...
you also pls make sure and confirm the OA.
Senior Manager
Senior Manager
avatar
Joined: 06 Apr 2005
Posts: 349
Location: USA
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 112 [0], given: 1

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 15:53
Darth_McDaddy wrote:
riteshgupta1 wrote:
Ok, I just checked OG, question No 159...

same question..

A is the OA


Hi Ritesh,
I checked the OG, and you are right, the answer is shown as A. But, according to the ETS #14 test paper, the answer is B. I will be happy if you don't reveal my answer right now, as I would like to see more participation. But, isn't it strange that ETS has two answers to the same question. Thought I would ping you, for your thoughts.


Sorry folks!! This is a classic case of Brain freeze. I meant to PM Ritesh, but I ended up posting my reply and thus revealing the answer. The OG says the answer is A. The ETS Test paper #14, says the answer is B. So, I am in a bit of a quandry. I think, we can safely settle with A for now. Please feel free to add your inputs.

Thanks for participating!!
Senior Manager
Senior Manager
avatar
Joined: 30 May 2005
Posts: 373
Followers: 1

Kudos [?]: 11 [0], given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 18:24
OA is A. The only competition to A is C but in C the "their" at the end has no clear antecedent.
SVP
SVP
avatar
Joined: 14 Dec 2004
Posts: 1693
Followers: 3

Kudos [?]: 145 [0], given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 07 Aug 2005, 20:46
Darth_McDaddy,
I strongly feel 'B' can't be the answer, 'their' in the choice spoils the game.
It has to be 'A'.

-Vivek
Senior Manager
Senior Manager
avatar
Joined: 06 Apr 2005
Posts: 349
Location: USA
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 112 [0], given: 1

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 08 Aug 2005, 07:36
Yes Vivek, We can settle with A. Though, I still find it strange that ETS Test#14, got the answer wrong.
Director
Director
User avatar
Joined: 08 Jul 2004
Posts: 596
Followers: 2

Kudos [?]: 234 [0], given: 0

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 19 Aug 2005, 14:27
Darth_McDaddy wrote:
While depressed property values can hurt some large investors, they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity —in many cases representing a life's savings—can plunge or even disappear.

(A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose
(B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their
(C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating, because their
(D) for homeowners, it is potentially devastating in that their
(E) it can potentially devastate homeowners, whose

I don't have the OE, Please give me a detailed explanation for your answers.


It is only between A and C. Can and potetial usage is redundant.
Now in A: they can refer to large invesotors or property values.
In C: their is referring to what? to they? Large investors? property values?
Ritesh, can you please elaborate on this?
S
_________________

Regards, S

Re: While depressed property values can hurt some large   [#permalink] 19 Aug 2005, 14:27

Go to page    1   2    Next  [ 34 posts ] 

    Similar topics Author Replies Last post
Similar
Topics:
1 While depressed property values can hurt some large investor goodyear2013 1 01 Mar 2014, 13:21
1 While depressed property values can hurt some large sdas 2 19 Mar 2013, 22:42
While depressed property values can hurt some large umeshpatil 0 06 Oct 2016, 09:04
8 While depressed property values can hurt some large gmatter0913 4 25 Feb 2017, 23:27
52 While depressed property values can hurt some large amitdesai16 28 06 Oct 2016, 09:04
Display posts from previous: Sort by

While depressed property values can hurt some large

  new topic post reply Question banks Downloads My Bookmarks Reviews Important topics  


GMAT Club MBA Forum Home| About| Terms and Conditions| GMAT Club Rules| Contact| Sitemap

Powered by phpBB © phpBB Group and phpBB SEO

Kindly note that the GMAT® test is a registered trademark of the Graduate Management Admission Council®, and this site has neither been reviewed nor endorsed by GMAC®.