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# Beatrix Potter

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Beatrix Potter [#permalink]  14 Aug 2007, 10:37
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

A Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives
B In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
C In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
D Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book llustrations
E Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her arratives and

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Re: Beatrix Potter [#permalink]  14 Aug 2007, 11:16
vay wrote:
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

A Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives
B In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
C In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
D Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book llustrations
E Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her arratives and

I assumed that the "end" comma is not underlined.
Due to the "end" comma, there should be a modifier at the end that makes the sentence flow. D seems to be the only choice here.
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Re: Beatrix Potter [#permalink]  14 Aug 2007, 23:05
vay wrote:
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

A Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives
B In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
C In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
D Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book llustrations
E Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her arratives and

C sounds right to me...
Re: Beatrix Potter   [#permalink] 14 Aug 2007, 23:05
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