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I agree. I don't think either of these work. In the first one, you could come off as describing another culture as lazy (that sort of judgmentalism is the opposite point of the essay), the second one is more of an observation about people around you, rather than something you yourself experienced. Think of a time that you really felt uncomfortable or out of place because of some cultural difference you were experiencing. Then write about how you came to terms with it. Did you come into a new culture and commit a social faux pas? Did someone accidentally offend you? Did some cross-cultural experience rattle your world view? Did the behavior of a different culture make you really uncomfortable?
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Honestly, I wouldn't use either for the INSEAD essay.

INSEAD's main focus is on international experiences. For this reason, I'd think that they'd like to hear about your experiences in a new culture - a new country among people different to those you live around and how you were able to adjust and adapt (this could be work-related obviously). What did you learn from them? How are they so different.

I'm pretty sure they don't want to hear about business cultures unless they are different due to the ethnic and traditional cultures of its people.

I would talk about your experience in Tokyo, but try to make it a little deeper than the difference in people's drinking habits. :)


Agree with Hosam here.

For us Indian techies, facing situation one is a no-brainer. Majority of techies from India would face a similar situation.
I personally think that you should use this essay to highlight how you beacme a well-rounded individual not only how you became a well-rounded employee.
Think about some other personal experiences in Tokyo or for that matter in India itself (remember India is a huge country) and talk about it.
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Also, look at this essay as an opportunity to show that you're the kind of person who who is not scared to put himself/herself into unique and unfamiliar situations. One of the essay purposes is to show that you are indeed "international." I really struggled with this essay because I'm not the kind of person who typically experiences the "shock" part of culture shock. I ended up writing about a vacation experience where I was unfamiliar with certain local customs and ended up offending my hosts (indigenous people in a third world country). Then I wrote about what I learned from these people and and the experience as a whole and how it shaped my "international" interactions from there on out. I never felt that it was great essay, but it worked well enough.
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Thanks every body
Yes both examples are not so appropriate

I agree
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Thanks a lot everybody dukes, hosam, diesgmat, jaynayak, dahiya
I had a small doubt when I had began to write the essay
and now I am quite glad that I posted my doubt as a query
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hosam wrote:
Honestly, I wouldn't use either for the INSEAD essay.

INSEAD's main focus is on international experiences. For this reason, I'd think that they'd like to hear about your experiences in a new culture - a new country among people different to those you live around and how you were able to adjust and adapt (this could be work-related obviously). What did you learn from them? How are they so different.

I'm pretty sure they don't want to hear about business cultures unless they are different due to the ethnic and traditional cultures of its people.

I would talk about your experience in Tokyo, but try to make it a little deeper than the difference in people's drinking habits. :)

This is what I told in my reply to another of your post.
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hosam wrote:
Honestly, I wouldn't use either for the INSEAD essay.

INSEAD's main focus is on international experiences. For this reason, I'd think that they'd like to hear about your experiences in a new culture - a new country among people different to those you live around and how you were able to adjust and adapt (this could be work-related obviously). What did you learn from them? How are they so different.

I'm pretty sure they don't want to hear about business cultures unless they are different due to the ethnic and traditional cultures of its people.

I would talk about your experience in Tokyo, but try to make it a little deeper than the difference in people's drinking habits. :)

This is what I told in my reply to another of your post.


I agree now i am understanding how the culture shock essay should look like
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