loserunderachiever wrote:
Rumikido3 wrote:
During the early 1890s, while at the same time a student, Willa Cather had written theater and music reviews that were often uncompromising in their criticisms.
A) During the early 1890s, while at the same time a student, Willa Cather had written
B) While a student in the early 1890s, Willa Cather wrote
C) Willa Cather had written, while as a student in the early 1890s,
D) Willa Cather wrote, as she was a student in the early 1890s,
E) While a student in the early 1890s, Willa Cather became known for her
This is also a 800score question.. I will appreciate your analysis.
Well , I'm still not convinced with B as an answer , as all the newbies have posted their analysis , most of them looks like an odd guess.
Any experts on this ? Application of while in option B ? is it making sense ?
The intention of the question-writer is that "while" indicates that two things happen simultaneously ("While eating his weight in burritos, Charlie was happy."). And that's completely fine.
However, you'll want to take this one with a huge grain of salt, since it's a non-official question. Some of you are probably tired of hearing me say this, but the GMAT spends between $1500 and $3000 developing each individual GMAT question, and even the best test-prep companies can't compete with that. And this one just doesn't quite feel like a GMAT question to me.
The use of "while" (indicating two simultaneous events) is perfectly acceptable in (B), but "while" can also be a synonym for "although" -- so the exact meaning of "while" in (B) is arguably a little bit confusing, and I'm not sure that you'd see an official GMAT question with this issue. So don't worry about this one too much.
I hope this helps!