E suffers from misplaced prepositional phrase modifer:
indications on Earth of sunspot cycles --> indications of sunspot cycles on Earth
The second version is better as it properly gives the specific about the noun BEFORE the location of the noun. The order of modifiers should be specific about noun then location of noun as conveyed by prepositional phrases(which also act as adjectives)
Consider these 2 sentences from Ernest Hemingway from webster online grammar dictionary:
https://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/phra ... reposition
The hills
across the valley of the Ebro were long and white. On this side there was no shade and no trees and the station was between two lines
of rails in the sun
As you can see, the
specifics about the noun comes
before adjectives for
location
A is wrong it has improper pronoun reference:
among
the surest indications of sunspot cycles are believed to be
the rate that trees grow
simplifies to:
among Xs are believed to be Y.
Let's take a simple example and you will see how illogical this is:
among the best students are believed to be Alex
the above sounds as if "the best students" are Alex himself
Instead, this should be rephrased as:
Alex is believed to be among the best students