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4. Last spring a Colorado health department survey of
72 playgrounds in private child-care centers found
unsafe conditions in 95 percent of them and they
ranged
from splinters to equipment near collapse.

(A) unsafe conditions in 95 percent of them and
they ranged
(B) conditions in 95 percent were unsafe and
ranging
(C) the ranging of unsafe conditions in 95 percent
of them to be
(D) that 95 percent had unsafe conditions ranging
(E) that 95 percent of them had conditions that
were unsafe; the range was
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good one..!...

I would go for A....

Paul...I know that 'ranging' is a more appropriate word here....but in option D...there is no indication as to what 95% is representing and that made me choose A...(going for the best choice than the right choice)

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D is most concise way of expressing the idea.
More simply put, the sentence can be simplified to: A survey of 72 playgrounds in private child-care centers found that 95 percent had unsafe conditions

The statistics refer to the private child-care centers. "A" is very wordy with "them and they" following each other.
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Thanks Paul..!

Agree that A is wordy and the example that you have quoted does make things clearer but in the context of this sentence I think '95 percent' should have some reference to private child-care centers....

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