An investigative reporter for the New York Times found that minority applicants for spaces in exclusive co-op apartment buildings had
a significantly greater chance of rejection than did white applicants with similar profiles.
Meaning Analysis: A reporter from NY times found that applicants that fall in the minority category who apply for a housing space in apartment buildings had a higher chance of getting rejected than white applicants who share the same profile.
Sentence Structure:An investigative reporter
(subject)(here "investigative" is an adjective modifying "reporter")for the New York Times
(prepositional phrase modifying "reporter")found
(verb)that
(connector)minority applicants
(subject)[color=#f26c4f] (element 1 of comparison)[/color]
("minority" is an adjective modifying "applicants")for spaces in exclusive co-op apartment buildings
(prepositional phrase modifying "applicants")had
(verb) (notice that "had" is used as a verb and not as a helping verb thus it is a simple past tense and not a past perfect tense)a higher chance
(object of the sentence) (higher is the beginning of a comparison marker)of getting rejected
(prepositional phrase modifying "chance")than
(end of comparison marker "higher... than")did
(verb)white applicants (subject)
(element 2 of comparison)with similar profiles
(prepositional phrase modifying "applicants")Quote:
(A) a significantly greater chance of rejection than did
Greater... than is the correct comparison marker. The second element of the comparison is "white applicants" and the placement of the verb "did" before it is completely fine. This is a case in which the subject and the verb are inverted.
Quote:
(B) a significantly greater chance of rejection in comparison with
Greater... in comparison with is an incorrect comparison marker. We can either say "greater... than" or "in comparison with" BUT we cannot say "greater... in comparison with"
Quote:
(C) a great likelihood of a rejection more significant than did
"Greater... than" is the correct comparison and not "great...than". Moreover the structure "of a rejection more significant" makes this sentence structure inferior.
Quote:
(D) a significantly better likelihood of rejection as compared to
"Better...than" is the correct comparison and not "Better... as compared to" Moreover, "Greater... than" would be a preferred comparison marker than "Better... than"
Quote:
(E) a significantly greater chance of rejection than those
The comparison seems fine out here. However, the demonstrative pronoun "those" is unnecessary as it seems to refer to a specific group of "white applicants" and not all "white applicants who share the same profile with the minority". The usage of "those" changes the meaning a bit.
Correct Choice:
(A)