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The company's chief executive, whose technological [#permalink]
30 May 2010, 04:48
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The company's chief executive, whose technological expertise, views on the future of the industry, and decision-making style were impressive to the managers who worked with her, was also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose approaches often differed substantially from her own. (A) were impressive to the managers who worked with her, was also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose approaches often differed substantially from (B) impressed the managers who worked with her, also was acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose approaches often differed substantially from (C) was impressive to the managers who worked with her, was also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, that included executives at rival companies, whose approaches were different substantially in comparison to (D) was impressive to the managers who worked with her, also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, who included executives at rival companies, the approaches of whom differed substantially when compared to (E) were an impression to the managers who worked with her, also was acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose approaches were often substantially different from that of
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Re: The company's chief executive, whose technological expertise [#permalink]
30 May 2010, 05:44
IMO A. The choice was between a and b, didn't like 'also was' in B
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Re: The company's chief executive, whose technological expertise [#permalink]
30 May 2010, 17:51
I am going for B, because it uses impressed (one word) instead of were impressive (two words)
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Re: The company's chief executive, whose technological [#permalink]
25 Apr 2012, 07:41
I am going with A and here is why: (A) were impressive to the managers who worked with her, was also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose approaches often differed substantially from (B) impressed the managers who worked with her, also was acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose approaches often differed substantially from (C) was impressive to the managers who worked with her, was also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, that included executives at rival companies, whose approaches were different substantially in comparison to (D) was impressive to the managers who worked with her, also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, who included executives at rival companies, the approaches of whom differed substantially when compared to (E) were an impression to the managers who worked with her, also was acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose approaches were often substantially different from that of
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Re: The company's chief executive, whose technological expertise [#permalink]
25 Apr 2012, 10:56
mirzohidjon wrote: I am going for B, because it uses impressed (one word) instead of were impressive (two words) Yeah it uses active voice instead of passive voice but rest of the sentence is awkward. The company's chief executive also was acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside her firmhence A is correct
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Re: The company's chief executive, whose technological [#permalink]
23 Jul 2012, 22:10
Good question I chose b blindly ! Like said..passive voice is not wrong! Big learning for me! Posted from my mobile device
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