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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 26 Sep 2009, 10:48
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162. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, [#permalink] New post 26 Sep 2009, 17:53
Verb problem: coordinating and capitalized (two different tenses)
So A & B is wrong.
between C, D , E : c sounds right.

D : wrong place of modifier "In the illustrations".
Basically there are two modifiers.
1. Illustrations - which are carefully coordinated with her narratives by Beatrix
2. Beatrix potter, who capitalized on her...and (also coordinated illustrations)

You might think about mixing it. Like Beatrix coordinated illustrations and also capitalized it but its wrong.

E. again wrong place of modifier
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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Verb parallelism
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations Modifies Beatrix Potter
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and --- Pronoun reference/ comma should be preceded by "and".No reference to "Them" if in her book illustrations is removed.

Correct answer is C
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, [#permalink] New post 05 Oct 2009, 02:42
imo -d , modifier is place close to both side, good balanced.
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, [#permalink] New post 31 May 2011, 05:42
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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Verb parallelism
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations Modifies Beatrix Potter
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and --- Pronoun reference/ comma should be preceded by "and".No reference to "Them" if in her book illustrations is removed.

Correct answer is C


This is good explanation than that of official guide.

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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 16 Dec 2011, 11:33
Shouldnt C be incorrect ? I read somewhere that after comma we cant use "which"..It can be used after a noun, right ?
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[quote="sagarsabnis"]162. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,them is ambiguous here
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter improper modifier carefully coordinating...........
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter Correct
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations mispalced modifier
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
in her book illustrations is an essential modifier
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 06 Apr 2012, 04:15
Good example to work with modification errors.

All answers except have clearly got modification errors.

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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 22 Sep 2012, 22:59
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Good example to work with modification errors.

All answers except have clearly got modification errors.


Dont you think E is a fragment?

Beatrix Potter, In her book illustrations, (Verb required) carefully coordinated.....
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 27 Sep 2012, 18:10
GetThisDone wrote:
Good example to work with modification errors.

All answers except have clearly got modification errors.


Please explain more, thank you.
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 18 Sep 2013, 02:28
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potte



I agree that C has a correct placement of the modifiers, BUT it has a pronoun problem.

" her and she" do not have an obvious referent.



anyone can explain that part?????

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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 01 Nov 2013, 06:44
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162. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and




As per OG in A & B How "carefully coordinating illogically modifies illustrations" ?
to modify illustration it should be followed by without a comma.
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 01 Nov 2013, 11:20
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Hi there,

Thanks for posting your query here. :-)

In this sentence, since there is no clause preceding the verb -ing modifier, the phrase 'carefully coordinating them with her narratives' is modifying the prepositional phrase 'in her book illustrations'. Hence, the modification is illogical.

I hope this helps to clarify your doubt! :-)

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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 07 Jan 2014, 01:47
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162. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and



C) the inessential clause creates no problem, actually it's even using past participle which is in accordance to "capitalized", and all other options have a bunch of errors. So C is correct.
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 03 Apr 2014, 21:35
My query might be illogical but here it is.

In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

Option (B). what is the issue?

'In her book illustrations' is a prepositional phrase and we can't modify the SUBJECT inside the prepositional phrase. So, what I perceived from the sentence is that

'carefully coordinating them with her narratives' modifies Beatrix Potter and 'In her book illustrations' also modifies Beatrix Potter.

However, it is the placement of PP that is too far from what it modifies.

Can anyone comment on this since per the OE from OG

B Phrase carefully coordinating... illogically
modifies the noun that immediately
precedes it: book illustrations; Potter, not the
illustrations, did the coordinating.

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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 05 Apr 2014, 21:24
Hi TGC.,

In option B, there are two modifiers following each other and they both modify Beatrix Potter and this can be confusing and so it is better to avoid such a strcuture.

In the right answer choice "C", "which she carefully coordinated with her narratives" modifies "In her book illustrations" and "in her book illustrations" modifies "Beatrix Potter" and so structure is much clearer.

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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 12 Apr 2014, 06:00
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

Meaning: BP capitalized on her keen observation and love of natural world in her book illustrations by carefully coordinating illustrations with her narratives.

POE:
In Option A) BP is far away from modifier “carefully coordinating them with her narratives”.

Option B) “In her book illustrations” tells us where the BP capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world. But “them” is not clearly specified.

Option D) what is coordinated with her narratives is not mentioned. The sentence sounds as if BP is coordinated with her narratives.

Option E) The cause and effect is removed by making it as a list.

I am not able to differentiate Option B) with Option C)

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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 12 Jun 2014, 20:15
Can anyone explain below OE taken from OG for option (A):

A The participial phrase does not clearly
modify the noun in the preceding phrase;
use of the present progressive form of the
verb confuses the sequence of time with
respect to the past tense of the main verb
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Re: Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully [#permalink] New post 02 Jul 2014, 19:10
egmat wrote:
Hi there,

Thanks for posting your query here. :-)

In this sentence, since there is no clause preceding the verb -ing modifier, the phrase 'carefully coordinating them with her narratives' is modifying the prepositional phrase 'in her book illustrations'. Hence, the modification is illogical.

I hope this helps to clarify your doubt! :-)

Regards,
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Hi Meghna,

Can the verb -ing modifier - 'carefully coordinating them with her narratives' modify the clause that follows it - 'Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world'

Thank you!
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