essaysnark wrote:
Ouch, Swoosh617, that's a real bummer. Your stats are impressive. Columbia cares about the career goals a lot and a complete guess is simply that those maybe weren't presented in as compelling a way as they needed to be (we see that frequently). The good part (?) of the ED app is that you heard back in plenty of time to regroup - an expensive learning experience perhaps, but you can still do a bunch of Rd 1 apps so you're ahead of the game if you look at the big picture.
Still. That hurts and we know it. Sorry to hear that decision.
You clearly have a lot going for you so don't let it get you down.
EssaySnark
Thanks EssaySnark. For what it's worth to others, a quick two second reflection of where I think I fell short:
I'm on the younger side, 24 and have worked for a small hedge fund in LA for a little over two years now. I want to continue working as a buy-side analyst for a more prominent firm and eventually become a portfolio manager and particularly with a Value Strategy firm. So naturally, Columbia had the two things I needed to advance 1) the value investment education, and 2) the network to hedge funds and peer professionals, (all about proximity to experts in this field). Even though I stressed this in my essays, I think, like Snark said, I the lacked the "compelling" aspect to it. I have to go back and review what I could have changed, what i should have overemphasized/underemphasized, and hopefully the upcoming applications will be better. I also think I lacked the "awe-inspiring" quality. If the adcom reviewer was thinking about the candidates in his head, she would have thought about the "out-of-college CEO," "consultant from Country A, now working in Country B," etc. I don't think she would have been able to put that two-word label on me because I didn't have a story that I portrayed.
Also a point to add: I didn't believe it at first, but I do think you get a much better idea of putting together a strong application after your first one. Just the thinking about the whole thing, and looking at the other five schools that I'll be applying to, I feel like the story/theme is much clearer in my head versus what was shown on the Columbia app. If I get denied from the remaining five schools (all of which should be tougher to get into), then I'm still feeling pretty confident about reapplying to Columbia next year.