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Hi Oasis GC [#permalink]

30 Aug 2012, 07:20

I have more than just get my profile evaluated from you. I need personal advice from you regrading my MBA application. Plz check my PM. I know u wud be having tons of workload but I wud be really grateful if u lend me a personal advice + a professional one.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

02 Sep 2012, 22:11

Dear Oasis,
Thank you for your help. Your offerings are amazing.
As a non-English speaker, I am more concerned about my English expression in my essays.
I would love to get essays reviewed. Any feedback about my profile is also more than welcome.
I will send my profile and essays via PM to you shortly. Could you please evaluate them?

Thank you very much.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

04 Sep 2012, 11:38

Hi Oasis,

Not sure if you are still offering this service - it's truly generous of you. Would you be able to review my profile for doctoral programs? Sending you a PM.

Thanks!

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

04 Sep 2012, 19:58

Hi OasisGC,
I'm sure you are pretty busy with all the review requests. I sent you a PM and would love to get mine reviewed too.

BTW, hope you had a good long weekend

Thanks,
Kivu

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

05 Sep 2012, 12:33

Hey Oasis GC,

sent you my 2nd round of essay-evaluation as your first input was awesome.

Looking forward to hearing from you!!

BR
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

05 Sep 2012, 12:54

I still have not heard anything back from Oasis, he must be very busy since the new cycle starts

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

11 Sep 2012, 13:07

Very constructive feedback. Highly recommend for appliants. Oasis is doing a great job :D

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

11 Sep 2012, 13:57

Oasis

Can I ask you for a brief feedback in case your workload is high these days? My deadline is this saturday

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

12 Sep 2012, 00:06

Hi, I'll be sending across my profile shortly for review. Thanks for this awesome service!

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

15 Oct 2012, 10:18

Thanks very much for reviewing my essays and helping me to get in my dream school

I am not sure if u remember reviewing my essay and suggesting modifications, but that patience has really paid

thanks

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

15 Oct 2012, 11:09

Oasis, I am also interested in your review. Many thanks in advance.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

26 Oct 2012, 11:29

hi

I want to thank you again since your inputs helped me craft great essays that helped me get into my desired school. I was afraid to apply since my GMAT was lower than the average GMAT of the school, but the efforts have paid

I am really impressed with such unconditional support.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

30 Oct 2012, 03:51

Oasis

I am also interested in a review. However I am only in the preliminary stage at the moment so will just have a brief profile.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

31 Oct 2012, 04:39

amazing offer Oasis, are you still actively reviewing essays or are you too busy?

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

31 Oct 2012, 09:52

Expert Reply

echelon99 wrote:

amazing offer Oasis, are you still actively reviewing essays or are you too busy?

Yes, I do.

Every incoming request is considered on first come first serve basis.

However, I revert faster to those who have immediate deadlines, I hereby request all to explicitly mention the deadline if they have any urgency

A genuine request - the service is free and will remain free forever, but do not mention immediate dates to expedite response.

And last mention - if i fail to revert you in a week, please oblige by giving a reminder since I get a lost of requests and sometimes I may miss one unintentionally though

Thanks

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

31 Oct 2012, 10:06

thank you for the reply. will def be done with second draft in a couple of days and will send you something by the weekend. cheers!

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]

04 Nov 2012, 07:51

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wayahead123 wrote:

Thanks very much for reviewing my essays and helping me to get in my dream school

I am not sure if u remember reviewing my essay and suggesting modifications, but that patience has really paid

thanks

Hello,

Sorry for late reply, congrats for your admit !!

I have helped you represent your candidature. Essay writing must reflect what YOU are. I am glad that this service has helped you.

Thanks for writing to me

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04 Nov 2012, 07:51