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639. Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem to deny a proper defense to many clients who are charged with crimes.

(A) Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem
(B) Severe and increasing numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies seeming
(C) Severe and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem
(D) Severely and increasingly numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system seeming
(E) Severely and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem

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Re: lylylylyly [#permalink] New post 21 Oct 2009, 14:38
639. Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem to deny a proper defense to many clients who are charged with crimes.

(A) Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem
(B) Severe and increasing numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies seeming
(C) Severe and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem
(D) Severely and increasingly numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system seeming
(E) Severely and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem


IMO C

severe and increasingly numerous are parallel, also pointing to deficiencies that seem is correct
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 10 Nov 2009, 04:55
and why is severe and increasingly and not severly and increasing??

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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 10 Nov 2009, 05:26
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and why is severe and increasingly and not severly and increasing??

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Severe must be parallel is to numerous. Both severe and numerous are adjectives which modify and describe critics.
Increasingly is an adverb which modifies the adjective numerous.

So the sentence is meaning to say critics are both severe and numerous.
How numerous? increasingly numerous.

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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 17 Nov 2009, 02:52
Hi, need your help.
Don't you think that in C THAT changes the noun?
In original sentence it's DEFICIENCIES that seem to deny, but in C it's SYSTEM that seem(s) deny
Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem to deny a proper defense to many clients who are charged with crimes.
(A) Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem
(B) Severe and increasing numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies seeming
(C) Severe and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem
(D) Severely and increasingly numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system seeming
(E) Severely and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem


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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 25 Mar 2010, 22:53
that seem

Here seem is a plural verb and therefore refers to deficincies, which is correct.
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 26 Mar 2010, 23:32
IMO C ... wats the OA ??

Deficiencies is plural , seem is correct ......
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 04 Apr 2010, 03:09
Ayrish wrote:
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Ayrish wrote:
Hi, need your help.
Don't you think that in C THAT changes the noun?
In original sentence it's DEFICIENCIES that seem to deny, but in C it's SYSTEM that seem(s) deny
Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem to deny a proper defense to many clients who are charged with crimes.
(A) Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that seem
(B) Severe and increasing numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies seeming
(C) Severe and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem
(D) Severely and increasingly numerous critics point to deficiencies in the British legal system seeming
(E) Severely and increasingly numerous critics are pointing to deficiencies in the British legal system that seem


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Ayrish,

If you read the MGMAT SC guide, you read in the first chapter (style) that the GMAT always prefers shorter sentences, so you try to keep things simple.

...point to deficiencies in the British legal system, deficiencies that...

For the sake of brevity, you take out the second time deficiencies appear, with the comma. The that still refers to the noun of the clause "deficiencies in the British legal system". The noun here is deficiencies, and system is just part of a big modifier of that noun.

So, deficiencies being plural should be followed by seem, not seems.

Hope it helped!
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 08 Apr 2010, 22:07
Nice explanation YANGSTA8.
I agree with C.
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 13 Apr 2010, 06:02
Myans: A
MyReasoning: noun 'deficiancies' should be repeated before the 2nd clause to avoid ambiguity, which may result if 'that' is used as in C&E without any clear referent.
I understand 'that' refers to immediately preceding noun & moreover the subject of main clause seems to be numerous critics.

blast my reasoning :lol:
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 08 May 2010, 05:54
can someone provide OA for this q plz??

I need to clarify the difference between "severe and increasing" and "severe and increasingly" numerous critics.
which of these is correct in this sentence?


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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 08 Apr 2011, 14:41
This is C for sure...
Severe and increasingly numerous critics..
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to defic [#permalink] New post 16 May 2011, 12:25
+1 C

Severe modifies critics.
Increasingly modifies numerous.
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Re: Severe and increasing numerous critics are pointing to [#permalink] New post 29 Jun 2014, 05:26
But C is changing the meaning, modifier is now modifying the system.
I can't even recall that when I saw such question last time.
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