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WP Carey Profile Evaluation Thread: Post Profile Eval Requests Here

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New post 09 Sep 2018, 23:35

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This thread is the master profile evaluations thread for Arizona State MBA applications only. We do not want random profile evaluation threads everywhere on the forum. This will help people get some consolidated (and free :P ) advice from consultants and help others learn as well.

Post your profile here if you want!

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Background and nationality
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Work experience and leadership
Community and others
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Background and nationality: Hello, I am Hitarth Parmar from Gujarat, India. I work as Senior Officer (Projects) on client side in laying of MBBVPL project spanning across Andhra Pradesh and Telangana in a consortium of GSPL, IOCL, BPCL and HPCL.
Undergrad Information: B.E. Electrical from L.D. College of Engineering, Ahmedabad, Batch of 2013. Passed with 7.64 CGPA.

GMAT: Q - 48, V - 39, Overall - 710, AWA - 5, IR - 8. Retaking on 20.09.2018

Work experience and leadership: 62 months, 51 months in Operations & Maintenance and 11 months in Projects.

Have comprehensive experience in Pipeline industry, having been associated with both Operations & maintenance and with Projects
Have accomplished negotiations related to design flaws in system, saving costs to the company
Have modified maintenance procedures in the company and universalised them, thereby improving system efficiency
Experience on SAP-Plant maintenance module, thereby improving vendor management

Community and others: First captain to lead my district's table tennis team into knockout stages of the school games tournament
Winner of Table Tennis national level team event during college
Represented college in Table Tennis at university level tournaments
Sponsorship committee member during techfests
Event manager during techfest for Quiz event

Post MBA goals - Short term: Projects/Operations Consulting; Long term: Strategy Consulting

Questions:
1) What are the chances of scholarship?
2) What are the prospects for someone with Oil & Gas background trying to venture into Operations/Projects consulting, especially for an international student?
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New post 11 Sep 2018, 00:00
Hello Heisenberg12

You have a decent profile for Carey. GMAT, work ex, extracurricular all looks solid.
If you put together a decent application, you are good to go.
Make sure you touch upon all the crucial admission factors (read here) and connect it with your career goals (you may read here)

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Background and nationality: Hello, I am Hitarth Parmar from Gujarat, India. I work as Senior Officer (Projects) on client side in laying of MBBVPL project spanning across Andhra Pradesh and Telangana in a consortium of GSPL, IOCL, BPCL and HPCL.
Undergrad Information: B.E. Electrical from L.D. College of Engineering, Ahmedabad, Batch of 2013. Passed with 7.64 CGPA.

GMAT: Q - 48, V - 39, Overall - 710, AWA - 5, IR - 8. Retaking on 20.09.2018

Work experience and leadership: 62 months, 51 months in Operations & Maintenance and 11 months in Projects.

Have comprehensive experience in Pipeline industry, having been associated with both Operations & maintenance and with Projects
Have accomplished negotiations related to design flaws in system, saving costs to the company
Have modified maintenance procedures in the company and universalised them, thereby improving system efficiency
Experience on SAP-Plant maintenance module, thereby improving vendor management

Community and others: First captain to lead my district's table tennis team into knockout stages of the school games tournament
Winner of Table Tennis national level team event during college
Represented college in Table Tennis at university level tournaments
Sponsorship committee member during techfests
Event manager during techfest for Quiz event

Post MBA goals - Short term: Projects/Operations Consulting; Long term: Strategy Consulting

Questions:
1) What are the chances of scholarship?
2) What are the prospects for someone with Oil & Gas background trying to venture into Operations/Projects consulting, especially for an international student?

