I wouldn't bother mentioning the other schools. Depending on the school, the admissions office probably won't be impressed by an argument that says "If you give me money, I'll come."
What else do you know about the fellowship? Does it g ive you access to certain alumni or professors? Often these programs will involve more than money. If it gives you these special opportunities, focus on those more than the money.
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