No expert...but a quick reply
The revenue of Goldman is higher than those of its competitors.
It is in correct. Here you are comparing comparing revenue of Goldman and others, and revenue is singular so you can use that or repeat the the word which is compared.
The revenue of Goldman is higher than that of its competitors
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The revenue of Goldman is higher than the revenue of its competitors
(This is from dealbook, which has a sentence that says: "And Goldman’s advisory business is likely to exceed $8 billion in net revenue this year, exceeding by more than one-third those of its nearest competitors, JPMorgan Chase and Morgan Stanley.")
Where did you come across this??I am quite certain it is not a GMAT Material
This is based on a question from gmatprep about dinosaur metabolism. I'm also curious if "Some scientists contend that many species of dinosaurs had metabolisms more like warm-blooded mammals than cold-blooded reptiles'" works.
I am sorry but this doesn't work and the
MGMAT instructor is spot on.
Some scientists contend that the metabolisms of many species of dinosaurs were more more like a warm-blooded mammals' than a cold-blooded reptiles'.
This is absolutely correct and has parallel structure. It is one of the ways by which you can make the sentence parallel.Note that possessive should be used correctly.
Other option
Some scientists contend that the metabolisms of many species of dinosaurs were more more like those of warm-blooded mammals than those of cold-blooded reptile.
This makes that sentence a bit awkard and wordy but is correct.
It will do you no harm to just keep in mind that pronoun should refer to only antecedent(Antecedent must exisit), Pronoun should agree in number with antecedent and Pronoun and Antcedent should make sense.
ATB