Hello B-School Ambassadors,
I was wondering if any of you would be so kind as to look at a few of my essays and let me know whether I am on the right track. I'm applying to MSF programs, which aren't quite the same as an MBA persay, but I would just like feedback on how "personal" the statement of purpose should be, and whether the one that I have is too formal, not personal enough, too personal, etc. I'm not looking for grammar help (although that's appreciated as well), but more of an overall critique.
If anyone is willing to help, I would appreciate it very very much! I thought it would be very helpful to get feedback from students that have already been accepted.
Thanks in advance!