kittu wrote:
kittu wrote:
kegewe wrote:
Hey, got dinged here, so I'm now 1 and 1, for interview invites. Keep on truckin
Can anyone take a look at my slides and provide me with some feedback?
PLEEEESE!!
Boy...you have a Wharton invite and a Booth ding!!...Thats kinda unusual for me to know!
Btw..I just took a look at your ppt. Now, I am no expert, so please take my words with a pinch of salt. Here is what I think of the ppt:
1. Slide 1 is completely wasted in making a cover sort of thing. With only 4 slides of space, may be it could have done a better job. That being said, it is not a make or break act as I have seen successful ppts with 3 slides too.
2. The PPT talks about TECHNOLOGY...and not YOU!! Ideally, you should have used this space to tell them about yourself. While the layout and design of the ppt is neat and clean, I think it really lacked content. It tells nothing about you at all.
Just my 2 cents.
First off, congrats on the interview invite to Wharton!
I completely agree with point 2. The slides should be about you, which should implicitly or explicitly demonstrate how you will benefit the Booth community. It should make the reader say: "I want this person as a classmate," and the reader should be able to provide specific reasons that are compelling and differentiated. Even more challenging but potentially more impactful is if your story demonstrates personality traits--intellectual curosity, sense of humor, community service-oriented, etc.--and makes you come alive as a person.
Technology as an overall theme is fine, but this should be a secondary focus (primary focus should be you) and must include a stronger connection to Booth. I think this connection only comes up in a paragraph on the third slide, and this mention isn't specific (maybe you talked about it in more detail in your other essays). Are there tech clubs at Booth that you plan to join and have big plans for? Any tech conferences at Booth you want to help organize? Etc.