could grade my essay, please
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13 Feb 2012, 11:39
I began one week ago to write about 6 essays,
in the beginning I wrote 200 words, but I improved in one week to write this essay , advice, do like me
reading 21
listening 20
but I am so sad and concerned I don't know about speaking and writing
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do you agree with the following statement? people behave differently according to their clothes.
there is misspelling I know but I keep them to grade me
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I strongly agree, people act with different way according to their clothes. I know there is [highlight]deversity[/highlight] point of view about this idea. some people believe, clothes never affect personal behavior. So, I will [highlight]demonstrat[/highlight] my opinion with details and examples.
Firstly, when people wear nice clothes they will feel with [highlight]happines[/highlight]. consequently, this happy feeling will [highlight]imapct[/highlight] them. If one was happy he will give money for poor people and so on, on the contrary, when one feel bad will do not care about helping the others. Generally, these [highlight]feeling[/highlight] which has been resulted of clothes will compose their behavior.
Secondly, we know clothes might is expression of [highlight]though[/highlight]. When some one wear T-shirt with words like do not smoke. he absolutely will not smoke, even if his father chose this T-shirt for him. As result, wearing clothes help to do good or bad acts.
Thirdly, when some poor boy wears old and cheap clothes usually he will feel shy, Also, the sons of high class, they wear expensive clothes, as we know many of the reach guys [highlight]feel with proud[/highlight]. I [highlight]new[/highlight] some poor friend and close to me that his much absence because he feel shy of his clothes. Obviously, wearing expensive clothes or cheap clothes will affect the poeple.
To summarize, as i explained people might wear ugly or nice clothes then they will feel relieve or not consequently, they will act acordingly. people might clothes marked with ideas or advice then they will respect these ideas, so, they will apply them in their life. people might wear clothes keep up with mode or not then they will feel shy or the opposite, therefore they will be social and effective or not. Above of all, we should not to convict people depending their apearance, people's doing is the judgment
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