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Background and nationality : Indian
Undergrad Information : CGPA : 3.4 in Computer Science Engineering
GMAT: 680
Work experience and leadership : 5 years. Currently working on dual role as Cloud Optimization lead where managing a team of 5 associates and PMO Finance where I am managing project finance side.
Community and others : Worked in ngo for 6 months
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New post 11 Sep 2018, 00:24
Hello Pushpak21

Since your GMAT is slightly on the lower side (not a deal breaker for Carey, but does not strengthen your case either) it will help further if you can tell more around the nature of your work experience- what are your key achievements, how has been your career progress etc.
Same goes for extracurricular activities too- working at an NGO for 6 months is too limited an information. What do you do here, why do you do it, what has been your contribution or impact here, what sort of NGO are we talking about. Qualitative details matter more than a list of activities. What other extracurricular are you involved in? You may want to read here on what factors matter in a profile.
Lastly, though you have touched upon your career goals briefly, not sure how these tie in with your past experience and transferable skills. If you can seamlessly link the past to your future goals and a need of an MBA only then you will be able to present a strong narrative. See if reading here helps.

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Background and nationality : Indian
Undergrad Information : CGPA : 3.4 in Computer Science Engineering
GMAT: 680
Work experience and leadership : 5 years. Currently working on dual role as Cloud Optimization lead where managing a team of 5 associates and PMO Finance where I am managing project finance side.
Community and others : Worked in ngo for 6 months
Post MBA goals : Consultant (SCM or strategy management)

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Hi MBAkarma

I have started my professional career as server architect after which I moved to Center of Excellence where I worked on Identity and Access management domain, leading me to become Subject Matter Expertise and while working as SME I presented solutions to clients which helped organization to win multiple projects of 1.2 Millions $ worth. After that I moved to work as Project Management Officer- general management (2 associates reported me) where I worked on end to end requirement of project with multiple project managers, managed, finance of 10 Millions $,also created FP&A which lead to post a 35% gross margin and created contract documents . Currently, I am working as PMO Finance where I am managing finances of 40 Million $ along with vendor management and as Cloud optimization lead where I am managing a team of 5 associates where primary goal is to proactively come up with the solution to rightsize the environment so as to reduce the cost related to unused assets and reduce the man power cost required by using automation. Till now we have successfully automated couple of processes which reduced the manpower cost by 70% and increased the gross margin by ~1.2% for the quarter.Now, I am working on a process where dynamically environments will be monitored and a rightsizing solution will be provided and after approval (only human intervention) it will implement the solution.

I have received 2 promotions and won best performer of the quarter for consecutive times.

It was an NGO which worked on causes such as education, environment, animals and community welfare. I worked on education part in which we gave Art classes to underprivileged schools. We as a team worked on establishing art classes curriculum for schools. And I arranged an "Story Telling Event" for all age groups which was part of Literary domain in one of the inter house competition for orphanage home's.
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New post 13 Jun 2019, 08:53
Hi ,
can someone please evaluate my profile for WP carey?

Native: Indian , Male , 32
Back ground: Merchant Navy, started my career in 2009 at the rank of Trainee Marine Engineer, appeared for promotional exam conducted by DG shipping india , became 4 th engineer and now serving as 3rd
Engineer promoted based on the sailing experience, VLCC oil Tankers.
Current employer: wallem shipmanagement hongkong
International experience: 15 countries atleast; USA, china, Vietnam, Venezuela, Ukraine, Kuwait, Iraq, UAE, Southafrica,
Singapore, Turkey, south Korea, Indonesia, Netherlands,Egypt
Sailing experience: 5 years aprrox( our contractual sailing period lasts for 6+-1 months per year , so from 2009 to
2018 in 10 years we get sailing experience exactly half of it )
Academics: B.tech marine engineering (MIT,pune) 62%( ~2.3 gpa)
12th( CBSE,KV) 76%, topper in Math with 96 in school
10th (CBSE, KV) 75%, math 90/100, science 89/100, english 78/100
GMAT 710 (V39, Q49)
Extra curricular: Guitar player, performed on few stage shows
Worked with NGo back in 2011, In 2012 i reactivated my mothers dormant NGO and have been
contributing ever since
Hiker,Trekker(went on solo expedition to himalayas, mostly to places untouched by human
presence)
Working out to summit the Everest.
college Volleyball and Badminton Player.
MBA: Supply chain demand and logistics,
future goals: i want to enter in the procurement sector for Multinationals shipping and Non shipping sector. Also
i want to establish a regular logistic route to supply products available to every other part of world in
to remote places in countires such as,indonesia,india(north-
north east), and Some places in Africa and south america.

Thank you!
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